Hiya! Here is my tanaka. It's basically an extended haiku, with two intermediary lines of seven syllables in the middle of each stanza. I figured I'd write something nice, considering my last two things were darker. This is complete, unless I feel a random urge to update it. Enough of my rambling. Enjoy, and please leave a review!
The light falls down here
reflecting the bright flowers.
Why have I fallen?
.
The golden flowers offer
the chance of a brand new path.
.
It seems so dark here.
Oh look! A grinning flower!
It seems it will help.
.
I see its mask concealing
its lamenting and despair.
.
When my heart is felled
a beacon of love grants hope.
She brings me to life.
.
She cries tears when I can't see.
Weeping for children she lost.
.
She won't allow me
to leave. Why can she not see?
My fate is outside.
.
My determination comes
to her eyes. I will go now.
.
A camera is
in the bushes. Who would watch
a small child walk?
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I skip ahead, wondering.
This world seems shrouded in pain.
.
A silhouetted
form materializes.
Should I shake its hand?
.
I trust the good in the form.
I was right. It was a friend.
.
I have to hide now.
A conveniently shaped lamp
stands tall. It will work.
.
Two brothers banter with good
will in their pain filled spirits.
.
I stumble onwards.
A box and a snowman haunt
my road to Snowdin.
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Monsters try to harm my soul.
Why do they want to kill me?
.
A bridge stretches long ahead.
My path is always onwards.
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Traps stretch, strung across.
The spikes hang from swinging chains.
I am sure to die.
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He realizes his conscience.
I continue to Snowdin.
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-Comprehensible