All right, my faithful readers, here's the deal. When I started this story I was... 15-16 years old? And it was great to me then and I really enjoyed it and thought it was perfect. But now I'm 21. I'm an adult and I realize, "Hey, it's not that bad, but in all reality, it's not that good either. It needs to be better." To be honest I should've realized this long ago and I think on some level I did, but I was just too stubborn to give in. Well, my stubbornness has run out and now it's time to give this story and my OC as MASSIVE makeover. So, until further notice, I'm taking this baby down. And I'm not putting it back up until I'm 100% satisified with it. It could be a while before that happens, but I feel it's better than just going "so-so". Besides, you guys are the greatest and you deserve the best story I can give, and that's what you're going to get whether you like it or not! (Trust me, you'll like it! ;))
Now, of course, when I come back with this things are definitely going to be different: I mean, some things are gonna be the same, but a lot it going to change. To begin with, I should probably warn you that Bay is NOT going to have powers at first. I don't know when she'll get them but eventually she will. And her full name will not be 'Bayfire', it'll just be 'Bay'. I like the name 'Bayfire' but to be honest it sounds more like a Hybrid name and there are no Hybrids in this TF universe. And that's just to name a few things that will be different.
So at this current point in time, I am taking down this story. I'm sorry, but I believe it is for the best and I think you all will too. :)