Thank you Achieving Elysium, I'm sorry that I'm so late. :) Thank you so much and congratulations! Her and She references to her stepMom and Luke's fake voice is the Cyclops. This is a young Annabeth and it starts when she runs away from home and then until Thalia's death.

Always Writing,

-Rrit


I was too young

Isn't that

How

T

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A

G

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C

Stories

Always start?

Well I guess

I was too nieve

I knew it all

OR

So

I

Tho

Ught

But I was mistaken

My flawless logic

Was somehow

Flawed

F

L

A

W

E

D

Such a harsh word

Like regect but more

Graceful

Like mistake

But masked

Like me

But a

W O R D

I'm

A

P

E

R

S

O

N

Dad always said

Sososo

Why?

Would I ever leave?

Is it because she scared me away?

Is it because I realized I wasn't ness asset

Flawless

Is

H

A

R

D

But with out me

My familyfamilyfamily

Is

F

L

A

W

L

E

S

S

I was the flaw

The freak of nature

The Flaw

How funny I was named

A

N

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A

B

E

T

H

When I'm a
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Dad says nonono

But he also told me I was a

P

E

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S

I

N

But I'm not

I really am not

I guess I am a person

But dad lieslieslies

So he probably lied again

I figured out

I'm

Not

A

Human

A

Mortal

I

M

A

The demigod

Thalia and Luke don't lie

They're my family

Better than

D

A

D

Better than her

And mymymy

F

A

M

I

L

Y

Most of all

They

Love|evoL

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M

It's sad

P

E

I

P

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Saysaysay

but it's not

T

R

A

G

I

C

Maybe

They all think thatthatthat

Tangled blonde hâîr

That is never right

Makes me

F

L

A

W

E

D

Tragic{Poor}horrible little girl

The oneoneone

O

N

E

With Luke

Shining 0eyes0 that glimmer

Eyes that promise me

Something my

Fakefakefake

Family could never evereverer give
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M

A real family

O

N

E

That would love|evol mememe

Even though I'm flawed

Together with Thalia

Were

F

L

A

W

L

E

S

S

Because were all flawed

An eye

Different fom Luke's

But with his

Voice

Calls to me

But it's a trick

Like my

F

A

K

E

and

F

L

A

W

L

E

A

S

Family

It lies

Just

Like

Them

It's

M e a n

And I've had enough

I'm angry now

I don't miss that hammer

I

love my dagger

The

D

A

G

G

E

R

From Luke

Thalia's pritty

But she's red

Red is bad

Red looks like blood

But it doesn't drip

Like the soap she had washed my hair with

Yearsyearsyears ago

I miss

T

H

A

T

But I don't stop

I run

From the lies

B u t

He just like her

gets in mymymy way

And then

I do what I've

A

L

W

A

Y

S

Wanted to do

I stab himherhim

Anywhere

I just want to see it flow

The red like likelier thalia

He lied

Hurt me

Hurt thalia

Hurt Luke

Hurt m family

And then I ren again.

Run to my family

Like I did muntjac ago

Rip riprap

Falldropland

It goes

Thalia is

F

R

E

E

She runs to her spear

He is still in painpainpain

His blood isn't red

It's a

Blueblueblue

Brown brown brown

Sand sand sand

D

U

S

T

But he gets up

But so is thalia

Their both

P

U

And her spear moves in a

F

L

A

W

L

E

S

S

Arch

And he turns to

F

L

A

W

E

S

S

Dust

Luke punches

in an arch like Thalia

swooping under the protruding arms and runs back down the hill

to her

I try to follow

but it's no use.

He comes back red

After hours

Thalia died

I didn't understand

but he came back

unlike dad

unlike her

So like Luke

but also black

his eyes don't shine

I don't notice

But the shine has faded

into the dark