This is my very first Harry Potter fic.
Nothing belongs to me (except Star- and I might put a few more of my own randoms in) anything you recognize from book or film belongs to J.K Rowling or Warner Bros.
Reveiws are- as always -much appreciated and if anyone wants to help me out with the rest of this story (I'd be grateful for any help) e-mail me: pinkglitterangelwings@hotmail.com
Chapters will be wrote from different perspectives, simply because this is easier for me and I am selfish. The first chapter is Lillys.
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Peter was the tag-along, he could be ok at times I suppose- sometimes the jokes he cracked managed to be half funny. He always looked up to the other 3, James in particular. It cant have been easy for him- being the odd one out- the one who sparkled the least. He wasn't smart or funny or good-looking as the others were.
James was the loud one. The one who always had something to say. Tall and kind of lanky, but with a face that exuded mischief and boyish good looks- he was more cute than anything else. Athletic, confident and funny. And a complete show-off whenever there were girls around, me in particular. He was boisterous and loud (which could annoy me) but he was also kind and very clever- those were 2 of the reasons why I fell for him. Being star of the quidditch team and extremely popular didn't exactly decrease his ego but no matter what, he was forever loveable and always stayed loyal to his friends.
Remus was the nice one. The perfect boyfriend- apart from that thing that happened every full moon of course. Sandy blonde hair and warm brown eyes- decent looking, very clever and the kindest person you were ever likely to meet. Everyone liked Remus, it was impossible not to- sometimes he even managed to make Sirius and James ashamed of themselves- they valued Remus's friendship deeply. A prefect, he was responsible and never mean-but he was still a marauder. Which meant of course, it was impossible for him not to have a certain amount of mischief in his head. Yeah, Remus was the one all the girls should have fallen for…
But Sirius was the one they did fall for. Sirius Black. The charmer I suppose. Tall and toned, with startling blue eyes and ebony black hair. Sirius wasn't just good-looking, he was beautiful and I don't deny it. Arrogant -yes, but not so much that you could dislike him for it. And I guess he had a reason to be so- what guy wouldn't become arrogant if they had girls flocking to him 24/7. He was the bad boy I guess…the instigator of all the trouble. And he looked like one- he could just sit there in silence exuding this mysterious confidence and everyone would want a piece of him. I'd be lying if I said I hadn't thought of him as more than a friend from time to time, but I did love James- and they were like brothers. I could never have forgiven myself had I done anything to their friendship. Yeah…so Sirius… the one who always remained unattainable never letting any girl get to close. Determined to stay the heartbreaker and never get his own heart broken. But we all know that everyone lets their guard down at one time or another……
We'd never had a new girl in our year. We'd never had a new guy for that matter….unless you count the semi-troll who stayed for about half a term and then left because he was to thick to understand any of our classes.
But in the first term of our 5th year we were introduced to Star.
We filed noisily into transfiguration on our first school day. Sirius, James, Remus and Peter taking up the entire back row of seats as usual. There was the usual chatter and flurry of first day madness but we all fell silent when Professor Mc Gonagall walked in.
Following her was a tall, slim girl that none of us recognized. She had black waist length hair that framed her heart shaped face in glossy waves. Her clear blue eyes were surrounded with long, curly eyelashes and a light dusting of freckles rested prettily across her nose.
She was introduced as Star Quinlan- a 16 year old student who had previously attended the wizarding school Beauxbatons- situated in France. Her parents had transferred her to Hogwarts after several threats of expulsion, for un-lady like behaviour (as Star so elegantly put it). After all behaving like a lady was almost more important than being a good student at Beauxbatons.
I was sat one row in front of James and Sirius with a spare seat next to me, so Star was seated next to me. She flopped lazily down into the chair -taking on a pose not dissimilar to Sirius's- and gave me a crooked grin.
"Hello."
She had a strong cockney accent but I could detect a definite hint of French coming through. It was a strange mixture but somehow she made it work.
"Hi. I'm Lilly."
"Evans, lend us some parchment would you?" a deep voice interrupted.
I rolled my eyes and passed some parchment to Sirius. This might have seemed like an innocent request to anyone else, but I knew Sirius. There was no doubt in my mind that he had quite enough parchment in his bag, but instead chose to interrupt my conversation so that the pretty new girl would instantly recognize him as 'most eligible boy in Gryffindor'.
But notice him she did not. Instead she turned her eyes to the front and waited patiently for McGonagall to start the lesson.
Sirius (to my immense amusement) looked extremely put-out.
