Sup. Yeah... Um I fixed it so you don't have to tell me anymore ( for any who did or thought about it). Sigh, my first story/ poem and it was messed up. Ugh, I hate myself sometimes. Well gotta stop looking in the past and look to the future or something. This was dedicated to HyperMonicaLA!
I held her pale pink hands
And stared into her eyes that could never be bland.
I caressed her cheek
A few tears leak.
I kissed her lips,
Blood pouring onto my fingertips.
Blood still pouring out her mouth.
Everything kept going south.
Her eyelids were closing.
Her breath was slowing.
I said ," Minka, I love you"
She said," Who are you?"
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Yeah, I had to change some parts of the poem to make this fit as LSP but I also needed it to rhyme.