Well This is my first story please review and let me know what you think. And let me know what i could do to make my story better ANYTHING will help.
Chapter one
Max sighed as she finally arrived at school. The dreaded place she was forced to go to 5 days a week. When she walked into the gym it had kids every doing millions of different things. She went to sit down at her assigned area where all the other girls sat. As she walked up she quickly put a smile on her face, even though she wanted nothing more to ignore everyone and just go to class.
She hugged everyone like she normally does and then pretended to listen as everyone started talking. She sat there until her best friend Mary came. Her and Mary had been friends since second grade. They started to talk about random things until the bell rung for them to go to class.
When they got to there lockers Max pulled everything out of her bag and walked to her desk.
She talked to Mary until the teacher came in, then she pulled out a book and pretended to read, but she was really passing notes with Mary and Colton.
Colton was her boyfriend they had just started to go out, but they had gone out before for 3 months, they had just got back together.
Max had just got the note back from Mary. It read
"Hey~Max"
"Max whatd you do last night? youve got the black jacket on, you only wear the black jacket when youve... yuh know done stuff to your wrists~Mary"
"What i did is my business~Max"
"yeah right your showing me your wrists when class gets over, or i will pull ur sleeves up infront of Colton~Mary"
"NOO I will show you just dont show Colton and dont tell him either please~Max"
":) Thanks now you need to talk to Colton he seems kinda down~Mary"
"KK~Max"
Max wondered what could be wrong with Colton. She quickly pushed all of the thoughts of him breaking up with her and wrote him a note.
It didnt take more than two minutes before she figured out what was wrong. The note read;
"Hey sweety whats wrong?~Max"
"I didnt get a hug:(~Colton"
"Well I will fix that as soon as class is over:]~Max"
"Thx Love you~Colton"
"Love you too~Max"