Good day everyone :D This is the new fanfic I will be writing sort of with my cousin XDmelly on deviantart. She basically did the character designs and helped with brain storming. However she did not wirte any of this so no reviews about how it's not really my fanfic because she helps me. I decided the main plot points as well as the wishes.
(she was the one who told me to put this at the beginning of the story)
Puella Magi Mel Magica
Chapter 1: Am I selfish?
An orange soul gem with a diamond fell to the ground. A figure in the shadows picked up the dull orange soul gem. The gem was lifted into the air by a shadowed figure. "It's still a bit light should we wait a bit?" she said tossing the gem up and down in the air. "nah it may be hard to catch her again" she threw the soul gem on the ground and stepped on it, breaking it into thousands of orange pieces. "It's far too annoying when they don't cooperate"
A small white creature jumped out from behind the figure. "are you going to look for more magical girls" it said in a cute voice.
"of course" the girl smirked. "you'll help me correct?" the shadow figure turned to another shadow around the corner.
"please reconsider" the voice mumbled.
"Miyu, are you awake yet" a girl school uniform, said looking at her friend laying in bed. "were going to be late". Her name was Alison she was a studios and friendly girl her hair was blonde and tied in pigtails and she had brown eyes.
The girl in her bed was named Miyuki, more often going by Miyu was a more laid back girl with brown hair and green eyes.
"Ally, we go through this everyday. You prance into my room give me some kind of pep speech only for me to wake up at the same time and run to school anyways" Miyu stretched out in her bed.
"maybe I won't wake you up anymore" Alison said crossing her arms.
"but I thought you were my bffl" Miyu sat up and looked around the room for any sign of her uniform " uh...I forgot to get my uniform from the laundry room" Miyu said rubbing the back of her head.
"what would you do with out me" Alison sighed. "go brush your teeth and stuff I'll get it" Alison sighed once more And left the room.
Miyu stood up and looked in the mirror and saw a note 'remember your uniform, love mom' Miyu looked around her room and saw both her gray and black uniforms on the floor. "Alison going to kill me" Miyu sat on her bed and brushed her hair.
Alison walked into Miyu's room holding out the grey plaid skirt, black sweater-vest and white golf shirt. "I couldn't find any of your socks. And I noticed your uniform wasn't there"
"Ally...did you bring your spar one I'll love you forever if you let me borrow it" Miyu pleaded.
"I didn't bring the extra one, my mom is dry cleaning it today" Alison said looking on the ground. "when was the last time you washed those?"
"well last week I forgot to wash them as well, so, two weeks?" Miyu laughing playfully. "I could just wear them again" Miyu tilted her head putting her skirt on.
"Miyuki Anne Miller! Don't you dare" Alison put her hands on her hips. Alison then looked at the clock "oh crap were gonna be late!"
"we always leave at this time" Miyu said slipping on her black dress shoes.
"I told you I don't like running to school and being all sweaty when I get there" Alison pouted.
"It's not like have a boyfriend or anything" Miyu smirked.
"I'm not going to get one being all sweaty and smelly" Alison crossed her hands. "let's just go".
"see we got here in time" Miyu said leaning back in her chair. The school's announcements were playing so all the students took this time to chat.
"barely" Alison sighed running a hair brush through her hair and re-tied her pigtails. "I wasted my entire morning doing my hair and it just got all sweaty"
"when we were little it took you like a minute" Miyu said re-adjusting her uniform collar. "we should wear ties"
"no that would be silly looking" Alison pouted.
"the guys wear ties" Miyu said pointing to the nearest boy. The boys uniform was the same as the girls uniform but with grey pants and a grey tie. "we would look the same" she said not hearing the announcements end.
"Miyu the announcements have ended" Alison whispered.
"Miyu if you have problems with the uniform discuss it with the principal" the teacher said walking towards the classroom door.
"sorry " Miyu said politely.
"anyway today we have a new student" the teacher said opening the door. A girl with shoulder length dirty blonde hair and bright aqua blue eyes walked in.
"my name is Melanie Le Fèvre" She smiled, she looked at the class "but please feel free to call me Mel. It's nice to meet you all"
Mel looked over to Miyu and Alison. They felt something odd about this girl, she had a kind of magical feel to her or as if she had a guardian angel around her. But all they could tell she was not normal.
"you may sit 3rd row 2nd seat from the back" she said pointing to the empty seat next to Miyu.
"hello, I heard the teacher call you so is your name actually mew?" The new girl whispered as she sat next to Miyu.
"not mew Miyu, M-I-Y-U. It's short for Miyuki" Miyu wishpered back.
"oh so your japanese?" Mel asked.
