Summary- Instead of Chrom finding the avatar on the ground, he found THEM on the ground. How would these twin avatars have affected the story? Includes both Male and Female Avatars. Also some slight changes. Or drastic if I feel like it. Definite pairings, (M)AvatarxAnna, (F)AvatarxHenry. All other pairings I shall make as I go. The male's name shall be Silver and the female's name shall be Gold. Also the female will be a dark mage at the start instead of a tactician, because I want too. As to how they look like, think of the default looks for each one, except their hair is black and Gold is a dark mage. Genre- Romance/adventure/humor. They won't have the typical avatar personalities and they will act like…well, think Henry only a little less crazy and not bloodthirsty. I'll develop their individual personalities as I go along.
IMPORTANT NOTE! This is an updated version of chapter 1 because the original chapter sucked. Again, thanks Gunlord500 for you advice! Now it's less hair pulling, raging, smashing your computer with a hammer inducing.
Chrom: It's about bloody time you started this fic you said you'd make!
Me: In my defense, I was being STAHLed, by school and laziness.
Henry: NYA HA HA HA! Nice PAWN you made there BSA!
Me: Thank you. Thank you very much. You have also EGGxecuted a nice pun yourself.
Henry: That's CAWS we are epic!
Me: I think we are going to be good friends.
Chrom: Will you please stop it! It's annoying!
Me: NEVER!
*Chrom draws Falchion*
Chrom: I mean it
*I pull out a lightsaber, and use the force to shoot force lighting at Chrom*
Chrom: NNggghh!
Me: Never threaten me! Remember, as long as I have the epic ability to type on a computer to give me power of the story and look up other awesome powers, you be helpless. Ok? Ok.
Chrom: BSA…..just…..start…..the….
*Chrom faints*
Me: Wonder what he was going to say. Maybe he realized how to fix the SHOCKmarket.
Henry: NYA HA HA HA HA! We are going to be besties for life and beyond!
Me: We will. Now please do the disclaimer?
Henry: OK! BSA doesn't own FE awakening. Or any puns. Or Star wars.
Premonition(aka, the dream of something terrible is going to happen)
Chrom charged straight at Validar with Falchion in hand. The sweat they poured, the blood they shed, the tears they shed, it will now have meaning as they will finally end this mad man and his sick plot. Chrom starts to slash at his foe, only to be repeatedly blocked by Validar's dark magic. Chrom falters for a moment as Validar takes advantage of this by blasting him with dark magic, causing Chrom to crash into a pillar.
"DIE FOOLISH PRINCE!" Validar says as he launches another shot of dark magic, only to be blocked by a ball of Dark and Thunder magic. Validar looks angrily at the culprits and sees Chrom's tacticians and companions, Gold and Silver. Validar starts charging up his magic again and screams,
"Fine then! I'll kill all of you! I can always fix your torn limbs later anyway!" He starts to fire dark shots of magic and Gold counters with her own Dark magic. Meanwhile, Silver is feeding Chrom an elixir to heal him.
"Thanks Silver." Chrom says as he gets up. "Now let's end this bastard's plan!" Silver takes out his Brave Sword, nods in agreement and both charge at Validar. Validar, too busy keeping Gold from laying a hit on him, didn't notice Chrom and Silver until they started slashing into his skin. Unable to deal with all three at the same time, he unleashed a burst of magic around him that knocked back all three of them. Chrom immediately got back up and charged again while Gold and Silver stayed behind to charge up their dark and thunder magic.
"Ready Gold?"
"Ready." Both took out their tomes and started chanting. Chrom and Validar resumed their stalemate, each trying to land the finishing blow.
"Why won't you let me kill you already? Don't you want to see your precious sister, what's her name again? It's right on the tip of my tongue, BUT I GUESS IT FELL TO IT'S DEATH! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" Validar laughs as he begins to tire out the angered prince.
"DON'T YOU DARE SPEAK HER NAME YOU SNAKE!" Chrom jumps up into the air and brings his Falchion crashing down on Validar, causing him to stumble back. Gold and Silver see this opening and fire their charged up magic at Validar, ending his life. Chrom looks down and sighs in relief, and then turns back to Gold and Silver, and says while smiling,
"We did it. We finally did it!" They have a group hug. But then, Validar gets up for a brief moment, anger blazing in his eyes at the fact they stopped him, that he wont see the coming of his master. The determination to bring him to life still eminent.
