Hello it's me :) So this is my first ever story, I'm going to try and post when I can, Please can you review and if you have twitter then follow me Riptide McLean and tell me how I can improve, you can also ask questions which I will answer, I'll tell you when I start writing chapters and other updates like when I will be able to write, when I'm on writers block, BTW this will have 2 or 3 flashbacks as I need to show you events leading up to what is going to happen in the first chapter. I want at least 5 reviews before 1st chapter. So here it is, The Prologue of my first ever story
Prologue
Flashbacks
*Flashback*
Third Person Pov
The War between The Gods and Gaia had started, It was pretty even at the start Percy and Poseidon were taking on Polybotes, Annabeth and Athena were taking on Enceladus, Jason and Jupiter/Zeus were taking on Porphyion, Nico and Hades were taking on Alcyoneus, Leo and Hephaestus were taking on Mimas, Polux and Dionysus were taking on Ephialtes, Thalia and Artemis were taking on Gration, Piper and Aphrodite were taking on Otis, Clarisse and Ares were taking on Pelorus, The Stoll's and Hermes were taking on Hippolytus. All this whilst the rest of the demigods were taking on Gaia's earthborn and other monsters while herself Gaia just watched. The Battle was even just until Polybotes shouted "Perseus Jackson Your Mother is a Bitch, she's the ugliest being on this planet, she's so ugly that when Medusa tried to turn her into stone, she had to run away as her face caused her to have wrinkles because she was so ugly just like you" all the Giants and Gaia laughed at that but little did they know that they just caused their own defeat, Percy's eyes turned into dark green flames and you could see the anger inside him "You just made the mistake of your life, you have caused your own defeat" he shouted in a tone no one had heard before, everyone even Gaia the primordial goddess herself was scared of Percy, Percy made a run and quickly sliced of Polybotes' head without hesitation, he summoned a great wave of water and surrounded himself and Polybotes, he repaired his head and just kept on slashing at him, making deep wounds, which caused a great amount of Golden Ichor (Blood of Immortals) to get out of his body he then stabbed his heart and Polybotes turned into golden dust, when Percy made the water around them disappear, the gods saw All the Golden Ichor on the floor and they realized that Perseus had just defeated Polybotes without the help of a god, Percy's eyes were still dark green flames and when he turned to the other giant he just killed them all in a matter of seconds, he was covered in golden dust and the Gods stared at the Demi-God, Percy sent Annabeth a Kiss then turned around to face Gaia, she had a horrified expression on her face because normally it would take not just one god it would take a god and a demi-god to kill a giant but Percy Jackson on his own a Demigod had killed All the Giants in a matter of minutes.
Gaia knew she had no chance of winning, she would lose no matter what so she turned around and started running, but Percy caught her and said "Not so fast Bitch" he said "do you really think I'd let you run away that easy" he grabbed her throat made a wall of strong water 10 metres behind and threw her as hard as he could and, Gaia hit the wall of water and she dropped on the floor, he started to punch her, punch after punch, she was bruised and battered, she screamed in pain, she just had enough energy in her to say "please Perseus, I beg you, I was not meant to laugh at the comment, please I didn't want Polybotes to do that please don't kill me" Percy just laughed an evil laugh then he said "Do you think I'm stupid you ungrateful b******, you're too late you laughed, you're team made the comment you pay!" he stopped for a minute then said "Also if your giants had brains then they wouldn't have insulted me like that, I'm going to give you the beating you've deserved for everything you've done to me and my mates, and to all of the people I consider family the beating you have deserved since the beginning of time." He got out his sword and started slashing wildly at Gaia making deep wounds in her body which caused a flood of Golden Ichor, Gaia had never expected a beating like this especially from a Demi-God. Every time Gaia was about to be killed he just healed her so he could hurt her for as long as he wants, then Gaia was confused 'why was he doing this' Gaia thought so she asked Percy "Why are you not killing me? Isn't that what you've always wanted?" she asked this with the last amount of energy to talk, but Percy just laughed at that but all the Olympians and Demi-Gods watching him beat the shit out of Gaia were all shocked, mouths wide open at him, they were all thinking how could he laugh at that, They were starring at the, no doubt, strongest ever Demi-God. He was obviously stronger than Hercules and Zeus wasn't happy about that as a son of Poseidon was stronger than a son of his but he was still impressed.
