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When Cammie jumps over the cliff and into the river, Mrs. Goode jumps in after her. Cammie goes unconscious and Mrs. Goode captures her. She took her back to the Circle of Caven (COC) headquarters and began to torture her, where she has been for 3 months, 3 days, 18 hours, and 47 minutes.

Cammie POV –Day 1

The last thing I saw was the water all around me the Mrs. Goode's eyes glittering in the darkness and over the roar of the water, I heard her say, "You are a good spy, but not good enough." Then I drifted into unconsciousness. When I opened my eyes, I was strapped into a strait back chair that seemed bolted to the ground.

"Finally awake are you?" a woman said with strait black hair that reminded me of Macey. She had a metal baseball bat in one hand and a walkie talkie in the other. Into it she said, "She's awake." A few minutes later Mrs. Goode walked in and said, "How was your nap Cameron?"

"Fine," I snapped

"Well, grumpy are you? No maker, Zoey will straiten you out." She indicated to the woman with the metal bat. As she said that, Zoey struck me in the leg with the bat. I want to scream out with all my heart but kept my emotions inside. "Like Zach," I thought. Then I put on a mask that would make Mr. Solomon proud. That's when Mrs. Goode walked out.

"Where is the alumni disk?" Zoey asked

"How should I know?" I replied

"Where is it you idiot?"

I decided if I was going to be tortured, I might as well make the best of it.

"Zoey, you know it's not good if you talk about yourself."

There was a shot of pain in my right leg this time.

"Don't back talk me b****!" Zoey spit in my face

"But what will your mommy think if she heard you now?"

That earned me a slap in the face, harder than what I get in P&E. I felt blood trickle down my face.

She asked, "How did you like that?"

"Do you really want me to answer that?" I smirked. Oh God did I just smirk? Zach is rubbing off on me.

"Back to the questions, where is the Gallagher alumni list?"

"Didn't I already tell you? I don't know!"

The bat made contact with my arm and I heard it break with a sickening snap.

"Where is it you imbesole?"

"If I were an imbesole, you wouldn't need me would you?" The metal bat smashed into my head and I blacked out. When I woke up, I heard talking and the spy in me fell still and listened.

"She won't say anything, just keeps back talking me," Zoey complained.

"I'll get reinforcement in for you in a couple months," Mrs. Goode said.

3 months later

Zoey came in and the usual torture began:

"Where is the Gallagher alumni disk?"

"I don't know!"

*SMACK*

"Where is it?!"

"I don't know!"

*SMACK*

That is basically how my day goes. Before she could ask anymore questions, Mrs. Goode walked in with...Liz? No, Liz's bright blue eyes were not shining back at me. Instead they were a dark brown and this woman was a little taller. She was gripping a knife in her right hand. A man walked in after her and had dark brown hair and cold blue eyes. He was flexing a tazer gun in his left hand. "A lefty, hm," I thought, remembering Mr. Solomon's first lesson-notice things.

"Kyle, Bella, make our guest feel cozy," Mrs. Goode flashed a wicked grin before walking out of the room with Zoey. When Bella and Kyle started the torture, I realized they were good, better then Zoey. After an hour of it, I almost cracked. They each took 30 minute shifts. Bella's style was talking about my Mom, Zach and all my friends. And the thing was, I almost believed her.

Because of the way she described them, it made me feel like I was unwanted; Kyle's method was irrigation. But then I reached back into my memory to the time when Liz demolished the room at Gallagher and flattened my paper mache DNA model from the 8th grade. I burst out laughing. Bella jabbed her knife into my side and screamed,

"What the hell are you doing b****?"

Kyle came in as I screeched, "Potty mouth!" and collapsed into helpless laughter. He swung his tazer gun to mu head and fired. I retired into giggles that faded into nothing. But I could still hear them talking when I blacked out. A woman's voice said, "What the hells wrong with her?" That was Zoey. "I don't know! She just started laughing!" Bella answered. "I don't know why we are going into this much trouble just to get her son back." Kyle sounded annoyed. "Shhh keep it down!" Bella said franticly, "you know all of this is being sent to Zach!" I didn't have to be a genius (but I am) to know who 'she' was. They wanted Zach, and I was bait.