"This isn't over you CHILDREN! BOW BEFORE THE COMING OF MY MASTER!" and fires one last shot of magic at the group before vanishing in a puff of smoke. Before Chrom could say no, Gold and Silver take the blast of magic for him and are knocked back several feet. Chrom runs to their side to help them up.
"Are you two ok? You two look a little woozy." After helping them up, they look back on the spot where Validar once was.
"Thanks to you two, we live to see a tomorrow." Gold and Silver see flashes of deep bloody red. They start to lose feeling in their feet, then legs, and it keeps spreading. Their breaths quicken, they start to shake, and they lose the feeling in their abdomen, then arms, and now the rest. They slowly start charging their magic and look in horror at the floor as they realize what they were about to do. They scream and scream and protest in their minds, but their mind and bodies won't listen. They continue to charge up their magic until Chrom notices.
"Hey, wha- Uh…ghh….." Chrom never got to finish his sentence as Gold and Silver stuck two spears of dark and thunder magic into his abdomen. Chrom falls before them before he can say anymore. Gold and Silver look at their hands, still tingling with magic. Then they look at each other, wide eyed in realization, they each were missing one of their eyes. In place was an eye, full of anger, hatred, lust for destruction, desire to murder, full of vengeance. They can't even weep for their fallen friend, as Grima fully takes over their bodies, and laughs manically through them. Grima laughs, because now the end of all humans has come, and he has the hunger to ensure it.
End of premonition
Twins asleep on a field
Chrom, his little sister Lissa, and Frederick, were walking along the dirt road to Southtown when they spotted two figures on the plain. The figures looked unconscious to them and decided to help. Frederick however says, "Milord, it could be brigands and it could be a trap."
Chrom responds, "Frederick they're unconscious and need help. I will not deny anyone that because of some doubt."
"I still advice to proceed with caution Milord." Chrom and Lissa walk up to the figures to see. Both had black hair, one was a man and one was a woman. They looked oddly similar, possibly twins and seemed between the ages of twenty and twenty five. The woman wore the garb of a dark mage. The man had a robe on with purple markings along the sleeves.
"Chrom! We have to do something!" says Lissa.
Chrom asks, "What do you propose we do?"
"I don't know." The mysterious figures start to slowly open their eyes.
Chrom looks at them and says, "I see you are awake now."
Relieved to see they are alive, Lissa smiles, "Hey there."
Chrom says, "There are better places to take a nap then on the ground you know. Both of you, give your hands." Chrom reaches out to each of them. The man grasps Chrom's right hand with his own and notices a strange mark on his right hand with three eyes. It looks incomplete, like there should have been another half. It was the same for the woman, only it was on her left and it mirrored the man's mark. Chrom pulls both of them up and asks, "Are you two alright?"
The woman and man respond, "Yes, thank you Chrom."
Chrom asks, "Oh, so you two know of me?"
The woman says, "Ah, no, we ugghhh, my head!"
The man adds, "Sorry it's… just really fuzzy. I don't even remember who I am."
The woman nods and adds, "Me either."
Frederick says, "So you know Milord's name but not yours? Don't you two think that's suspicious?"
"Either way we're taking them back to town to sort the matter out." says Chrom.
The woman retorts with, "HEY! Don't we get a say in this?"
Ten minutes later...
As they are walking back to town the man asks, "Are we to be your prisoners or what?"
"Peace friend, well let you go once we establish you are no enemy of Ylisse," answers Chrom.
"Ylisse?" The woman asks.
"You two never heard of the halidom? Somebody pay these actors! They play quite the fools!"
"Stop it Frederick! Now we haven't properly introduced ourselves. As you both know I am Chrom. The delicate one here is my little sister Lissa."
"I am not delicate! Sorry, my brother can be thick sometimes," says an annoyed Lissa.
"That's alright. I'm Silver and this is my twin Gold," says Silver. "…Where did that come from? Looks like we've remembered our names and relation at least."
"Good for you two. Now this here is our mother hen Frederick the Wary," says Chrom.
"A title I wear with pride. Gods at least would let one of us have the necessary precaution," Frederick says.
"We understand your skepticism Sir Fredrick. But we told you all we know, we really are amnesiacs." says Gold.
"Chrom look!" Lissa says suddenly as she points towards a nearby village by the name of Southtown, which is ablaze.
