So, my first story you guys! Never EVER have i written before so rewiew if i shold kepp the storey on
And i do NOT own that 70's show ore anything in it! Im just a big fan of the series and especially Jackie and Hyde.
And this is a kind of continue to the story Season 8 Redo by tanith75
Dont know the writer or anything, just love the story, this is not really in a time, jsut that the twins are 16 years old
The title really has nothing to do whit the story, just the first song i could think of and it got the name since iäm bad whit those things =)
And the song is Leaona Lewis, better in time. And i do not own that either =) Now read away
(alarm rings)
Hyde: Yeah, yeah, whatever (turns of hte alarm))
Jackie: What time is it?
Hyde: 6 am.
Jackie: ah, dammit.
(Jackie gets out of the bed and kisses Hyde on the cheek)
Jackie: Breakfeast in about 45 minutes
Hyde: mhm...
Jackie walks over to the bathroom room, she looks really tired and is only wearing a robe and has her hair up in a really messy pony--tail. She gets in looks in the mirror and takes up her tooth brush and starts brushing
Back in there room Hyde has gotten up and is walking to the bathroom and sees Jackie brushing her teeth.
Hyde: Morning babe (He says in a tired voice)
Jackie: Morning (she says kinda cheerfully)
Hyde: Well you sound happy
Jackie: Well wats not to be happy about? The sun is shining, the kids are sleeping and i got an appointment at the Fez's beauty saloon later.
Hyde: Thats great babe (He says with a smile)
Jackie: Could you get out?
Hyde: What? (He says dissapointet)
Jackie: I'm just gonna jump in the shower
Hyde: Can I join ya? (He says whit a smirk)
Jackie nods and smiles and closes the door after them...
About 10 minutes later they both walk out looking really happy and wet, Jackie looks at Hyde and say
Jackie: I'm just gona wake up Layla and Jagger, could you put on som coffe (Then she kisses him on the cheek)
Hyde: Sure
Jackie smiles and walks over to Laylas room and walk in and finds her daughter sleeping peacefully in her bed, she sits on the edge of the bed and tryes to wake her up
Jackie: Morning sweetie
Layla: Ahh, what is it?
Jackie: It's about 6,30 am, time to get up (she says whit a big smile) And breakfeast will be ready in about 15 minutes
Layla: Whatever, i'll be there in a minute (she says as she jawns)
she walks out of Laylas room and heads over to Jagger, when she walks in his allready up sitting at his desc doing his homework
Jackie: Morning sweetie, (she looks at him weird) Why are you doing your homework at 6,30 in the morning?
Jagger: Er, uhm, yeah you see, uhm. I was out whit Ally kinda late yesterday, so i didn't do my homewoork. And Mrs: Lawson is gonna fail me if i dont get it in on time.
Jackie: Jagger, your not supposed to go out before you homework is done?
Jagger: Well, whatever. I dont really care (he says annoyed)
Jackie: Well you gotta care, it's important you know (she says firmly)
Jagger: Whatever
Jackie: And you have to get that homework ready now if you didnt yesterday
Jagger: That's cool
She walks to the kitchen finding Hyde sitting at the table, she walks over to the refrigirator and takes out milk eggs and butter and gets some flour from the drawer and starts making pancakes
Jackie: Jagger is doing his homework (she says annoyed)
Hyde: Well whats so bad about that? (he says surprised)
Jackie: Oh, i dont know? Maby the fact that he is doing them now!
Hyde: Now? (looks at the clock) att 6,35 in the morning? Why?
Jackie: Yes, now. At 6,35 in the morning, cuz he was out late whit Ally yesterday
Hyde: Wow, Forman and Donna let Ally be out late, that is actually a shock
Jackie: seriously Steven, i dont like that he skips his homework for girls, or boys, or anyone for that matter!
Hyde: Oh, come on Jackie. Remember when you were 16? Fun times, being out late, skipping homework, picking up chiks times, you know good times?
Jackie: No? I dd all my homework, i was not out that late, and i did not pick up chiks, I mean guys, whatever.
Hyde: No but you had parents that didnt let, and se where that put you, hu? ( he says proudly)
Jackie: Yeah, its horrible! I'm married to the best guy on earth, have the best kids i could ever imagine, i have great friends and i am a stay at home mom.
Hyde: Okey, so it worked out for you? Doesn't for everyone
Jackie: Shore it does, oh hi sweetie ( she says cheerfully)
Layla walks in looking like she has had no sleep at all
Layla: Morning mom, dad. Whats for breakfeast
Hyde: Morning
Jackie takes the pancakes out of the pan and puts them on a plate
Jackie: Pancakes ( she says smiling)
Jagger: Morning. (He says walking in to the room and sitting down at the table)
Hyde: Mornig, now why didn't you do you homework yesterday?
Layla: He was to buisy frenching Ally all night
Jagger: oh shut up!
Jackie: Jagger!
Jagger: Whatever, i was with Ally and we got kinda late
Layla: Yeah, you se it takes time for Ally to sneak out of her house then in again, specialy since you where at the watertower till 1 am.
Jagger: Yeah, and how do you know i was there? Has somthing to do with you and Betsy being there with us?
Hyde and Jackie looks at them both seriously
Layla: Hey, i did my homework! And i was home at 1am!
Hyde: Uhm, yeah but the sneaking out Ally part is the part that you shouldnt mension. Cuz thats is the real angry part. Now why did you do that?
Layla: Cuz Jagger wanted to french her
Jagger: Oh you shut up barbie how bout last week when you and George where out till 2am, that night you where the one to sneak in
Hyde and Jackie at the same time: WHAT?
Layla: OH! You moron!
Jagger: Bite me barbie!
Jackie: HEY! you both stop it!
Hyde: Look, get ready for school, and we will talk later.
After they leave Jackie sits down at the table and starts drinking her coffee, while the Hyde takes the kids to school and go to work.
Yes, i am a bad writer, could you just rewiew and tell me that? =)
Cuz i wanna know if i should continue =)