The Flaming Prince
"…" talking
'…' thinking
Italic things- characters putting emotion into what they're saying
Bold things- new chapters, or settings in the story
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Chapter 1
"OH NO! Where is Raven?" cried Sammantha, Raven was her little half wolf and half-husky pup; she named her Raven because she has what looks like a wing over each of her eyes.
"Mum, have you seen Raven ANYWHERE!" yelled Sammantha from the kitchen. Sammantha has pretty hazel eyes, soft blond hair, and was VERY strong from wrestling with her four older brothers, Tom, Lane, Greg and Nathen. She has a younger sister named Melody, also.
"No, Sam, I'm sorry I haven't." replied her mother, Molly. Her father, Alex, and mother were in their room getting ready to take her and her brothers to meet the train. It was her first year at Hogwarts; her brothers were not scared, for it was their third year to enter the castle. Sam doesn't like to wear dresses at ALL; she also hates pink. Greg is the oldest by two minutes; Nathen was one minute older than Lane. Tom was the youngest, but that didn't stop him. They're quadruplets, of course,
"I bet the little runt got ran over." Chuckled Greg.
"Haha. Ain't that true." Nathen taughtened
"SHUT UP THE BOTH OF YOU." Sam yelled at the top of her lungs as she ran over and punched Greg in the nose and Nathen in the stomach. Greg was laughing before the huge impact on his nose that made him cry. Nathen was laughing a hearty laugh and then became breathless.
"Sorry." Nathen wheezed out of him, and while Greg said it with a weird voice for he was holding his nose up in the air to stop the bleeding.
"Well that's what you two get for saying that. Now, help me find her." Sam said with her arms crossed over her chest.
In the middle of the process of finding Raven. There was a knock on the door.
Tom screamed, "I'll get it!" It was Sam's best friend; D.J. Lane always had a crush on her.
"Oh. Hey, D.J. What's up?" said Tom.
"Is Sam to busy getting ready, or can I talk to her?" said D.J.
"You can talk. Come on in.," said Tom. Then there was a bloody scream then a bark.
"Uh oh. I think Mel has Raven," said Lane while he was walking down the stairs to see who was at the door. Then paused because he just saw D.J.
"GIVE ME RAVEN! YOU LIL BRAT!" came a scream from a bedroom at the top of the stairs.
"NO! MOMMY HELP!" came a little voice.
"THEN I'LL TEAR YOU APART!" came yet another scream.
"GIRLS. STOP!" yelled Molly by that time everyone was upstairs. Alex came in and stopped the fight.
"What in the world are you two fighting about, now?" said Alex calmly.
"Dad, she has Raven." said Sam still breathing hard.
"Mel, is this true?"
"But I want Raven." said Melody. Melody has green eyes like her mom's and brown hair like her dad's. She is seven years old.
"Raven is Sam's though," said Molly in a loving way. Mel's eyes were tearing up.
"Oh. Hey D.J." said Sam who was trying to reach her through the crowd of family members.
"Hey. Didn't you want to go to Diagon Alley together?" said D.J.
"Yea. Um...Mum, we're are needing to go to Diagon Alley."said Sam.
"Us too, Mum."said Lane quickly.
"Oh, all right. We will travel by Flu Powder."said Molly.
Sam went first; then D.J. then Lane, Tom, Greg, Nathen, Molly and Alex. First stop was Gringotts. Then was the Pet Shop, D.J. got a cat, and Sam got an owl and a cat, also. She named the owl Sunset, and the cat Wing. Sunset was a snow owl and had a peaceful look to her, her eyes reminded her of the ocean, and her graceful beauty and the way she took flight reminded her of a sunset. Wing was as white an angel's wing, so naturally she was named Wing. D.J. cat was named Peaches because she had a little beige tent to her and her eyes were blue. Next were the wands and what better place then Ollibander's Wand Shop. Sam's was a Unicorn hair willow 10 inches. D.J.'s was a Unicorn hair yew 9 inches. Fourth stop was the cloaks. Then to get their books that were need to complete the year. After they returned home they each got a Butterbeer. Lane went over to D.J. and Sam.
