Hi this is my first Story…ever, so don't be to hard on me. I might make this into a series
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Alexandria, a Gaian also none as , Practically threw her purchase down in front of Julie, the owner of Sunset Couture. Just a few minutes ago she had said she wasn't going to buy anything expensive now here she was Charcoal pocket shirt. "How much?' Her voice was bitter. She wasn't angry at Julie, no she was angry at herself, she was suppose to be saving money but here she was buying things that she didn't need. 'What Gaia needs is a bank..' she thought .
"1,000 gold please" Julie said,. Alex handed her the exact amount and hurried to leave "Thank you for shopping at MTV's Sunset Couture, a Promo code will be Pmed to your Inbox." Even though Alex had lived in Gaia for two years she was still not use to the weird words, such as Pm and inbox. She left the store in a hurry and quickly went home to change into her new shirt.
Her hair was done in Girls Rainy black and her eyes were the same yellow demonic. She had pale skin and wore the above mentioned Charcoal Pocket shirt and Neutral starter urban girl pants . The fourth Amigo Lucki shoes adorned her feet and one her hands were her favorite Black gloves. On her stomach unseen by the world was A red solar flare tattoo she had recently gotten. She quickly slipped on her Black leather dress watch and got her Black sport bag and ran out the door.
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Review.
I know it is realy short but don't worry, i'll try to make it longer.
High critique is encouraged but no shit like: YOU SUCK! YOU CANT TYPE N00B.
I want a civilized review please.