The untold story

hello everyone this is my very first story(YAY!!) and i am so happy that you have chosen to read it .Than you jess and Abi for helping me. Oh and before i forget

disclaimer: I do not own saiyuki Kazuya Minekura does

Blood. All i see is my master's blood. I wish it to stop, plead it to stop but it will not. Why did this have to happen to him. He gave me the best , no the first thirteen years of my life and now he is just lying here in my arms not moving. Blood . I wish t was mine . I could have helped saved him from this evil fate. A lone tear runs down my my face. My whole world goes numb i do not care about the youkai looking around the room , i do not care i just want my muster to get up and say everything is going to be okay. At the door i notice a twisted smile

"You are nothing like me. You are weak" it says just before it disappears. More tears

Ni: Wait wait wait this is way to depressing for some people , they came on fanfiction to laugh

Mcr rules: yeah but this one shows how koryuu (sanzo when he was younger) was felling when his master died

Ni:Oh well, people will not like that. I...i mean WE need to make it funny okay right. Instead of blood maybe we can have flowers and you know the youkai we can have them singing candy man.

Mcr rules: okay...what else?

Ni: that scary twisted face has to go. It should be a clown's face. That is much more better you know

Mcr rules: okay i will change it

flower. All i see are my master's flowers. I wish for them to go away, i plead but they do not . Why did this have to happen my master?. He gave me the best , no the first thirteen years of my life and now he is just lying in my arms not moving. Flowers. I wish they were mine . I could have saved him from this evil fate. A lone jelly bean runs down my face . My whole world goes numb. I can see the youkai behind me singing candy man

"candy man hay candy man.."

At the door just hovering there, there is a face paint on it ... i think a clowns face

"Do you want a dog?" he asks with a long balloon in his hand. More jelly beans my master has ... hay fever

Mcr rules:better

Ni:Much better.

I hope you liked it and if you did not tell me what i cane change. R&R please