This is my first Fanfic so please don't hate.
This is the first thing I have written
so it's not that good, but I hope you like it!
Anything in () is an authors note.
Peace out,
Capt. Gar.
Lucy Holmes POV
Hi! I'm Lucy and I am finally gonna ask Annabeth out today. She came to school one day in the middle of August, and she had to shadow me. I thought she was just gonna be one of those, typical Dumb Blondes (no offense to any blondes out there, but this is Lucy talking not me). Boy was I wrong!
But first, back to me. I'm Lucy Holmes and I go to Claire's School for Gifted Children, I was in there for my ability to break down people and learn about them just by looking at them. I'm not the most popular girls there but I am someone's to be respected in the social chain of popularity. I have red hair and blue/grey eyes and I'm pretty, but I'm not the most beautiful person in the school. I'm 5'6" and I absolutely adore Annabeth Chase.
She had one of those tans that couldn't be fake and everyone was staring at her, even the teachers (she's like 30 years younger than you, creeps) She was like 5'10", she had long slim legs, that were still built like a runners leg somehow…. She was toned like she worked out, but wasn't overly muscled to where it's weird. But her eyes…ohh…they were this intense gray…like she was analyzing you. Most people thought they were strange, but I could just get lost in them.
Now, you pry thinking, typical Cali Girl, except the eyes, but she is the smartest person in the whole school. (I don't believe any stereotypes in here, so please don't hate, it's just to add to the story)
I have a feeling that she is either bi or lesbian, because whenever a guy try's to ask her out, she rejects them. But the same thing happened with the girls that hit on her too, but I know that she was just waiting for me.
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I spent all morning looking for the perfect clothes to wear, and I decided on a black tank top under a slightly see through gray shirt, and some ripped shorts. I don't really care for the SUPER short shorts, but mine were around lower thigh length.
So that was what I have written for now. Is it too short? And is it any good?
Capt. Gar.