Zach POV

After they got me out of the burning school, they drove us back to the Gallagher infirmary. As soon as I woke up, I realized Cammie wasn't there.

"Where is Cammie?" I asked Joe.

"Your mother captured Cammie and is torturing her. She sends us a video of every day, every word and every action." Joe said soberly.

I was already standing up "I want to see them."

"Zach," His eyes were pained. "You don't want to see them."

"Yes, I do. I want to see what Cammie has been going through."

"Okay, follow me," Solomon said.

We walked down to Mrs. Morgan's office.

"Let's start at Day 1," he said, clicking the mouse.

The picture of Cammie filled the screen. She was still unconscious and strapped to a chair that seemed to be bolted to the ground. A woman came in with black hair said," Finally awake are you?" She was carrying a metal baseball bat in one hand and a walking talkie in the other. She said something into the walkie-talkie and a few minutes later my mom walks in.

She asks, "How was your nap Cameron?"

"Fine," Cammie snapped

"Well, grumpy are you? No maker, Zoey will straiten you out." She pointed to the woman with the metal bat. As she said that, Zoey stepped forward to slam the bat into Cammie's left leg. I squeezed my eyes shut only for them to flutter open again when I didn't hear her scream out.

She was sitting there, her leg a bit crooked now, with her face wiped of all emotions. I glanced over at Joe and saw a hint of pride in his eyes. I turned my glaze back to the screen when I heard them talking, that's when I noticed my mom walked out.

"Where is the alumni disk?" Zoey asked

"How should I know?" Cammie replied

"Where is it you idiot?"

Cammie was silent for a moment before saying in a sweet tone,

"Zoey, you know it's not good if you talk about yourself."

I smiled at that one but it quickly faded as Zoey smacked her, drawing blood.

"Don't back talk me b****!"

I nearly punched the computer in fury. But before I could do anything, I heard Cammie reply, "But what will your mommy think if she heard you now?" That earned me a slap in the face, harder than what I get in P&E. I felt blood trickle down my face.

She asked, "How did you like that?"

"Do you really want me to answer that?" She smirked. I smiled again. She was having a Goode thing. Zoey glared at her a moment before saying,

"Back to the questions, where is the Gallagher alumni list?"

"Didn't I already tell you? I don't know!"

Zoey swung the bat at her arm and I heard it broke.

We skipped thru the next few months until we came to Day 99. I could hardly recognize Cammie now, she was so bloody. She had cuts all over her body and I soon saw why. Two people came in, one with a knife.

"Kyle, Bella, make our guest feel cozy." I shuddered inwardly on that word. I knew my mother didn't mean it in a nice way at all. My mom grinned wickedly before leaving the way she came. I watched the next hour with horror written all over my face. Then Cammie started laughing. I was wondering what the hell she was doing when Bella stabbed her side with a knife and screamed,

"What the hell are you doing b****?!"

Cammie laughed some more before screeching, "Potty mouth!" She collapsed into helpless laughter. Kyle came in and tazed her in the head. She slowly relaxed into giggles then into complete silence. After a while we hear Zoey, Bella, and Kyle gossiping outside the door. I could tell Cammie was listening because she stirred some then went completely still.

Zoey: What the hells wrong with her?

Bella: I don't know. She just started laughing!

Kyle: I don't know why we are going thru this much trouble just to get her son back.

Bella: Keep it down! You know all of this is being sent to Zach!

I gasped inwardly, they were after me, and I didn't have a doubt in my mind they would kill Cammie to get me to them.

Cammie POV

I was sitting in my chair (I'm spending so much time in it, I mite as well call it mine) we I heard the door open and a voice say, "Hi Gallagher Girl." I looked up and gasped, "Zach?"

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