Back with a new story folks! It's a thriller and a betrayal story, plus it's long! So it might take some time for to be composed. This is based on the play The Count's Revenge by J.H. Walsh. Dedicated to all of my readers and reviewers, please enjoy this first chapter of this hopefully good fanfiction!
"So how were you arrested?" asked the inmate to his fellow, a nekojin,
"It's a long story…" The nekojin replied.
"C'mon! I can take long stories." The first one replied.
"Okay then…: Replied the raven-haired male, crossing his arms around his chest and is pack against the wall. From there he continued:
"My name is Raymond Kon. I was a Commander in the United States Armed Forces; I was a top-rank General too. I am also an expert in explosives as well as a member of the tactical team on the Army. I was arrested for treason."
"Oooh, fancy." Replied his fellow inmate, "Who did you betray?"
"My own country, apparently." Replied the nekojin, rather sternly.
"Apparently?" Asked his fellow inmate.
"Yes. I'll tell you how…" The nekojin said, as he crossed his legs and told his story…
May 24th 2002…
A church just on the outskirts of a beautiful village. The church was decorated that day, it was someone's wedding. In the top room of the church, was a bed upon which, sat a beautiful bride-to-be; pink hair, big golden eyes, wheatish skin, wearing a long wedding dress, going perfectly with her rather buxom physique. She wore white gloves, complete with a beautiful headdress, with small lilies on it for decoration. The pinkette was going to be wedded today, to her truest love.
Down in the church hallway, stood our main character, but not in those ragged prison clothes, no. But he was wearing a dark green uniform, his badges and medals being proudly shown over his chest and his raven hair tied down into a ponytail. He was holding a small box, inside of which was a beautiful diamond ring, made specifically for his wife-to-be. As he proudly stood in front of the mirror, he was approached by the bestman of the wedding, the bride's brother.
The bestman was also a nekojin, like his sister and his future brother-in-law, his long black hair combed perfectly, his fearsome face was grinning at that time, and he wore a black suit to the occasion.
"Ready to make my sister yours, Ray?" Asked the fellow nekojin.
"Yup." Replied the groom.
"You know, Ray. While you were gone for battle, Mariah would talk about you al the time." The brother said, Mariah Wong, the bride, was going to marry her love, a warhero.
"Yea, she must have. Hey Lee?" Ray asked his brother-in-law, Lee Wong.
"Yeah?" Lee asked.
"Thanks." Said Ray.
"For what?" Lee replied.
"For everything man." Ray concluded, as he went towards the podium, the benches were occupied by friends and family of the two soulmates, on the podium, was the priest and Ray good friend, Max Tate, a blonde, who was also wearing a black suit.
"Lookin' sharp, man!" Said Max.
"You too, bud." Ray said, and as soon as the church organ began to play, Ray looked onto his wife, who was walking down the aisle holding her brother's hand, holding a beautiful where rose bouquet, and a radiant smile. Ray grabbed his future mate's hand, helping her up to the podium. As the ceremony was in full circle, the priest spoke.
"Dearly beloved, we are gathered here today to witness the union of
Captain Raymond Kon and Mariah Won, in holy matrimony, which is an honorable estate, that is not to be entered into unadvisedly or lightly, but reverently and soberly. Into this estate these two persons present come now to be joined. If any one can show just cause why they may not be lawfully joined together, let them speak now or forever hold their peace. "
And oh how fate plays its games…
All of a sudden, the church door was broken down, men cladded in bulletproof jackets with brightly yellow FBI written on the back of it, dark blue pants and shirts, wearing black caps a d black sunglasses came rushing into the church with guns in hands, each one was shouting one of the following phrases:
FBI!
DON'T MOVE!
STAY ON THE GROUND!
HANDS IN THE AIR!
DO NOT LEAVE!
THIS IS A WARRENTED ARREST!
These men had covered all exits in the church, including windows, and left everyone in the church worried and in utter fear, three to four men had gathered around the podium, while one man forced Ray down to the ground.
"Ray!" Mariah asked, as her hands were grabbed by another officer.
"MARIAH!" Shouted Ray, and rushed to save his future wife, only to be tazed by an officer.
"Raymond Kon, you are under arrest for treason!" The man who tazed him said."Take him away boys!" He ordered his men, "Yes sir!" They said as they carried a knocked out Ray out of the church, leaving Mariah crying and in tears.
"RAY! NOO!" Mariah cried out, as she dropped onto her knees and began to weep, with Lee hugging her. Who knew that that happy day would turn into a miserable one…?
As Ray finished his story, the inmate looked at him, with his jaw dropped down.
"Whoa…:" He said.
"Yup, whoa…" Ray replied coldly.
"Then what?" The inmate asked.
"Then, then came the worse of it…" He said, as he closed his eyes, and let out his tears…
Hope you liked it, chapter two is coming up soon, please do review!