Hi guys I hope you like this new story I wanted to write a new one. I will also update my old story. But I have a writer's block on that story sorry. So this one will be totally different from the real story. In this story will not be a songwriter's contest. So Eddie and Loren will meet true a different way. In this story Trent left when Loren was 18 and Loren couldn't handle it that he left her. I you like it let me know and I will keep updating this story.
Chapter 1. Loren's breakdown.
Loren's dad left about two weeks ago. Loren couldn't believe that her dad would do that to her. Trent never said anything to his daughter about him leaving. Loren hadn't hear from her dad sins he left. She was crying in her room. Nora walked over to Loren's room and walked in when she heard that her daughter was crying.
Nora: honey what is going on why are you crying?
Loren: I just can't take it anymore. Dad hasn't call or text me ever sins he left. Why is he doing this to me?
Nora: I wish I know what to say honey but I really don't know why your dad hasn't call or anything.
Loren: I just can't believe that he left. What did I do to him?
Nora: you didn't do anything Lo. He just left because he couldn't handle be a father.
Loren: why he was here all the time and now I'm 18 he left.
Nora: he left because I think he thinks that you are old enough to take care of yourself and you don't need your dad anymore.
Loren: I know I'm old enough to take care of myself but that doesn't mean that I don't need my dad anymore. Why is he thinking I don't need him anymore?
Nora: honey I never wanted to say this but I think you have the right to know.
Loren: what mom?
Nora: your dad never wanted to stay with us ever sins you were born. He never wanted a kid that young. I had to talk him in to stay.
Loren: mom why you never said anything about that.
Nora: because I don't want you to get hurt because of it.
Loren: I can't believe that you did this to me. I had the right to know when I was 16 mom. Now I just can believe you hold this to yourself all the time.
Nora: I'm really sorry I wanted to tell you but I just couldn't.
Loren was so mad at her mom right now. She couldn't believe that she loved her dad while he never wanted her at the first place. She was wondering how she needed to deal with it. She needed to talk to Aid about it. Aid always was there for her if she was feeling sad. So she ran out of her room and out the house and got in her car. Nora was angry at herself for keeping it so long from Loren. She was afraid that her daughter never was going to forgive her for this.
Meanwhile at Eddie's. Eddie was waiting for Chloe to come. He was so glad that everything was going so good between them. He never thought that he could find such a lovely girl as Chloe. He was cleaning his apartment so when Chloe was there she didn't see any gunk on the floor. He knew that Chloe hated that. Eddie was finishing the last bit when there was a knock on the door. He walked over and opens the door to see Chloe standing there.
Eddie: babe I'm so glad you're here. I really missed you. How was the modeling shoot in NY?
Chloe: it was great. But I'm really glad to be back with you.
Eddie: I'm glad to I really missed you in my arms every day. You don't know how I hated it not having you around.
Chloe: I know I had the same feeling, I really hated it to be so far from you. And be able to kiss you and hug you.
Eddie: come on in you don't need to stay in the hallway.
Chloe walked in the apartment and saw that Eddie cleaned it up. She was so glad for that she really hated it when Eddie didn't clean the apartment.
Chloe: so I see you have cleaned you apartment.
Eddie: yeah I know you hate it when everything is lying around.
Chloe: I know I hate it but you live here not me so you don't have to do that only for me.
Eddie: well I need to get use to it because when you are planning moving in with me this place need to be clean.
Chloe: I know but you don't need to worry about it now. We aren't even engaged. And you know I will only moving in when we are married.
Eddie knew that Chloe didn't want to move in with him unless they were married. But he thought he was way too young to get married so he just need to wait for her to move in when they are old enough to get married. Chloe was wondering when Eddie was planning on asking her to marry him. She wanted so bad to be his forever.
Loren was finally ad Aid's place. She knocked on the door and waited for someone to open it. When she saw that Aid opens the door she said hi and gave her a big hug and started to cry. Aid was wondering what was going on this time. She knew she was sad that her dad left but that was two weeks ago. So what was going on this time? She lets Loren in and started to ask her something.
Aid: Loren what is going on why are you crying?
Loren: it's my mom. She told me something today and I'm so mad at her now.
Aid: okay will you tell me what is going on so I can help you?
Loren: my mom capped a secret from me and she told me today what and why my dad left.
Aid: really you know why he left now?