"Can I sit with you, sis?" asked Lane.
"Sure. Why not?" said D.J. and Sam in unison.
"Um... D.J. can I ask you something alone, Please?" asked Lane.
"Sure." replied D.J.
"I'll just go and sit with the guys for a few." said Sam smirking.
"So what did you want to ask me?" said D.J. sweetly.
"Um... Ar-are you going out with anyone or is there someone that you want to go out with." asked Lane shakily.
"Yes." said D.J.
"Wh-who?" said Lane sacredly.
"Adam. Adam James." said D.J. as if she just had a piece of heaven. "Is that all you wanted?" said D.J.
"Yea. Sorry I bothered you." said Lane as his heart was smashed to pieces on a rock. Sam came over and sat down. She was smiling, but when she saw her brother smile turned upside down into a frown.
"What's wrong?" said Nat (Nathen) as he walked over." I see TOO many sad faces."
"I-I don't know really," said D.J. as she just zomed in from her daydream. Lane got up and walked away. Sam and Nat just followed with their eyes.
"Was it something I said?" said D.J.
"I-I don't know. What did you say?" said Sam.
"Well, he asked me if I was or wanted to go out with anyone. I said that I wanted to go out with Adam," said D.J. with a sigh that said she was in love with Adam.
"Nice going you just broke Lane's heart," said Sam smacking D.J. upside the head lightly.
"Ow. Sorry I didn't know." said D.J. rubbing her head. Nat walked back over and started to comfort Lane.
"Well, what do you have to say." said Sam.
"I hope Adam asks me out." Sam rolled her eyes.
"I can't believe you!" said Sam.
"What did I do?" said D.J.
"All you can think about is Adam when Lane just asked you out."
"Well, he is pretty hot. And what did you want me to say...yes. I don't even like him. Well, a little, but not much."
"GREGORY NESLON SPRINGS! WHAT IN THE WORLD ARE YOU DOING!" came a scream.
"Sorry, Mum, I couldn't resist. Please, don't use my full name; it's embarrassing." mumbled Greg.
"Hey, Greg, what did you do now?" Sam asking.
"Hehehe. I gave a waitress some of that taffy that I bought from that joke shop that some twins opened. It swelled up her tongue like a balloon. There cool."
"NATHEN NOT YOU, TOO! WHAT AM I GOING TO DO WITH YOU!" yelled Molly.
"Mum, you could laugh." suggested Mel.
"Do you want that husky taken away? I don't need you coming in this." Molly stated.
"Sorry, Ma' Am." whispered Mel.
"You got the little twerp a husky. Mum, that's outragest!" declared Sam.
It was finally timed to board the train. D.J. asked Lane if he wanted to sit with her on the train, for Sam threatened to brake her neck if she didn't. Then Adam walked in with his older brother Kyle, who had a crush on Sam for a year.
"Hey, Kyle and Adam. What are you up too?" said Sam.
"O-oh, n-nothing." answered Kyle shakily, "Y-you?"
"Just sitting. Do you want to join us?"
"Hi, Adam." said D.J. shyly. Sam just rolled her eyes. Lane's smile slid like a sled on snow into a frown.
"Um. Can I talk to you alone in the hall for a second."
"YES! I-I mean... sure." said D.J.
"So what did you want to talk about to me alone?"
"Well, it's kind of hard..."
"Go ahead you can tell me or ask me anything"
"O-okay... Who do you like?"
"I thought it was obvious"
"And I think you should go for it because it looks like something
is holding you back."
"You really think I should go for it..."
"Yes. I really do think that y'all would make a great couple."
"But I was waiting for him to ask me out."
"I thought he did."
"Yes!"
"Yes what?"
"Yes, I'll go out with you."
"ME. I ment Lane."
"WHAT!"
"Yeah. 'Cuz it's pretty rare that an older guy likes a younger girl. Where are you going?"
D.J. ran into another cart. Sam came out she heard the whole thing.
"I better go and comfort her." She enters the cart that D.J. was in.
"D.J. are you ok?"
