This story is an experiment for me in more than one sense. I wrote the first chapter one late night, which is the prime reason for any errors. I got the idea of just writing whatever came into my head and running with it. It seems to have worked somewhat.
It is also the first story I post on Fanfiction.net. Though I am new, I am fairly conversant in what goes on here. So I'll say it straight. I want criticism.
Ah, I hear you say, "Is he mad?" No. I merely want your honest opinions on how to change my writing for the better. I'm not telling people not to post raving reviews - if you feel I deserve them, then I'll be the happiest guy alive - but please be honest about it. If I write bad stuff, I want to know. English isn't my first language; I need added proficiency.
Thank you for reading this little blurb and... enjoy the show. :)
Björn Paulsen, Malmö, Sweden