Okie Doke. My second fic, my first multichapter- please help me.
This is basically a little ficcy in which my friends and I are sent to a certain Parallel Universe. (Hmmm... I wonder which one...)
Just to note, I do have three friends and a brother, and two cute kittens, and a hydrangea bush, and a Physics teacher called Miss. W; plus many other things! Basically, the whole background of this fic is real- except for my friend's names; as they wanted them changed.
I know this is v. short, but it's only a prologue; a taster (mmmm...) there's lots more to come, and soon!
Me, own Star Wars? You're thinking of another Georgie!
On with the story!!!
Prologio!
Hi, I'm Georgie. I was going to say that I'm just a normal teenager; but that wouldn't be true. I'm pretty odd actually. Anyway, (you'll notice I say that a lot- I have an awful habit of sidetracking; like I am now) this is my adventure!
Liz, Abi and Paula (or Smithwick as I like to call her!) were round at my house for the day. We were making ultra-scrummy cookies, and had just packed them away in a tin when my brother came in. Angus thought it would be a great idea to steal the yum-yums. What a weirdo. We chased him out the door and down the drive until he ducked into one of our giant bush-thingies. We followed him in and couldn't see anyone.
"Where's he gone?" Abigail peered into the gloom.
"He must have gone further in, come on." I led us through the twigs and leaves, "This is bigger than it looks!"
"Don't tell me, Tardis bush?" Fizz rolled her eyes sarcastically.
"Well it certainly seems that way," I frowned, "Ow! Stupid twig poked me in the eye!" Paula sniggered.
"Look," said Dearest Abigaila, "He's obviously slipped past us and gone back to the house," she turned round, "He's not in-" she stopped dead.
"What is-"
"Shhh!" she pointed frantically, "Look..."
I turned too, and my breath caught in my throat. Where we should have seen my garden, we could vaguely see the outline of someone in a grey room.
I could faintly hear Angy's amazed voice, "This is so cool!"
"What is that?" Lizzifer whispered.
I started to walk towards the whatever-it-was when Paulo caught my arm, "What do you think you're doing," she hissed, "We have no idea what's in there!"
"My brother's in there," I retorted.
She fell silent.
I pushed the branches aside, took a deep breath, and stepped forward. Anglebert was standing in front of me, staring up in wonder at the man beside him. They were surrounded by- yup, you guessed it- the one and only Jedi Council.
I turned to see Abafer stepping in warily, followed by Lizzie and Paulo.
"What..."
"What did you do Georgie?" accused Eliza shakily.
A deep voice made us turn, "What are you doing here? Who are you?"
'Samuel L Jackson?' I pondered, 'It can't be! Well it ain't Mace either... But there's the Yoda-meister! And he's C.G.I...'
I moved over to Hugo, who was staring round like Santa had come early, "I'm Georgina; this is my brother Angus, and my friends Elizabeth, Abigail and Smi- Pauline." I blushed at my total utter stupidity (it wouldn't be the last time I would do so either).
We were all standing in the middle being in stared down by these scary Jedi Masters- yet another scenario when being tall isn't fabby- when I realised who was staring at me equally hard- yup...
I just couldn't help myself; I indulged in yet more Thinking, 'Oh my word! That's Anakin Skywalker! Less than a foot away! He's even hotter in person... OH CRAP!!!! They can hear your thoughts!!!!!!'
"Correct you are young one," answered Yoda.
Idiot. Idiot. Idiot.
I groaned into my hands. I knew everyone was looking at me- darn! I do love being the centre of attention, but it almost always happens for a bad reason.
I turned away from all the stares to see the strangest sight; the doors of the council chambers were wide open, but in fact led into my hydrangea bush! As I stared at the strange phenomenon, the doors began to close. I had a weird feeling- not a good one. On instinct I dashed to stop the doors, but was too late.
They closed.
As I reached the doors, they opened automatically... to reveal grey corridor.
That was fairly shocking! Will we find a way out? Will we save them all? Will I ever live it down?
Find out- sooner than you think! I already have it drafted, and Chapter Two typed up, so it shouldn't be too long! But I do work faster with reviews... Also, I bake gorgeous brownies (promise!) and there's a guaranteed cyber brownie for all you reviewers!!!
Safe Home!
