OK no one liked my other story so i am going to make a new one using to tips people gave me.
Don't not have a go at me because i am not a good writing.


This story is about Gwen and who she really is.

Jack/Gwen & Owen/tosh (Owen and tosh are still alive it better that way)

Hope you like it . let me no


Gweneth

It was 6 o clock on one wet night in was sat around was teasing tosh about how she always has her laptop with was sat reading a book about coffee. jack and Gwen were asleep on the had her head on jacks chest and jack had his arms around her.
''look at them'' tosh said to Owen. ''yea cute'' he replied.

The rift alarm goes off.
'' WHAT" jack and Gwen said it together.
"rift active" tosh replied.
"What is it tosh" jack asked
"I don't no jack someone should go check it out''
"OK the plan is this me and Gwen will go and check its OK and Tosh keep us posted.

Jack and Gwen left the hub and went to the SUV their got in and drove to a house on the outskirts of Cardiff.
"so jack who lives hear"she asked "no ones" " its been aboded since 1869 after it got blowup " as he grinned at her "oh OK" she said as she got out the SUV.
their walked in the the house "stay close Gwen" he said so she moved closer to him and grab his hand.

jack tured his earpiece on. "tosh we are in "jack said

"OK jack be careful the rift spike is coming from the basement" tosh replied

"thanks tosh we will keep you posed "he said. Jack and Gwen moved along a corridor to a room that seemed to be glowing with a blue light."jack what we going to do"Gwen said with a scared tone."not sure " he said as he held her hand more. there moved closer. Gwen grabbed her head and fell to the fall," GWEN GWEN come on speak to me "he said with a worried tone "jack help " Gwen barley wisperd

The door to the room busted open. jack held Gwen to his chest. " give her to us" a voice said

"NO" jack showed

" give her to us jack harkness" the voice said once more

"NO" jack screamed

Jack pick up Gwen and ran out the house.


please R&R