Hands on me Chapter 1, an ashes to ashes fanfic

This is a song i fell in love with it's by Vanessa Carlton. I'm not sure how good this is but I had fun writing it :)

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I first saw you at the video exchange
I know my heart and it will never change
This temp work would be alright if you'd call me
You'd call me
I lay awake at night for you
And I pray

I fall to my knees, looking at your face "I have to remember you" Grabbing the sides of the TV set. "I can't forget your face... I miss you"

Tears flow down my face, screaming inside screaming out "I WANT TO GO HOME!"

"But Gen... I don't know what to do anymore!"

"MOLLY!!! I LOVE YOU!!, WHY CAN'T I HAVE BOTH"

"Alex! What's wrong?" came a familiar voice

"Go away!"

"Bolly! We need to talk"

She screamed louder getting up off the floor "Go away Gene before I do this"

"What are you talking about"

"Just go home Gene, before you get blamed for this"

He listened intently, he hears the click of a gun "ALEX! NOO!"

A shot rang out as crashes into the door, to reveal Alex on the floor weeping uncontrollably the gun lay beside her. "Alex! What have you done" he was by her side picking her off the floor hurrying to find out if she had indeed shot herself "Alex don't do that ever again"

"Why?" came her screech "Why, Why, Why I want to go home, to Molly" she flailed her arms around hitting Gene angrily "I want to go home, I don't have the courage to do it"

We'd cross the deepest oceans
Cargo across the sea
And if you don't believe me
Just put your hands on me
And all the constellations
Shine down for us to see
And if you don't believe me
Just put your hands on me

"MUM! Wake up please" she cried holding onto her mother's cold hand she shook it angrily, tears running down her pale cheeks. "I want you back"

When there is not response from her mother, she pulls out a gun, it was her mother's.

"I can't lose you as well, not after Dad left Evan is dead now too it's just me and you Mum" she lets her mother's hand slip from her grasp, walks to the only thing keeping her mother's heart beating. Ripping out the power supply to the machine, she turned off the alarms, went back to her mother's bedside slowly listening to her heart beat fade, and then disappears. "I'll be with you soon mum" she put the gun to her head and pulled the trigger.

The subway radiates with heat
We've barely met and still I cross the street to your door

Gene turned up the heat for Alex, she was freezing and unconscious, he took her into his house laying her on the sofa.

Alex jerked awake she screamed and something makes a loud thump and groans loudly more movement and then a light flicks on. Gene stands there rubbing his head slightly, looking confused and tired. "Alex? What's wrong?"

"Molly..." she slumps back feeling tears run down her face

"Bolls, please tell me what the hell is going on?"

"Molly shot herself" her voice icy with anger and hurt

"What?"

"You heard be Gene, she shot herself because she couldn't be with me"

He made his way over to her sitting on the sofa, half way there and the phone rang "Shit, Bolls stay there" he answered the phone a slight smile spreading across his face when he put the phone down her turned to Alex.

Someday when our stories are told
They'll tell of a love like this
When our descendents are all growing old
1,000 years they'll be singing
Nah-nah, nah-nah, nah, nah, nah

"Molls, really your pregnant?"

She nodded, "Yer mum 3 months today"

"Have you told you sister and brother"

"I'd thought I'd tell you and dad first" she smiled at Gene

"Oh Molly I'm so happy for you" she reached across the kitchen table and hugged her 23 year old daughter smiling widely

"Can an old man hug his step-daughter these days?"

"Oh dad of course you can" they smiled as they squeezed each other tightly.

We'll climb Tibetan mountains
Where we can barely breathe
I'll see the Dali Lama
I'll feel him blessing me
And all the constellations
Shine down for us to see
And if you don't believe me
Just put your hands on me
Your hands on me...

First saw you at the video exchange

Alex remembered climbing the stairs to the station, not being able to breathe scared of what she'd find, or worse what she wouldn't find. Gene opened the doors of CID showing a little girl, brown hair and big eyes, "MOLLY! Is it you?" Alex, frozen in the door

"Mum!" Molly ran to her mother embracing tightly...

Then Alex remembered how everything was different after that point, after she stopped needing to fight to get home, she found Gene. "I love you" they had kissed and gotten married 6 months later, pregnant with her 2nd child after 2 years. Allena had been born first 11 now her brother Barrie who was now 9. She smiled as she watched Molly tell her brother and sister they hugged her gently, not too sure how to react to the news but were very happy. She looked over at her son in-law she smiled at him, and as he walked towards her she got up "I think congratulations are in order Harry"
"Thanks mum" she reached over and hugged him tightly, Gene stood up next looking at him, his face passive. Suddenly Harry found himself in the arms of Gene Hunt, being hugged and congratulated. "Thank you, dad?"

Gene nodded slightly and smiled they shook hands

Alex sat back and watched her family smiling happily glad to still be alive and well, living the most amazing life she could ever wish for.

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