Only three people understood what he was doing the rest were just confused and thinking the same question Gaia had asked, the three that knew were Athena, Annabeth and Ares. Athena knew this as she was goddess of wisdom and battle strategies and this was one of the battle strategies to inflict pain on your opponent, Annabeth knew as she was Athena's cleverest Daughter so she knew and Ares knew as he was the God of War, he had used this before, hurting your opponent then healing then continuing the cycle until he wants to kill her. Percy then shouted "I'm doing to you what Polybotes had planned to do on me, Hurt you until your just about to turn to dust heal you and then carry on the cycle until, you will never ever dare come back from the pits of Tartarus" in the tone he used before that would want to make you run away and cry to your mom.
(These are all the female goddesses on the polls list and what they are thinking about him now)
Athena Pov
I had never thought if seeing Perseus like this, I mean yeah I don't like him but for the first time, I'm scared of a demigod, Seeing him like this scares me to death I'll probably have nightmares about this day, I'm going to make a note to never get on the bad side of Perseus Jackson, Son of my Rival Poseidon.
Artemis Pov
I knew Percy was strong as he had taken the sky for me, but I didn't know he was this strong; man handling the giants and now making Gaia beg something no one has ever done. It looked as if he enjoyed it, as if he enjoyed hurting people, like he has been trained for this opportunity all his life. Even though he's the only real man in since beginning of time, Eternity and that from me is saying something as I'm a the Maiden goddess and hate all men but this boy has proven me wrong, that there is a real man in this world, I admire his loyalty to his all his friends, he'd kill any monster who would dare to insult his mother like he showed today he really is a man, a woman wants a loyal man, he considers all his close friends family and anyone who touches his girlfriend he wouldn't hesitate to kill, as she means the world to him, he's loved her ever since he met her when he was 12, but they just started going out 3 years ago, this Man is the only ever man to have my respect.
Hera Pov
Wow! I have never seen anyone act like this, be protective for his mother, he killed every titan and is punishing Gaia, giving her a beating she'd never expect from a god let alone a demigod. This will probably me the only demigod I'll ever respect because I usually don't like demigods, I never have actually.
Aphrodite Pov
Damn, He looks so Sexy when he's angry, I would've taken him, made him mine if he was a god, but he's a demigod and already taken by another demigod, But I still can't get over what happened like 10 minutes ago, my mind spelt 3 letters WOW, taking on a whole army of giants, monsters in matters of minutes and then torturing Gaia giving her the beating of her life that amazes me.
Hestia Pov
I know I'm a Goddess and he's a demigod but he's the most loyal man ever, I want Perseus to become mine, I want to become his Patron.
Poseidon Pov
I'm the Proudest Father ever, I've always wanted a son like Percy and I finally got him, I've always wanted Percy to work hard to become the best demigod ever since he was born, he is my son and everyone on Olympus wants a son like him. Everyone is Jealous of me because they want Perseus to be their own son.
*Flashback Ends*
Percy Pov
I'm So happy we won the war against the Gaia and the Giants, I still can't believe my achievement defeating all Giants and giving Gaia the worst punishment of her life for two whole years as it's the second anniversary of our victory and I just finished torturing Gaia and killed her but even though I'm still crying at what happened to me just last month, when that Bitch!...
Cliffhanger, Sorry for that but I just had to do it at the time to write that as I was busy and people please review, the more reviews I get, the more chapters and more words in chapters
~Riptide McLean~ hopefully you'll like the story and I'll be writing it soon, but if you want the next post to be before Wednesday I need at least 5 reviews.