You Captured My Heart.
"blah"-someone talking
'blah'-someone thinking
(blah)-someone(usually me) annoying u
Bold-character info/me talking in the beginning and end of the chapter.
Hi everybody! I completley wrote over this story. Well, the plot is mostly the same, but I did the chapters all over again. Enjoy!
Chapter one-Prologue
Kagome Higurashi-your average sixteen year old girl, who just moved back to japan, after sixteen years of moving from place to place. She applied and was accepted to Shikon High and is going to be a junior Hobbies-archery. Lives with her mom, Souta and her grandpa.
"Kagome dear? It's time for school." said Kagome's mom, Mrs.Higurash (i don't know her first name...suggestions, anyone?)
"mmmph" was Kagome's spirited reply.
"Oh, dear. Looks like this will be a hard one. SOUTA! Will you come here and wake your sister? You can by giving her a nice kiss!"
"AGH! MOM! I'm up! You don't need Souta. Really." said Kagome, jumping up brightly-or at least, attempting to.
"OK. Kagome, honey, today's your first day of school! Your uniform's on the chair, ironed and ready. Get dressed, brush your teeth and go downstairs and meet me in the dining room."
"OK, OK." sighed Kagome as she ushered her mom out of her room, slamming and locking the door behind her.
"And Kagome! Don't slam the doors!" yelled Mrs. Higurashi from outside.
"Whatever." Kagome slipped on her uniform, which was made of a white T-Shirt, and a short green skirt.(you know, like in the series) She brushed her teeth and went to get her back pack, slinging it over her shoulder as she ran down the stairs.
"Oh, Kagome, good. You're here." said Mrs. Higurashi."Now, I want to go over some safety rules before you leave for school.Remember to never accept any kind of drug from a stranger, don't let a boy stare at you for too long..." Kagome listened to her mom as she droned on and on and on. She had this lecture since her dad died of lung cancer because of smoking.She snapped back into attention as her mom wrapped up."Now, have a good time at school and make some friends!"
"Whatever. I gotta go now. I'm going to be late." said Kagome, running down the front stairs. As Kagome got to the school gate, she saw whispers following her everywhere."Damn it,I hate being new. Of course, grandpa had to move all the time." Muttered Kagome, tugging at her skirt. "I hate this green uniform! Its fucking short.How do the people think we're going to be warm like this?"As she was walking, she bumped into someone. "Sorry" said Kagome
"It's alright." The person had his back to her. He turned around to look at her. His eyes widened at the sight of her. "Never mind bitch! Forget what I said! And why the hell are you wearing the uniform anyway? Only newbies wear them!
"Bitch?"said Kagome, starting to get angry."Alright, listen up, HOT SHOT. I don't care WHO you are, who you THINK you are, or how POPULAR you are. My name isn't bitch, alright? It's Kagome. Need me to spell it for you? It's K-A-G-O-M-E. KAGOME. Get it right next time!"
"Yeah, right, Kikyou. Like I can't tell it's you." retorted Inuyasha.
"Ohmygawd. Do you need me to spell it for you?MY NAME IS NOT KIKYOU!" shouted Kagome, right into his ears. Kagome huffed and turned, walking away, when she bumped into a girl with long black hair and dark brown eyes. "Sorry." mumbled Kagome.
"Oh, it's alright. I heard someone shouting and I came to check it out. Was it you?" the girl inquired, staring at her curiously.
"Oh, yea, it was me. That idiot over there kept on saying I was Kikyou, so I just got pissed."Kagome said.
"Oh, you mean Inuyasha? He's a real pain in the ass, but if you get to know him, he can be really sweet. My name's Sango, by the way." Sango said.
Sango Tajiya-a sixteen year old, from a line of demon slayers. Also a junior. Hobbies-hitting Miroku with her hiraikotsu. Lives alone with her brother, Kohaku.
"Hi Sango. I'm Kagome."
"Kagome...that's a really nice name. Hey, I bet Inuya-PERVERT!"
SLAP
Sango huffed as she looked down.There, on the floor was a boy with short brown hair tied into a little pony-tail with half closed violet eyes
"Uh, Sango...Wasn't that a little...harsh?" Kagome inquired, felling a bit sorry for the guy.
"Nope. If you get to know him as I do, you won't feel a bit sorry for him."Sango said.
"Uh...Why wouldn't you? I mean, he's not that bad!"Kagome said.
"Aah! A maiden who appreciates me for how I am!" said the boy, jumping up brightly despite the big bump on his head."My name is Miroku.Pleased to make your acquantince.Now, may I ask you, will you bear my child?"
Miroku Houshi-a sixteen year old(almost seventeen) pervert, who asks random pretty girls to marry him.Junior in Shikon High. Hobbies-practicing better ways to charm Sango. Lives alone in mansion with maids and butlers and stuff.
"Huh?" Kagome said, looking at him with his clasped hands around her. "Uh, aren't I a bit to young to thi-AAAGH! YOU LECHER!" Kagome punched him and stared at him. Then, she turned to Sango and said "You're right.I don't feel sorry for him anymore."
"Feh. When will you ever, you perverted monk."said Inuyasha, coming up."Look, uh Kagome. Sorry about that at first.I thought you were Kikyou, this girl...feh."
"Oh, come on Inuyasha. Kagome,"Sango said, turning to face her"Kikyou is a bitch. You should ignore all you can. She's been after Inuyasha since third grade, and Inuyasha won't spend shit with her."
"INUYASHA!" screeched a voice so loud, everybody turned to stare at the enterence.
"Oh shit.She's here."
Well, that's the end! Hope you guys liked it. REVIEW! please, it tells me if you guys like it or not. till next time!