Nothing belongs to me (except Star- and I might put a few more of my own randoms in) anything you recognize from book or film belongs to J.K Rowling or Warner Bros.
Reveiws are- as always -much appreciated and if anyone wants to help me out with the rest of this story (I'd be grateful for any help) e-mail me: pinkglitterangelwings@hotmail.com
Chapters will be wrote from different perspectives, simply because this is easier for me and I am selfish. The first chapter is Lillys.
* * * * * *
Peter was the tag-along, he could be ok at times I suppose- sometimes the jokes he cracked managed to be half funny. He always looked up to the other 3, James in particular. It cant have been easy for him- being the odd one out- the one who sparkled the least. He wasn't smart or funny or good-looking as the others were.
James was the loud one. The one who always had something to say. Tall and kind of lanky, but with a face that exuded mischief and boyish good looks- he was more cute than anything else. Athletic, confident and funny. And a complete show-off whenever there were girls around, me in particular. He was boisterous and loud (which could annoy me) but he was also kind and very clever- those were 2 of the reasons why I fell for him. Being star of the quidditch team and extremely popular didn't exactly decrease his ego but no matter what, he was forever loveable and always stayed loyal to his friends.
Remus was the nice one. The perfect boyfriend- apart from that thing that happened every full moon of course. Sandy blonde hair and warm brown eyes- decent looking, very clever and the kindest person you were ever likely to meet. Everyone liked Remus, it was impossible not to- sometimes he even managed to make Sirius and James ashamed of themselves- they valued Remus's friendship deeply. A prefect, he was responsible and never mean-but he was still a marauder. Which meant of course, it was impossible for him not to have a certain amount of mischief in his head. Yeah, Remus was the one all the girls should have fallen for…
But Sirius was the one they did fall for. Sirius Black. The charmer I suppose. Tall and toned, with startling blue eyes and ebony black hair. Sirius wasn't just good-looking, he was beautiful and I don't deny it. Arrogant -yes, but not so much that you could dislike him for it. And I guess he had a reason to be so- what guy wouldn't become arrogant if they had girls flocking to him 24/7. He was the bad boy I guess…the instigator of all the trouble. And he looked like one- he could just sit there in silence exuding this mysterious confidence and everyone would want a piece of him. I'd be lying if I said I hadn't thought of him as more than a friend from time to time, but I did love James- and they were like brothers. I could never have forgiven myself had I done anything to their friendship. Yeah…so Sirius… the one who always remained unattainable never letting any girl get to close. Determined to stay the heartbreaker and never get his own heart broken. But we all know that everyone lets their guard down at one time or another……
We'd never had a new girl in our year. We'd never had a new guy for that matter….unless you count the semi-troll who stayed for about half a term and then left because he was to thick to understand any of our classes.
But in the first term of our 5th year we were introduced to Star.
We filed noisily into transfiguration on our first school day. Sirius, James, Remus and Peter taking up the entire back row of seats as usual. There was the usual chatter and flurry of first day madness but we all fell silent when Professor Mc Gonagall walked in.
Following her was a tall, slim girl that none of us recognized. She had black waist length hair that framed her heart shaped face in glossy waves. Her clear blue eyes were surrounded with long, curly eyelashes and a light dusting of freckles rested prettily across her nose.
She was introduced as Star Quinlan- a 16 year old student who had previously attended the wizarding school Beauxbatons- situated in France. Her parents had transferred her to Hogwarts after several threats of expulsion, for un-lady like behaviour (as Star so elegantly put it). After all behaving like a lady was almost more important than being a good student at Beauxbatons.
I was sat one row in front of James and Sirius with a spare seat next to me, so Star was seated next to me. She flopped lazily down into the chair -taking on a pose not dissimilar to Sirius's- and gave me a crooked grin.
"Hello."
She had a strong cockney accent but I could detect a definite hint of French coming through. It was a strange mixture but somehow she made it work.
"Hi. I'm Lilly."
"Evans, lend us some parchment would you?" a deep voice interrupted.
I rolled my eyes and passed some parchment to Sirius. This might have seemed like an innocent request to anyone else, but I knew Sirius. There was no doubt in my mind that he had quite enough parchment in his bag, but instead chose to interrupt my conversation so that the pretty new girl would instantly recognize him as 'most eligible boy in Gryffindor'.
But notice him she did not. Instead she turned her eyes to the front and waited patiently for McGonagall to start the lesson.
Sirius (to my immense amusement) looked extremely put-out.