So, yeah. I'm rewriting this story because I felt like the previous version was, lacking. I'm not sure what it was exactly, but I just felt like I could do it better. So please enjoy this rewritten version.
Prologue
Iemitsu Sawada, for anyone involved with the mafia, this name is common knowledge. Being known as the young lion of the Vongola, and having just recently becoming the head of the CEDEF tend to do that. With his extensive reach of intelligence there's very little that is kept from him, which makes the fact that he does not know that his wife, Nana Sawada, is the leader of an organization that specializes in protecting people from the spirits that they can not see, even more surprising.
Nana and Iemitsu met in college, after both already decided that they'll give their lives for their job. Neither wanted to the other to risk their life, they decided that the other could not know about the other's true job. After college, they married, accepting the fact that the other will never know the real them.
Within a year, Nana became pregnant with the children that intertwine the lives that the couple tried so hard to hide from the other. Early on in the pregnancy, Nana could tell that her child would hold great power in its life, as far more spirits were drawn to her than normal. After giving birth to twins, she found that almost all the spirits were around the older twin, which would be later be named Tsunayoshi, but the younger twin, who would later be named Sora, had a few but strong spirits around him. In the months after, she constantly saw her son play with the spirits.
Coincidentally, later when Iemitsu had the Ninth come met the boys, he saw that Tsuna had the larger Sky flame then his twin, but Sora could see the flame and could manipulate it to a certain degree. The discoveries lead the parents being forced to make their child a part of their secret organization.
Unfortunately, the twins did not lead simple life as the parents hoped they would up to their 14th birthday. Tsuna's ability to see spirits, did not mean that he only saw the good ones, like when he was 5, he saw what's known as an akuma, and how it was about to attack a larger child. Reacting on instinct, he pushed the child out of the way of the creature. The kid didn't know why he was pushed and shoved Tsuna as well. Before a fight could happen, the adults separated them and ask Tsuna why he tackled the kid.
When he answered them, they all gave him confused looks, with the exception of Nana. Nana asked him if he meant what he said, and he nod his head. Nana embraced him in a tight hug and whispered that he did the right thing.
After the incident, Sora constantly heard how badly viewed Tsuna was viewed. This constantly upset the boy, so he decided to mess up to the point where people would think highly of him, and after a while he wasn't doing it on purpose. They were soon to be known as the Dame-Twins.
Now, on their 14th birthday, the events that lead them down the twisting path their parents paved for them will begin.
How do you guys enjoy the new Prologue? I feel like this one fits better than my old one.
Please review guys, I always appreciate it when you guys take your time to do it.
If you want to compare prologues, or just know what will be coming up, here's a link to the first chapter of my previous work. Remove the spaces ( www. fanfiction .net s/9156445/1/Vongola-Redemption)
