Hey guys this is a continuation of the Fall of Five. I have been getting lots of mean reviews on my other story. I've gotten mean PM's too. Hopefully this will be better. Also please rememer to review. I also would love suggestions on anything! Especially Legacies. I think I'm getting better at writing. So here you guys go!
Seven's Revenge Chapter 1 Marina
He's dead. I cant believe he's dead. I never even got to tell him goodbye. Or I never got to tell him that I love him. He will come to Lorien though. I know of it.
"Marina, can you turn the lake to ice?" Six asks. I try to use it. I don't feel anything when I try. I concentrating on transferring the lake to ice. I don't think I can do it.
I start getting a headache. I keep trying though. Now I feel like I'm gonna pass out. I'm still invisible though. I cant believe we lost two Garde. Now we only have Me, John, Nine, Ella, and Six. We also might have that Adam guy that Sam was talking about.
"I can't do it Six. I'm sorry." I explain.
"Thats okay Marina. You just developed the Legacy, so it may be hard. We can just swim." So we start swimming. The waters cold though. Since its dark. I enjoy swimming though. I use my night vision to look for alligators. I also have Eights body on my back. He should at least come to Lorien in ash form.
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I walk through the hotel. We've been here since yesterday. We are in Atlanta, Georgia. I practice my new legacy on a cup of water, trying to make it cold. Eights dead body is on one of the 4 beds. This is a big hotel room. I stare at the body for a minute.
I walk over to the body. I place my hands on Eights chest. Nine looks up from his laptop to watch me.
I concentrate on finding his heart. I can possible jumpstart his heartbeat long enough to heal him. I concentrate. I must find his heart. Then I concentrate. Nine watching curiously. A tear in my eye, I continue to try. Then I find it.
I found his heart. I keep the concentration. I feel an icy tingle in my fingertips. Nine's jaw drops.
"Holy shit!" Nine exclaims as he watches me. I close my eyes and keep trying to do the unthinkable. The icy sensation continues. Then I feel a stabbing pain in my head. Its a headache. I continue to try. Then I cant open my eyes. I am engulfed in darkness.
XXX John
"So your Adam?"
"Yeah" He asks nervously. I head to the elevator. My leg still burning. Adam notices this.
"What the fuck! No! No! No! Another one dead!" He starts tearing up. I dont blame him, but I gotta get to BK. I walk onto the lush floor. We start to ascend.
"Someones a traitor too." He looks up shocked. He thinks I'm being sarcastic. The elevator door rings before he can say anything else. I don't know the pin code, so I pry it open with my mind.
I walk onto the roof to find BK being stabbed continuously by a Mog. I throw him to Nevada using my Telekinesis. I run as fast as my legs will allow to BK. He wimpers! That means he's alive! I put my hands on his wounds and concentrate.
I feel the warm sensation in my fingertips. Marina described a icy feeling but mines warm. That makes me wonder if we have different Legacies. His broken limbs, scars, and cuts close up. Adam jus stands there, in shock. I smirk.
Thank you! BK says in my mind. I pick him up. He's in Beagle form.
"Is that a Chimæra? John?" Adam asks. I tense up. How did he know.
"Yeah why?" I ask.
"Cause I got all of the other Chimæra!" I look up shellshocked. I cant believe what he just said.
"Well lets get them!" We run back to the elevator. BK growls at Adam. He lunges at him but I catch BK.
"Its okay BK. He's on our side. He betrayed the Mogs. Just like Five betrayed us. Well I think he betrayed us." Adam looks shocked. Before he can say something the elevator doors open.
"Over here!" Calls Sarah from a four seated Ferrari. I knew Nine had a super fast car.
"In a minute!" I yell over. Me and Adam go to his parked car. I open the door up. Its not a bad car. It looks nice. I look around the car and see nothing. Then they pop out and all transform into dogs. I smile and go down to pet one but he growls.
"Its okay buddy" I let him know. He still is growling at me though.
"I'm a Garde. Its okay bud." He lets out a yelp and they all tackle me licking. Another one comes out and walks up to Adam. It changes into a pigeon and sits on his shoulder.
"This is Dust. I found him first in the New Mexico Desert and named him Dust. I look closer. Somethings off about the Chimæra. Then it hits me. They all have Loric numbers on them. Dust has the Loric Number One.
"Adam!? Is that you?" Sam asks.
"Yeah its me. Lets get going. Also this is Dust" He says motioning to the bird on his shoulder. "And the other animals are the Chimæra that came from Lorien. Lets get going." So we head to the car, the Chimæra following us. I hop in next to Sarah, shotgun.
"The Chimæra were shapeshifting nonstop. They couldn't stop but they started to settle later on. I think the Mogs were experimenting on them." Adam says. I just nod. I see Number Two's Chimaera. I start petting it.
"Hey Sam. Take this Chimæra it was Number Two's."
"Really! Oooh! Really?! What am I gonna name him!" I smile. Sarah starts driving. The rest of the car ride is in silence.
"Hey Adam? How do you have a Legacy?" I ask Adam.
"Well its kind of complicated but I'll try. I was a typical Mog. I believed in Setrakus Ra. My father was a Mog General. We had an adopted child named Ivan. He was my age. So we were brothers. One day a Mog scientist hooked me up to a machine. This was after Number One was killed. This machine was supposed to let me live through Number Ones memory. Did I mention her body was hooked up to the machine too? Whatever. So I went into a coma for three years. I also lived through her memories. The machine worked. But I told them that it didn't. Number One was stuck in my brain after that. And I could talk to her. So she influenced me to help the Garde. I failed at helping Numbers Two and Three survive. Before Three died I tried to fight Ivan, and I won. One helped me learn to fight. But later that day, Ivan pushed me into a ravine. I lived in that town a while after surviving the fall into the ravine. And One started disappearing to the point to where she was completely gone. I went back to where I lived with before I was a traitor. Ivan moved to the base in Dulce. But I went to that place ti try and get One back. I was hooked up into a new machine this time. I acted like I wasn't a traitor. They believed me. During the machine, I experienced One gaining her Legacy before she died. Then she took me to one of her memories on a beach. Then we shared a kiss and she gave me her Legacy. I woke up creating an earth quake. I was exhausted and passed out. Malcolm saved me. But while I was attacking the base in Dulce I killed the Mog who killed One, Two, and Three. He was Ivan." Adam explains. I swear you could hear a pin drop.
"Damn"