My Alternate Ending For The Lord Of The Rings
By: Kara Krashe
Edited By: Ellie Arrow
WARNING: This is a one-shot. This has one chapter. And it is rated T for paranoia and the fact it makes me look cooler! It doesn't have cuss words, okay? And it has propergrammar. YAY! This is told in a thirdperson way, so if there are any 'me, my, I,' please leaveacomment and Ishallfixit!
DISCLAIMER: I do not own The Lord Of The Rings or Sam or Frodo or Golem or Sméagol. The plot isn't really even mine, if you're thinking technical. It's just my twisted way of saying 'There wasn't enough drama, so I'm gonna make the drama!'
Frodo and Sméagol were fighting at the ledge of the pit. That ring is mine, Sam thought, outraged. And so, the fight escalated into an all-out war between the two hobbits and whatever Sméagol would be classified as. "It's mine!" Sam and Frodo heard Sméagol shout the two dooming, horrifying, haunting, tainted words. Then, Frodo and Sam shouted at the same time; "No it isn't! It's mine!" And they were willing to go to varying lengths to retrieve it.
Sméagol was willing to kill, Sam was willing to maim, and Frodo...he wasn't too willing to do either of those things. And they got closer and closer to the edge(A/N: That's a 30 Seconds To Mars song! And I think you should hear it.). Sméagol was the first to go down. Sam tripped him with his bare foot, and the poor ex-hobbit plummeted to his fiery death. Then, the two hobbits went to wrestling it out of the other's hand. Sam had Frodo pinned down one minute, and moved to get the ring.
But then, Frodo would make a swift recovery and have Sam pinned down the next second. And on and on the wrestling went, until they were at the ledge. "Mister Frodo, I think we're under the spell," Sam said to Frodo, once Sam was pinned down. "You're just saying that to get the ring," Frodo shrieked at his former friend turned enemy. "No, Mister Frodo, you've got it all wrong," he shouted back. I'll destroy the ring even if it means dying.
And with that, he rolled himself and his fellow hobbit into the blazing inferno abyss. Their lives blinked by in an instant, and they saw they'd both been under the spell. "I'm sorry," Sam and Frodo heard the other whisper. And with that, they hit the lava, and burned their bodies to a crisp. And their very last thoughts were, I wonder what it's like to die.
Yes, it was very, very dramatic. Not very well told, if you ask me. But whatever. Flames are appreciated. A lot. So if you'd kindly just leave a comment below, it'd be very well appreciated. Very well. Please, please, please leave a comment! And please favorite, cause I get paid everytime you do!:)