Loren: yeas I know why now. She started crying again and Aid wrapped her arms around her to comfort her. She said to tell her way her dad left. Loren started to talk again.
Loren: my mom told me my dad never wanted me and that he only stayed because my mom asked him or better she begged him to stay for me. And I'm mad at my mom that she never told me when I was 16. I loved my dad and now I found out he never wanted me.
Aid: oh Lo I'm really sorry. I really don't know what to do so you feel better. If you don't mind I need to go to the toilet.
Loren: sure you can go. You don't need to hold it for me.
Aid went to the toilet. While Aid was gone Loren walked over to the kitchen to get something to drink but she stopped when she saw a knife lying on the counter. She took it and started to cut in her wrist. Aid walked in the kitchen and started to scream when she saw all the blood and the knife in the hands of Loren. Loren looked up at Aid and started to cut further she didn't want to stop. Aid was so scared what she saw that she walked out the kitchen and called the police.
Aid: hello officer I don't know who to call for what I saw but I only could think of the police right now.
Officer: what is going on that you called?
Aid: well I was in the bathroom and when I walked back to my friend in the kitchen I saw her cutting her wristed with a knife I really don't know what to do about it.
Officer: okay we will come over and take care of it. Can you tell me the address?
Aid told the officer the address. When she was done she walked back in the kitchen to take the knife away from Loren. She saw that Loren was still cutting her wrist. When she took the knife from Loren she started to ask why she was doing that.
Aid: Lo what are you doing?
Loren: I don't know I only know that it feels so good.
Aid: girl you need help. So please stop and I will clean everything up.
Loren: I don't want to stop I love doing that. But Aid I really am sorry you saw that. I didn't want you to see that.
Aid looks to the wrist from Loren and saw that there were scars. She was thinking that this wasn't the first time that she did that. While she was cleaning up all the blood she saw Loren looking at her wrist. Loren loved to watch how the blood looked. When Aid was done cleaning all the blood on the floor she takes some bandit and took care of all the wounds on Loren's wrist. While she was taping Loren wrist there was a knock on the door. Aid told Loren to keep the bandit on the wounds and that she went to look who was at the door. It was the police. Aid walked with the police to the kitchen where she found Loren cutting again in the other wrist. The police looked at Loren and walked over to her.
Officer: hello I'm Aiden. What's your name miss?
Loren: hi officer I'm Loren why are you guys here?
Aiden: well your friend called us and told what was going on here so we came over to take care of you.
Loren: I don't need someone taking care of me. I'm doing just fine officer.
Aiden: sorry miss you really need to come with us. We need to do something so you can't hurt yourself anymore.
Loren: why I love doing that I don't need help for that.
Aiden: really miss you need to come with us. I'm sorry but you are dangerous for yourself. And we can't have that.
Loren: fine I will come but I don't need help.
The officer makes sure that the wounds were taking care of before they left. Aid stayed at her home. Loren wanted to go home but the officer didn't let her go. She went in the police car and drove off to the police station. When they were at the police station the officer asked the name and the number of Loren's mom. Loren gave the police everything he needed. Aiden called Nora and asked her to come over to the police station. After 15 minutes Nora walked in.
Nora: hello I'm looking for my daughter Loren where is she?
Aiden: hello Nora I'm officer Aiden I will take you to your daughter but first we need to have a little talk.
Nora: okay what is going on why is my daughter at the police station?
Aiden: well ma'am we were called by a friend of your daughter. Aid called us because you daughter was cutting her wrist with a knife and she didn't know what to do about it.
Nora: what my daughter doesn't do that.
Aiden: I'm sorry ma'am but we found your daughter cutting her wrist when we came there. We only are wondering what is going on in her life maybe there is a reason why she is doing that.
Nora was shocked she knew Loren needed to be doing that because her dad left. But she had never thought she would hurt herself because of it.
Nora: well officer her dad left two weeks ago and she found out that her dad never wanted her.
Aiden: okay so I'm sorry to say this but your daughter needs to go to a mental hospital for a while so she can't hurt herself anymore.
Nora: I can understand that's that the best for her right now.
Nora and the officer talked for a little while before they walked over to were Loren was sitting. When Nora walked in the room where Loren was she looked shocked of the blood on the bandit she has on her wrist. She ran over to Loren and wrapped her arms around her. She whispered in Loren's ear that everything was going to be okay. Loren looked at her mom and knew that she was doing something really wrong. But she didn't want to stop doing that.