"no my mother just liked the name" Miyu explained "Le Fever, that's french right?" she added unaware her voice was getting louder.
"It's Le Fèvre, but yes it's french" Mel replied her voice getting louder too.
"Miyu your voice is loud" Alison said turning in her seat unaware her voice was just as loud if not louder.
" , , Fèvre please refrain from speaking in class" the teacher said tapping on Miyu's desk.
"sorry" the girls said to their teacher.
"as I was saying because of the storm approaching we will be having physical education first period today" the teacher said tapping her desk with a pen. "so please proceed to the change room"
"yes " the class in unison.
The class stood up and all scattered around the class to talk to their friends before leaving the class to get changed. Miyu pouted a bit and walked towards the teacher. " I kinda forgot to wash and bring my uniform"
" I have discussed this with you before if your mother is busy you have to clean your own clothes" sighed slightly.
"I know, I'll try harder" Miyu pouted.
"however, not that I support your behavior but this does solve one problem" said nodding. " Fèvre has yet to get the uniform and instead of just sitting around I would like you to show her around the school"
"oh cool! Come on Melanie let's go I have tonnes to show you" Miyu cheered galloping towards Mel.
Miyu lead Mel through the halls of the school showing her random and probably unnecessary things "this is wear I found a cool pen, oh and a really cute couple hangs out here, they are always kissing and speaking all sappy, it's kinda gross" Miyu said pointing things out.
"hey Miyu can I ask you something?" Mel asked in a serious voice.
"yah sure" Miyu said turning around to face Mel.
"if you could have any wish granted would you? Even if it dangerous?" Mel asked seriously.
"any wish?" Miyu poked her chin "it would have to be worth it, like better sports abilities or something. But I would it would be cool to have any wish granted"
"Even if it changed you would you be willing to change who you are for a wish?" Mel asked looking directly at Miyu to the point where it made Miyu feel nervous.
"dude your being kind of serious and starring its kind of freaky" Miyu said backing away from Mel a little bit.
"Your instinct is telling you to wish for something selfish instead of a selfless wish, many people would wish to heal someone or want to save something they can't" Mel tilted her head a bit. "you passed my test we can be friends now"
"so wanted to see if I'm selfish?" Miyu looked confused.
"yep, we'll not so much selfish more realistic." Mel smiled "I asked people before and they always say something like I want to cure cancer or stop world hunger, but you realize that your wish should be for you" Mel said patting Miyu on the back.
"It's not that big of a deal its not like their is anyway for me to get my wish granted" Miyu shrugged her shoulders.
"I was just testing you anyway" Mel smiled walking ahead of Miyu. "I think we should probably start looking around more"
"yah sure" Miyu said looking at the clock in the hallway. "we have about 30 minutes"
*~* after school *~*
"can I come over to your house?" Alison asked Miyu.
"of course, but why? I thought you were going to study at the library where that cute grade 12 guy works" Miyu said winking at Alison.
"I can't I got really really sweaty from running and in I smell bad and my hair is messy I can't go now" Alison said blushing and covering her cheeks.
"yah you do stink" Miyu said in a joking tone.
"you better be teasing me...What if he sees me in the hallway?" Alison said putting her head down on the desk.
"don't worry she's joking you don't smell that bad" Mel said tossing her bag over her shoulder.
"That bad...Melanie your almost as bad as Miyu" Alison pouted.
"Melanie do you want to walk with us?" Miyu asked. "we have a quicker way out of the school"
"no thank you, I have something important to do" Mel said. The girls watched Mel walk out of the classroom.
Alison looked toward the door then at Miyu "there is something odd about that girl" Alison whispered "its as if she is hiding something"
"well we just met her today" Miyu said stretching her arms. "though I get what you mean"
"well let's go before it gets too late" Alison said standing up.
The girls walked down the hallway towards the back entrance which lead towards Miyu's house quicker than the other way.
"Ali...do you think I'm selfish?" Miyu asked looking at Alison.
"Of course you are" Alison said without even thinking.
"hey" Miyu pouted.
"your not a narcissist, but your probably not going to risk your life for the sake of others" Alison said walking ahead of Miyu. "why do you ask?"
"Mel asked me if-" Miyu started but was stopped by Alison grabbing her arm and dragging her behind a nearby wall.
"its him" Alison whispered as a tall 12th grade male student walking with his friends.
"him?" Miyu tilted her head.
"the 9th graders been staring at you again" one of his friends said.
"its okay the little 9th graders are cute there like little kids that think they are grown up" another friend said.