"What do you care you probably planed the whole thing!"
"I did not."
"Our friendship is over!"
"Stop being so dramatic. It gets annoying."
"I'm serious."
"Okay. Bye."
Sam left and went back into the cart where the guys were. Kyle was smiling and frowning at the same time. Sam tried not to laugh so she laughed to herself and she exigently let out a quiet laugh.
"What's so funny and where is D.J?" asked Lane.
"Kyle and we're in a fight." replied Sam.
"What am I doing." asked Kyle.
"Why are y'all in a fight?" asked Adam.
"Your facile expression and she thinks I set up the whole thing. I don't care."
"Um, Sam."
"Yea."
"Can I talk to you in the hall?"
"Yep."
They stepped into the hall.
"Would you go out with me?"
"Wow! Kyle, yes. Thanks."
When they walked in Lane was weird. He...he..
That was longer so here's a new chapter. Hope you like it. It's my first story.
He was crying and Tom was there; Lane walked up and tried to hug Sam. She was too freaked out, so she stepped out of the way and Lane hugged Kyle.
"Your brother must be happy that we're together." Kyle said in a confused voice.
"You and Kyle are together! How dare you do this to me!" shrieked D.J. she walked in just as Lane was hugging Kyle.
"Now what. Oh you came to blame me for something else."
"Don't talk to me like that you know I can't stand fighting and yelling."
"You're being so dumb! You started this fight and just so you know...I DIDN'T PLAN WHAT HAPPENED OUT IN THE HALL WITH YOU AND ADAM!"
"YES, YOU DID AND I KNOW IT!"
"D.J. she didn't I told you that on my own."
"AND YOU'RE MAKING HIM LIE TO MY FACE TO SAVE YOUR BUTT FROM A BEATING!"
"Hahahaha. You think you can take me and beat me. Have you forgot that I can win against ALL my brothers?"
"WELL, THAT'S BECAUSE THEY'RE ALL WIMPS!"
"Hey." Lane and Tom said together as they stood up.
"DON'T CALL MY BROTHERS WIMPS. BESIDES YOU LIKE NATHEN YOUR ALWAYS TELLING ME HOW HOTT, AND HOW STRONG HE IS!"
"I do not." mumbled D.J. as if she was trying to cover up the truth.
"You do the same with Ad..."
"Okay, I get your point." mumbled D.J. cutting off Sam before she could finish. "But I still don't want to be your friend."
"Okay."
"And don't think that your begging will change my mind."
"Don't worry it won't."
"And don't cry when I leave."
"I'm not a crybaby."
D.J. started to tear up. And walked out of the room.
"Thanks for sticking up for us. And she really did say that about Nat?" asked Tom.
"You know me I only speak the truth."
D.J. ran though the door crying and saying, "I'm sorry. I'm sorry."
"It's okay. I forgive you." chuckled Sam sweetly. They finally arrived at the school.
"Now, we can have some fun here." D.J. said stepping out of the train and looking at the huge school called Hogwarts.
"No' as long as I'm around. Ye' won't." came a booming voice from behind Sam.
"Hi, Hagrid. How have you been?" asked Greg as he reached his other brothers and sister.
"Pretty 'ood. I see your sister hasn't changed just 'as pretty as always."
"Thanks." Sam replied sweetly.
"That bunch of Springs reminds my father of the Weaslys. The girl reminds him of the one that was best friends with his enemy, Harry Potter." came a cold voice from behind Hagrid.
"Now, Malfoy Pain-in-the-butt, you don't want to mess with us. That's our uncle." Nat said coming out of the train.
"What did you call me."
"Malfoy Pain-in-the-butt."
"My name is Thacro Malfoy son of Draco and Notha Malfoy."
"Hahahahaha. They should've just called you Thorn-o and just got it over with. Hahahahaha." Sam chuckled.
"Professor, would you do something about this."
"I ain't seen 'othin 'rong here."
"My father was right you're just a big pile of filthy m..."
"Malfoy, don't you dare finish that sentence." Sam threatened. "Or I'll be pounding you the second you do."