Hello my new awsome readers, i´m here to present my first story translated in english so i would love to know if anyone would be able to help me and correct my mistakes.

I hope you enjoy this first chapter, well it´s more like an introduction, that´s why it´s so short, I usually write between 6 to 9 sheets of Word pages. In the next chapter we shall see the Pevenises and Caspian.

One thing i would like to clarify is that i don´t follow the original plot, i just took the characters to write down my own plot. And another thing I would like to clarify is that they changed the ages of the characters so much better with the story, then put them ages:

Peter: 19
Susan: 18
Edmund: 16
Lucy: 13
Caspian: 19

And now I present the new story, remember that the reviews help us writers to improve day by day and inspire us to write even more, so i would love to read you reviews with your opinions and / or concerns.

Klang! Klang!

The sound of chains echoed in my cell. Chains that were tied to me over these years. I can not remember what my life was like before being tied like this. I do not remember if I ever had a mother, a father or perhaps a brother. I do not remember what it was like the wind playing with my hair, the sun giving me it´s heat, running through the pasture.

To be free.

All these years locked up. I wonder what day is it? Is it night or is it a beautiful day? During what season are we?

I don´t even know why i´m here, nor for how long will I be, when I'll go, or simply if ever I can to regain my freedom.

My eyes lowered to my body, stained with dirt, dust and blood ... my own blood. My hands are joined by chains like my feet, my wrists and ankles hurt, they´re bleeding, that part of my skin is red hot after having fought in several attempts in vain to free myself.

I hear the sound of the door being opened followed by a few steps along with malicious laughter. I close my eyes tightly, knowing full well who these people are and their purpose to their macabre tour.

Boom!

My body fell heavily to the ground, my hands and knees cushioning the fall, but being so weak due to lack of exercise and poor diet, my weight did not resist and i fell exhausted.

I feel something warm travel all over my back, something warm and wet. I feel like it travels back and finally I look at my blood red liquid fell on the ground.

It is always like this.

"Are you planning on saying something? " I heard the voice of one man as he laughed at the same time as the others. I just I just stay in bed on the floor, praying that it finally was over and die quietly and peacefully achieved.

"Answer me, mudblood "scream the man while i feel my body being raised and then i heard the sound of the whip be shaken before it hits my back.

My eyes closed tightly, trying to suppress tears that tried to sprout and run down my cheeks. I tried to forget the pain. Suffering.

"The important thing is you do not mind if it hurts"

After a few blows, the men drop my body and I feel almost lifeless to the ground. Exhausted.

My breathing was choppy, blood continues flowing.

My eyes begin to look at my chamber of torture, consisting of some simple furniture, huge windows and a huge open door between.

Suddenly, I watch as a head peeks out the door. The head begins to look in various directions until it meets with the horrible scene of my torture and i watch as it looks horrified. Due to the remoteness of the door and my fatigue I could not identify the figure.

"Take her away to her cell" i heard as the man ordered his men and i smile in relief that the torture was finaly over.

Only for today.

The men lifted me again and I feel like I'm swept away by the back door that led us to the hidden cells. I felt enormous relief and before the door shut behind us, i took one last glance at the other door.

It remained open, but nobody was there.

I felt as the men chainned me again. I felt again the heat of my skin harshly brushed the steel. It was the steel chains that made my wrists and red heels bruised, to the point that they opened the skin and flesh could be seen.

They unleashed to whip me because my body is so weak that it is impossible to escape. Eventually managed to tired me off, the first times I remember having struggled so much that I managed to let the blows made me fall unconscious.

The blood is gushing so that the world around me begins to spin. The cell became my world and now this spinning. I am losing much blood.

As smooth as possible, i lean my head down and close my eyes, trying to calm down and forget about the dizziness and nausea.

Klang!

I listen as the sound of the door is being opened, followed by a few slow steps. I do not hear laughter.

Did the men returned again to give me another beating round? They never struck me twice on the same day, never sent for me twice.

"For Aslan´s sake! What is this?!" I heard a voice whisper, followed by more steps until I felt like something crashed into my foot, causing the chain move again and brushed my ankle hurt. I let out a moan of pain and heard a gasp come near me.

"Look, there's someone here" I heard another voice whisper, voices that I had never heard before. I feel like someone kneels before me and feel like a hand rests gently on my neck.

"She has a pulse but is very mild" whispered another voice after the person remove his hand away from my neck. Slowly I opened my eyes and watched as the figure passed his arm around my waist and the other by my feet, lifting me gently.

"Do not worry, you are safe now..." My savior whispers softly in my ear. I feel like he began to move and after several years, I closed my eyes to rest in peace when I feel a little smile appear right in the corner of my lips.

A genuine smile.

A smile of hope.

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