Hey, so this is my first fanfic, Let me know what you think about it please.

There is some violence at the end of this chapter and will be some in later chapters.

I'm sorry for all the changing of Point of view, I'm going to try and stick with one person for longer in the next chapter. I wanted to show everyone's point of view in this first chapter.

I haven't included Eddie as he isn't on Kickin' it anymore :(

Disclaimer - I do not own Kickin' it

Kim POV

Jack, Jerry, Milton and I were in the dojo.
Jerry and Milton were sparring, Jack was fighting a dummy and I was admiring his skills.
All of a sudden Rudy came out of his office with a gigantic smile on his face, I stood up and the others stop fighting to look at him.
"Wassup Rudy?" I asked
"We got accepted to the big tournament this Saturday! That gives us 5 days to prepare!" Rudy said excitedly
"Are you kidding Rudy? That's like the biggest tournament ever! How did you get us in?" Jack asked, walking over to stand next to me.
"The organizer may or may not of seen some footage of you guys at the last tournament!" Rudy smiled.
"That's amazing Rudy, but are you sure were ready? I mean, this Saturday?" Milton asked nervously.
"Yo! Chill out man!" Jerry said putting a hand on Milton's shoulder.
"We need to get in as much training as possible! Milton, Jerry, continue your sparring! Kim start on the practise dummy, Jack, I want to show you a new move I think you will like." Rudy said I walked over to the practise dummy, throwing a few punches and kicks every now and then, my attention was focused on Jack and Rudy. Rudy showed Jack a move that involved him spinning and kicking in the air. It looked quite complicated but I have no doubt Jack will master it.

15 minutes later

Rudy's POV

"Well done Jack, just keep practising that and we will have a massive chance of a medal at this tournament!" Rudy said to Jack.
Milton had been beaten by Jerry twice and Jerry had been beaten by Milton twice, they both looked exceedingly tired and Kim didn't look tired but she didn't look very focused.
"Ok guys, you all look quite tired, how about we go over to Falafel Phil's for a snack then come back and practise our routines for Saturday?" Asked Rudy
"Sounds good" Jack said, the others murmured in agreement. The gang went and got changed then walked over to Falafel Phil's, they all had a quick snack then returned to the dojo.
"Right Guys, get changed quickly then we'll do some sparring." Rudy said clapping his hands together.
The gang all but ran to get changed.
"Jack, Kim you two can spar, Jerry you can get started on your nunchuck routine, Milton set up the boards and try and break your board breaking record!" Rudy said.

Milton's POV

I set up the bricks and put a board on the top to warm up, I made sure I was facing Jack and Kim, their sparring matches were always worth watching.
I could see Jerry watching them whilst trying to swing his nunchucks, this didn't bode will for him as he kept hitting himself in this face. I managed to break 4 boards at once then Rudy noticed I had stopped and Jerry repeatedly whacking himself.
"I can see you two are not fully focused so how about we all sit and watch Jack and Kim" Rudy suggested, Jerry couldn't be happier unless he had pizza or a girlfriend or, ok, so he could be happier...

Jerry's POV

I sat on the bench next to Milton
"GO JACK!" I shouted! "GO KIM"
"Make up your mind Jerry" Milton Said
"Shush you two!" Rudy commanded Kim punched Jack but he blocked grabbing her wrist, we all knew what was coming next!
"You know Kim, you probably shouldn't have done that" Jack said smiling before flipping Kim onto the mats.
"Well done Jack" Kim said getting up from the mats.
"Ok, well done Jack! I'm going to go finish up doing the paperwork for Saturday, I gotta find the parent permission slips again!" Rudy said
"Jerry back to nunchucks, Milton, Boards, Kim, Punching Dummy and Jack practise that move."

An hour and 15 minutes later

Jacks POV

I was finally getting the hang of the new move when Rudy came out of his office.
"I didn't realise the time, sorry guys, you should be heading off, I'll see you back tomorrow after school!" Rudy said "Oh, and Jack, can you get your dad to sign this permission slip, I seem to have misplaced... your other one, I found all the others, I don't understand why yours wasn't with them!"
"That's ok Rudy." I said taking the piece of paper and folding it up, slipping it into my bag before going to get changed out of my Gi with the other guys.
"Bye Rudy, see you tomorrow" We all called as we left the dojo.
I said goodbye to Milton and Jerry as we stepped out of the dojo, they headed their separate ways. I walked with Kim as her house was on the way to mine. We talked as we walked not about anything in particular, when we reached her house, she gave me a big hug and we made arrangements to meet here and walk to school together the next day.
"Bye Kim" I said
"Bye Jack!" She called as I began to walk away done the road, I turned and saw Mrs. Crawford in the doorway waving so I waved back, Kim's mum had become a bit like my second mum since mine passed away.
I walked upto my front door, I paused before opening the door, wondering how I could convince my father to sign the permission form, he wouldn't let me do anything nowadays.
"Is that you boy?" He called as soon as I opened the door. The creak giving me away.
"Yes father!" I called back.
"Get in here! Your late! And you know the consequences of being late don't you Jackson!" I walked towards my dads office, dragging my feet slightly.
I pulled out the permission form and put it in my pocket so I could ask my father as soon as he was in a good mood.
"Boy!" He said as I walked into his room.
"Yes father" I said quietly.
"Your Late!" He shouted even though I was only a few feet away from him.
"I know father, I'm sorry father, it wont happen again father" I said barely audible, I looked towards the floor.
"Speak up!" He shouted slapping me across the face, I hadn't seen him get up and walk over to me.
"It wont happen again father" I said louder this time.
"It better not! Now turn around"
"Please no father!" I pleaded
"You need to learn there are consequences for your actions!" He growled as he picked up his old horse riding whip even though he's never been anyway near a horse. "Take you shirt off boy!" He commanded.
I did as I was told, revealing all the scars from his previous beatings.
There was a loud crack as the whip made contact with my skin.
"AAAHHH!" I screamed
"You know boy, you lucky we live so far away from everyone, otherwise they would hear you scream and you know what happened to your poor mother when she realised what had been happening to you"
He raised the whip high above his head...

So, there you go, my first chapter of my first published fanfiction.

Tell me what you think.

Also, let me know if you want more of the violence and if you want any kick.

If you do how much? A lot or little, just to let you know I'm not very good at writing romance.

I'll try and get the next chapter up soon but I would like at least one review!

Thanks,