This is my first Doctor Who fanfic so any feedback is much appreciated also I hope you like it and remember R+R

Chapter 1

The Doctor

I met a bloke near the creek. He had dark hair that flipped up in the front, he wore a dark suit and a light brown trench coat with a tie and gray converse. He came up to me very frantic, "Have you seen the TARDIS?" he asked me, he was very out of breath, as if he'd been running a while. "What's the TARDIS?" I asked him, I knew I shouldn't be talking to him because he was a very strange man that just ran up to me. "We need to find it!" he turned his head this way and that and then I realized what he had just said "WE!?" I shouted, I was very surprised. "Oh come on, a strange, handsome man comes up to you looking like he's on an adventure and wants to go on another, you know you want to go, I know you want to go, I can see it in your eyes, you're very readable. OH YES the TARDIS, it means Time and Relative Dimension In Space." I knew that he couldn't be bad but I wouldn't go without a fight, "How do I know you're not lying?" I gave him a very sassy look and I knew I had won, er I THOUGHT I had won but then he gave an even better answer than I had thought, he said, "Trust me, I'm the Doctor. Come on then, RUN!" his eyes lit up as he said the last word and I knew he loved action and adventure just as much as I did. So I ran, I ran with the Doctor and he helped me figure myself out a lot.