"Brigands no doubt, come on everyone!" exclaims Chrom.
Lissa says, "What about Gold and Silver?"
"Unless they too are on fire, they can wait!" says Chrom as he, Lissa and Frederick run towards Southtown.
Gold looks to Silver, "Silver, we have to help them!"
"Right. What do we have that we can use as a means to kill armed thieves?" They both looked what they had on them.
Gold says, "I have two books, one purple and one red. I think these are called… tomes?" She holds a flux and standard fire tome and tests them out on a nearby rock, destroying it.
Silver says, "I have a Thunder tome and a bronze sword." He tests the tome on a nearby rock and destroys it. He then tests the sword on a sapling and cuts it in half.
"Silver, try using the flux tome, it's apparently dark magic. I'll try your sword." Silver attempts to use the magic on a nearby tree, but he couldn't get a single shot out.
Meanwhile Gold tried cutting a tree, but lost her footing and fell flat on her face. "I think we should stick to what we have….Ooowww." says Gold, rubbing her head in pain.
"Di…..tto." says Silver, out of breath.
Chrom and company rush into Southtown, "Blasted brigands! How dare they harm innocent people?!"
Then Gold and Silver rush in next to them. "Chrom, let us fight with you. We are armed and know our way through a fight!" says Silver.
"Sure, strength is in numbers. What do you have?" Chrom says curiously.
"I have a thunder tome and a bronze sword, Gold's got a flux and fire tome."
"Then let's move!" Chrom says confidently.
The company fights their way to the leader...
They have taken care of all the thieves save for the captain, and he didn't look like he was going to surrender. "Come here sheep! Come to the slaughter house!" yelled the bandit as the fight began. Chrom was taking the leader head on while Gold and Silver hang back and used their magic. Frederick and Lissa where hanging back in case of emergency. The bandit focused on Chrom trying to swing at him with his axe and Chrom parrying. Gold and Silver conjured up a ball of darkness and lighting and fired it towards the bandit, enough to tip him off balance. With a window of opportunity, Chrom jumped into the air and drove his sword through the thief's chest, ending his life.
The town was saved and the fires where put out. Chrom turned towards Gold and Silver and says, "That was some impressive fighting you two! Your tactical thinking sure did make things easier."
Lissa adds, "Wow, swords, sorcery, AND tactics? Is there nothing you two CAN'T do?"
Frederick then adds, "Maybe you can also produce an explanation for your presence and skill?"
"We already told you Frederick, we don't remember!" said Silver.
"Frederick, don't scare them off! Would you ever let some fine minds as theirs slip through us?" Chrom beckons to Gold and Silver.
"Muh?" says Gold.
"My militia, the Sheperds, is in need of tacticians. And seeing your skill, I see you two can fill in that role nicely. What'd you say you two? Will you join us?" asks Chrom.
Gold and Silver look at each other and since being twins, they have a telepathic link.
I think we should take it. After all we are not in the best position to roam around given that we lost all our memory, says Gold in her mind.
Ok, agrees Silver.
"OK!" said Gold and Silver in unison with a smile on their faces.
Chrom grins and says, "Alright! Welcome aboard!"
Me: CHROM! WHERE ARE YOU!
Chrom: What?
Me: Do you know the plot of FE13?
Chrom: Yes.
Me: And you know that Lucina can have S rank with someone and get you in laws?
Chrom: I don't like where this is going….
Me: Nothing…I'm going to put Lucina with ONE of the avatar's kids.
Chrom: Then I'll prevent Lu- wait, that means me and Silver are brothers, YAY. Wait….what do you mean ONE of WHICH avatar's kids?
Me: Pa-pa-pa-pa-pa-pa-pa-pa-pa-pa-pa-pa-pa-pa-pa-pa,Pa-pa-pa-pa-pa-pa-pa-pa-pa-pa-pa-pa-pa-pa-ooma-mow-mow,Papa-ooma-mow-mow
Chrom: OH SHIT! HE'S SINGING IT! READ AND REVIEW! AH MY EARS! WHY MUST IT BE SOOO REPETITIVE!
Me: Hey, I like this song, pa-pa-pa-ooma-mow-mow, papa-ooma-mow-mow
*continues on*
"You can't break a man the way you do a dog or a horse - the harder you beat a man, the taller he stands." (Far Cry 2)