This is a writing contest against my older
sister xReicheru-Chanx. Read this story and hers, review whose is better.
Thanks!
Those who have seen Avatar The Last Airbender
will find this amazing.
"ZERO!" The headmaster called. There was a spill of water mixed with blood tablets all over the new $123 white
well, now pink carpet. Zero walked into the living quarters, and was hit in the face by a flying coffee mug.
"What? You don't like it?" He said, rubbing his bruised head. The
headmaster looked as if he might either burst into song or explode. Zero was hoping for
the latter.
"DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH THIS COST! YOU ARE IN BIG TROUBLE MISTER!" The headmaster screamed.
Then he grabbed Zero and dragged him through the hall, down the stairs, and out onto a random meadow with
cherry blossom petals swirling in the wind.
Zero stood up, and found himself wearing a blue toga, a flattish cone hat, and a headband with monkey ears? The weirdest thing though, was the headmaster was standing in front of him, wearing about the same thing.
Something that freaked Zero out was that the headmaster had six arms.
Zero tried to talk, but all that came out was chattery noises. Thoroughly freaked out, he grabbed at the ears and pulled. It really hurt! Zero was appalled.
The six armed headmaster took out six swords - one for each arm - and charged at him.
Zero dived away and took out a sword of his own. They clashed together.
The fighting was weird. There were sheep on either side of them.
The ones on the right cheered, "Zero! Zero! Zero!"
While the ones on the left cheered, "Cross! Cross! Cross!"
Zero was truly frightened. The scene got even weirder. Yuki flew in on a cloud with six arms. She sang, "Chakras! Chakras! Everyone loves chakras!"
Zero had no idea what a chakra was. Rocks circles around him like a humongous snake.
The scene ended as suddenly as it started. Zero was sprawled on the pinkish carpet. The headmaster was leaning over him and looked concerned.
Zero didn't care though. He was just glad that the headmaster didn't have six arms.
"The coffee mug I threw hit you in the head Zero. I threw it harder than intended. Are you okay?"
"I guess..." Zero replied, sitting up.
"Good!" the headmaster said. "'Because you have to go buy me a new carpet."
Editor's Notes by xReicheru-chanx: Goodness, Hana-chan,
you must hate commas, and complex sentences, and correct spelling...
:P