Elder Scroll C (The re-write)

by The Mighty Gyarapie

I promised I would re-write this story a long time ago. It was called Eldar Scoll C. This is the *rough* corrected version. Some parts refused to be transcribed nicely. You should probably read my original version 1st... Meant to be funny in a nonsensical way

1. Chapter 1

Syntax and Grammar Corrected

SkyRim: Eldar Scoll C

The awekning of the gratest REWRITE

The night was cold. Tired, he walked down the road towards Riverwood. Than he saw it in middle of road. It was big and ugly and smelly and blue. It also had huge eyes. He thought about what to do and said "I will stab you in the face! So it began. By the time it was done it's blood was everywhere. It was could now then before, so he went to Riverwood just in time to stop them from kicking the girl so hard the sword broke. "Why did you do that?", He demanded, You would kick her so hard... !Plot Break!(At this point a dragon attacks the protagonist, presumably after the Riverwood incident resolves) The sword hit the dragon in the face. Face to face with it, he was scared, but not about to back down from it. The dragon fell down to the Ground and with a big and loud smash. Here the crash is exemplified with sound effects kept in their original format because it always makes me smile :) "KABOMMMMSpoom111" The win went to him, and all was safe for all time so they thought. Oh, Cliff Hangars!