Hi everyone! I've made a whole new story and i'm really excited about writing it! I promise that the chapters keep getting better as they go along so make sure to check out them all! On to the story!
Chapter 1
Blazekit wriggled and squirmed as a paw prodded his side.
"Mosskit leave your brother alone." Blazekit's mother Icefur scolded.
"Sorry. I just want him to open his eyes. We can't go outside until he does." Mosskit replied sheepishly. Mosskit was a brown she-cat with light spots.
Outside… what's that? Blazekit wondered. Blazekit was a tabby tom with golden fur and darker orange stripes on his back. He heard another small cat padding towards them.
"Has he opened his eyes yet?" Asked Blazekit's brother Mousekit hopefully. Mousekit had tan fur with white fur on his belly.
"Not yet! You two need to stop rushing him. He will when he's ready!" Icefur meowed firmly.
Well I'm ready now! Blazekit thought and forced his eyelids to open. He was utterly surprised by the sheer size of the nursery. The bramble walls stretched far around him with enough room to fit many cats inside. Blazekit let out a mewl of surprise at the sight of this and rolled right out of his mossy nest. Icefur grabbed his scruff with her jaws and lifted him back to his nest.
"Don't fall out! I wonder how that happened…" Icefur said half to herself. Mosskit hobbled over to Blazekit's nest and looked at him then gasped,
"He's opened his eyes! Can we go outside now pleeease?" She mewed. Icefur sighed and agreed. As soon as Mosskit heard this she nearly trampled both of her brothers on the way to exit the den.
"Come on!" Mousekit meowed. Blazekit nodded and struggled to his paws slowly following his eager siblings.
The moment he stepped out of the safety of the nursery, Blazekit was greeted by a blinding light. When his vision finally cleared, he saw a truly huge grassy area filled with cats.
Its the camp! Its giant! He thought with amazement. He took one nervous step into the Sunclan camp and was stopped by a towering figure.
"Does your mother know you're outside?" Challenged the large cat.
"Yes! Why wouldn't she?" Blazekit mewed back. He was trying to sound brave but this cats sheer size was making him scared.
"Good." The huge cat approved.
"W-what's your name?" Blazekit asked. If this cat wasn't going to get him in trouble he may as well be nice.
"I'm Hawkpaw. An apprentice." The cat said. Then stalked off towards the apprentice den head and tail held high.
Hes only an apprentice? He's huge! Blazekit thought.
"Hey you okay? I thought that big cat had your tail!" Mosskit asked with a worried expression on her face.
"I'm fine." Blazekit reassured her.
"You guys wanna look around camp?" Mousekit asked.
"Fine by me!" Blazekit chirped. He shook his head to clear his thoughts of Hawkpaw and followed his two siblings.
"See that big orange cat? Thats Flameclaw, our dad!" Mosskit explained. "Icefur told me he's the deputy of the clan!"
"Woah! Thats cool." Mousekit exclaimed.
"Deputy? I wanna be deputy!" Blazekit mewed.
"You need to be a Warrior who's had an apprentice before, and you also have to be really loyal and good at hunting and fighting. Flameclaw was one of the heroes that helped defeat the ancient tribes of giant cats that attacked all four clans! Can you believe our father did that?" Mousekit told him. Blazekit's jaw gaped at the thought of something so dangerous and crazy.
"C'mon we should look around. We may need to ask where everything is but I bet we could find-" Mosskit's mew was cut off when another two cats raced up to meet them. One had white fur with a streak of brown on their back. The other was black with a white tuft of chest fur.
"Are you the new kits?" Asked one of them.
"Um, yes we are what are your names?" Replied Mousekit.
"I'm Oakkit and this is my sister and world class furball Foxkit." Explained the white colored cat. Foxkit gently cuffed her sister over the ear for teasing her.
"We heard your conversation and we thought we could show you around camp!" Offered Foxkit, "We've been kits for 3 and a half moons already!"
"Fine by me. It's better than needing to guess what everything is and where!" Mousekit exclaimed with a hint of amusement. The other two kits nodded their heads in agreement and bounded after the two she-cats.
So how did you like the first chapter? Make sure to leave a review! Bye!