Hey guys,
This is my first fanfic, so pls review and tell me if I can improve my writing in any way. Also pls tell me whether you want a fourtris end or not. I sure am a fourtris shipper but I feel it is a bit overused.
For some clarifications Will is still alive in my story (what would Christina do without him!) and I don't own Divergent or any of its characters (as much as I would love to :( !).
I will be regularly updating as I have holidays right now(yeah!)
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Chapter 1
Tris' POV
I was walking towards mine and Tobias' spot by the Chasm. I always did that when I had to clear my mind. It had been a hectic day at work as faction ambassador, especially after the attack on Abnegation and the assassination of Jeanine Matthews. All the factions were in chaos and there was a lot of pressure on me and the other ambassadors to negotiate and bring back order. The sound of rushing water calmed my nerves and helped me think logically (that sure is an Erudite thing to say, but hey, I'm Divergent right?)
As I jogged through the tunnel that led to our special spot near the Chasm, I heard the sound of a girl giggling. That was odd considering that no one in Dauntless knew about this spot apart from me and Tobias. But I continued on my way knowing that I would probably witness a couple kissing or something like that (not uncommon in dauntless…). Yet what I saw crushed me. Because the couple I saw kissing was MY Tobias with some dauntless girl I didn't recognize. No, that was not possible. It had to be a mistake. Why would Tobias do that to me? Didn't he just say in the morning that he loved me? What I saw just seemed so unlikely, but the more I saw it, the deeper it seeped through my heart. I turned and ran, not seeing where I was heading. I just ran and ran until I drained all of my emotions through my sprinting. When I looked around I saw that I was near the Hancock building, from the top of which I had gone zip lining during my initiation.
As I turned to go back, a small house hidden around the corner caught my eye. My curiosity got the better of me and I went towards it. As I entered the house, the musty scent of dust caught my nose. I guessed it was one of the houses abandoned during the faction war. As I took in my surroundings I observed that the place was furnished. Some more exploration led me to discover a room in the basement strikingly similar to the training room in dauntless, and to my surprise it was fully equipped with guns, knives and punching bags. It was as if the house was waiting to be owned by a dauntless. And that was exactly what was about to happen…