((Hello! I'm starting out fanfictions. If you'd like to know more about the Miller Bros. characters, please go to my Skype, Pehsismath65. Or check out my Animations on /user/Trekker123eski . Thank you, now first the characters are indeed based off of me and a buddy of mine but do indeed have differences. So, fimfiction monitors. Please do not ban this, anyway on with the story!))
It was a bright and average day in Ponyville, as usual Goldsword, a cobalt pegasus stallion with an emerald mohawk mane was dashing above Ponyville, whistling a 20th century earth rock song titled "The power of love". While whistling this tune, an unknown mare caught her attention. She appeared to be a magenta alicorn with a plum and carnation mane traveling with five other ponies to the train station, he landed near the station, he could hear the ponies chatting, one of them with a strong southern accent said "Gee, ah'm getting kinda tired of the Crystal Empire, I mean. Don't we visit it every other week or so?", another with a somewhat British sounding accent said "Oh don't worry! It's still a glorious place, I can't get enough of it.", Gold tuned out of it, and after about 15 minutes, he noticed the train take off. He followed and may as well thought of checking out the empire. He's never been there anyway. He quickly flew on and grabbed onto the back before anypony noticed him. He fell asleep as soon as they went near Flilydelphia. After hours of traveling in the cold, Gold wolk up. Freezing, he looked around the new town and smiled. "Nice placeā¦" He flew around, and silently followed the mares until they arrived at the castle, the guards stopped him. And he trotted away
((So, what do you think guys? Just in case you didn't know, this is going to be sort of a crossover between Equestria Girls and my made up MB background canon. Sorry for such a short chapter, DO note that I'm actually 11 and wanting to give writing a head start. There's still going to be more. But give your opinions, I don't mind negative criticism as long as there's some ideas to improve my fanfic))
