Yuyusailor13: the fic. is a bit fixed. so enjoy
hiei: on with the fic. serena
yuyusailor13: yes, yes, yes...please enjoy -
hiei: hn...scowls at serena

How it all Began

You're sitting on a stone in the forest under a tree, thinking about what happened before you came there.

Flashback

Your sitting on your bed brush your short/long (choose one)(insert color of hair) hair, when all of a sudden you hear a banging noise on your door. You stand immediately, and stare at the in wide eye terror! Then you hear a voice that you never heard before saying "OPEN the fucking door. Or else, I'll break it door for you!"

(Author/good thing you had the door locked!)

You started to think yourself 'If that guy gets in here I'm sure as hell he'll want to do something to me!' What pulled you out of thought was the sound of a cracking noise. You looked at the door to see its been cracked! This guy was breaking down your door!

Your run towards your window, open it then start to climb out of it. When you've finally reached ground, you started to run towards the park. The man broke through you door and ran to your window, he saw you running, so he started to climb down to run after you. You were running for dear life!

&YOUR POV&

'I CANT BELIEVE THIS IS HAPPENING TO ME!I M BEING CHASE BY A MANIAC, THAT PROBABLY WANTS TO RAPE ME!OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH mom, dad why did you have to go on that meeting, I bet if you were still here this would have never happened! NO I have to be strong...I'll survive...I hope...I have to find someone, or get help, or something!'

AUTHOR POV

You've finally reach the park that said "CHERRY BLOSSOM PARK" in front of it. You look behind yourself and see the man was still on your tail. So, you run inside. The man follows you in. You found a couple of bushes to hind to behind so you hid. The man said "Come out, come out where ever you are...I know you're behind one on these bushes here. Just let me have my fun and your free to go...Let's do this the easy way..."
'YOU THOUGHT TO YOUR SELF 'NO WAY IN HELL I"M GOING TO GIVE HIM MY VIRGINITY!'

So, you just stay there as quiet as can be...all of a sudden you fell something pulling your hair, you look up to see the man with a knife in his left hand. He pushed to the ground and started to rip your shirt off, you screamed ,but it was quickly shut off because the knife was at your throat. He was having his way with you by kissing your breast, licking and biting them.

You couldn't do anything to stop him on the count of the knife on your throat. The man's hand went lower to touch you vagina, you froze. You couldn't take it anymore, the man started to unzip his pants.

(author/he didn't take off your jeans all the way if you know what I mean/)

He positioned himself so that he can enter you. You shut you eyes tightly not wanting to see anything. Then you felt something flying over you, you opened your eyes and saw a flash of black (guess who) knock the man right off of you. You got up and pulled your jeans up and buckled everything up. Your shirt was ripped so you were only in your jeans and bra. You look to the side of you and saw a short boy...no man punching the hell out the man who tried to rape you.

You look at yourself to find a slash on your arm and a couple of scratches on your stomach. When the boy...no man in the black cloak was done he came up to you and just stared into your eyes ,you stared back. You were amazed by the red ruby eyes he had.

He broke the silence "Hn.. You nigens make to much noise I couldn't sleep...you're a onna baka, you couldn't take care of yourself?" got you pissed.
"Listen idiot I almost rape, sorry on disturbing your sleep. I didn't want to be in this situation in the first place" you shot back then said

"Thank you I owe you one if you weren't here I would of gotten raped! My name is (your name) just looked at you then said "Hiei" "Thank-You!" You said happily. Hiei just hned and vanished. You blinked a couple of time then sighed happily "I'm so glad!"

present

You just finish cleaning your wounds with the water next to the tree you were under.

(Author/what will happen next? Review and tell me what you think! This is my first fix, so go easy on me!-)
hiei: hn...bakka onna
serena: be nice hiei!
me and hiei start fight
kurama: review please...-;;;;