"its a little annoying I can't go to the library without being stared at" the boy said stretching his arms "its bad enough the school forced me to volunteer there"
The boys walked off speaking of their plans for the upcoming weekend. Alison turned and sat against the wall.
"Alison, it's okay there are plenty of fish in the sea" Miyu said trying to comfort Alison.
"I thought he was going to start to like me he was so nice, I was going to talk to him everyday at first he'd hide his feelings because I'm so much younger than him but eventually after spending more and more time together we'll fall in love and even though he is a little bit of delinquent he'll end up being a really sweet guy and he'll tell me he helps out at the library so he can get access to books he can read to his sick little sister " Alison said in a loving sounding voice.
"you play to many of those dating sim games" Miyu sighed "I told you that's not how it works" this was not the first time Alison had unrealistic expectations of how boys and relationships work.
"you never know" Alison sighed a bit. "if I wasn't so 'cute' then maybe guys would like me"
"but you are cute you just need to find the right guy" Miyu said patting Alison on the back.
"Maybe it would be easier to look for a more nice guy type. Maybe a childhood friend I never thought more of than a friend. Or the guy who really likes me but has like a scar or something and I never noticed him" Alison sighed.
"Ali just be patient, I'm your only childhood friend anyway" Miyu said walking out of the school doors. Alison walked slightly ahead of Miyu a bit. 'am I really that selfish. I would risk my life for others...right?' Miyu thought to herself.
'I can offer you that chance to see if you would or not' a high pitch voice said.
Suddenly the girls were surrounded by darkness. "Mi-Miyu, I can't see anything" Alison said sounding afraid.
"I can't see anything either" Miyu said stepping towards the sound of Alison's voice .
"I'm scared" Alison wishpered holding out her arm and melt Miyu's arm.
Suddenly circles of light appeared and started circling around Miyu and Alison. Upon closer inspection they appeared to be human shaped beams of light holding hands in a circle. They all started to creepily giggle.
"what are these things Miyu?" Alison asked.
"how the hell am I suppose to know" Miyu replied.
The figures got closer and closer to Miyu and Alison. The shrieking noises got louder and their light got brighter. It was almost unbearably bright and loud.
"if you want to fight I can help you" a strange high pitched voice said outloud.
"Miyu, I don't want to fight" Alison said in a panicked voice as one of the light figures almost touched her.
"Make a wish and become a magical girl" a small creature appeared. It looked like a mix of a rabbit and cat. It was mainly white with a pink and purple puff around its neck. It also had yellow pigtail like puffs on the side of its head.
"a magical girl?" Miyu questioned.
"ahhh" Alison shrieked as the the light touched her.
"Ali!" Miyu said turning around to see Alison's arm was burnt.
"if you make a wish you can help her any wish" the creature said.
"I don't know" Miyu said shaking a bit.
"Miyu help!" Alison was pushed down to the ground and the light figures were surrounding her.
"Alison!" Miyu clenched her fist "ok I'll fight,...I wish to excel at all sports not just swimming"
A blue light surrounded Miyu "your wish has been granted, take hold of your power"
And blue light appeared infront of Miyu. She reached out and felt and odd sensation surge through her body. A object shaped like a fancy egg appeared before her. The light settled down and Miyu appeared in blue shirt with white sleeves. The left sleeve was detached and the elbow. She wore a short blue skirt with dark blue shorts underneath and blue flip flops. On her upper left arm was a blue teardrop shaped gem.
"Miyu?" Alison said as the blue light disappeared. The light figures moved back but didn't disappear.
"what now?" Miyu said looking at her outfit.
"fight" the white creature replied.
"I don't know how" Miyu said
"Don't worry I'll help you!" a familiar voice called out. A purple heart shaped beam floated over and caused the strange figures to disappear.
"wow who did that?" Alison said standing up and looking around.
"yo" the person the voiced belonged to walked out.
"Mel? Your a magical girl?" Miyu tilted her head "you saved us thank you so much" Miyu said running up and hugging Mel. Mel was wearing a purple vest with yellow buttons. She had white puffy sleeves with a purple ribbon around each of them. She also had a white pleated skirt and purple boots. On the back of her head were angel wings with a purple heart shaped gem in the middle.
"I see Nanabey made a contract with you" Mel said looking at Miyu's outfit. "congratulations, but you better learn to fight these were just familiars. You were seconds away from dying"
The area surrounding them returned to normal as did Miyu and Mel. "you got some explaining to do" Alison said facing Mel and Nanabey.
"of course" Mel smiled "Nanabey here can grant you any wish and you become a magical girl. You then go around the city protecting people from evil witches"
Authors note: Miyu's wish is kind of lame but I am a aware, she reacts fast to protect her friend. Please be patient.