Two points of view: first: Man named Jairid Lidet age:23 years old. Birth place: Haven City occupation: rebel sniper
second: Man named Olson Jaggetj age:26 years old Birthplace: Coruscant Occupation: Empire Officier
On The Street.
On the street there were three types of people and a set of laws for each. The first one; The freedom Guards, the second one; the normal every day citizens, and lastly the Gangs.
Jairid had seen his own mix of highs and lows of street life. What with the war with the metal heads being over and Jak a hero of the city, life fir the most part was good.
Then they came - those alien scum b******s - the Empire. The official story did not exist - half the rebuilt city was destroyed when their giant metal vehicle they called a space ship crashed just out side the city. It had hit the wall to the South East - right below where the industrial sector used to be. Then they started pouring out, aliens in white armor that had black eyes and mechanical voices.
They had started their visit by blasting a few dozen people. Since then they had gain control of Haven city and it was only a matter of time before it was the whole world.
He looked up again, then seeing that there was another patrol he stepped to the side and looked down. It was best if in a open area like this he did not look to suspicious. He let them pass, one of the good things that they brought with them was new weapons and technology - but that was the only thing. Jairid looked around again - no storm troopers in sight. Then he went to the alley way that led to a back end. There was a ladder at the back of the alley; it led to the roof.
TEN MINUTES LATER
Once on the roof, Jairid took the sniper rifle out of his back pack and put it together. A big boss man would be coming this way in hover vehicle - it was his job... no privilege to take him out.
OLSON
Olson stood at attention, Commander Itpit would be coming down the street any minute. In what was a hovercar with some kind of engines that were being used by the natives. The natives, what a joke, they were savages living in a dump of a city such as this. But soon, soon they would get off this god forsaken planet - but first they would conquer it! All of it.
They would enslave the inhabitants and use them for cheap labour. There - the hum of anti-gravity, they would soon round the bend. There he was, Commander Itpit - magnificent in his gray suit, with his badges of honor strapped to his chest. Just how a commander should look - just like how I will one day look. As he neared then passed, Olson saluted him. Then suddenly the whizzing of a laser round - it HIT COMMANDER ITPIT! No! They would not dare! They would pay - whoever they were! He was an officer of the Empire! His death would not go unavenged! Then a brilliant overwhelmed Olson and there was darkness.
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