I do not own dark cloud 2
Title: stuck on the past
Edited
Chapter 1: monster friends?
Max and Monica have already defeated the dark element controlling Sirus or emperor griffon. Now Max and Monica are on they're way to the end of the Zelmite mines to get Zelmite ore for the Blackstone railroad.
"So Max, how long until we get to the end of the mine?" Monica (the red haired girl) asked his blonde friend.
"Not long" Max replied
As they walked along the dark mine they encountered a pack of monsters: the first monster was a human size sunflower with three legs and one eye: a Himara. The second monster was a living skeleton with a short dagger and a shield: a skeleton soldier. The third monster was a small elf like monster, its weapon was a dagger, it wore yellow shirt and small blue pants, it was a smiling fairy. The last monster was the most disgusting monster of them all, it had the upper body of an old woman, it had sharp teeth and a really short ponytail, the lower body of the monster was one of an eight legged hairy spider it's name: spider lady. As the kids saw them they immediately prepared to fight the four monsters before them.
The smiling fairy was the first to attack the kids: It charged at Max with his knife, Max Jumped dodging the smiling fairy and fired a bullet at the small monster which killed it. The skeleton soldier was the next attacker, it leaped into the air and right when he was about to stab Max, it burst in to flames, it was Monica that threw a fire ball at the Monster with her magic. The Himara spit goo at Monica at an attempt to get her stuck to the floor (he succeeded). Max ran towards the Himara and attacked it with his Wrench, the monster was struck so hard he fell to the floor instantly, the spider lady healed the monster (which was unusual for spider ladies since they usually only care for themselves). Max handed Monica the soap so she could free herself from the floor. The Himara rose up and looked at max and then at Monica with an unexplainable expression, both max and Monica looked at each other confused but ready to attack just in case. The spider lady then started to mutter a spell; Max fired a bullet at the spider lady, which bounced of the barrier she had created. Monica ran towards the spider lady but got thrown to the ground by the Himara, Monica started to charge a fire ball but when she fired it nothing came out, she noticed a barrier around her hand that seemed to have stopped the fire ball. Monica stood up and leaped in the air, she then fired Cyclones towards the Spider lady; the monster simply moved to the side and started to mutter another spell. Max was able to stop the spell by firing bullets at it. The Himara leaped in the air to and its sunflower started spinning and knocked her into the ground. She was able to stand up and attack the Himara, but the monster used Monica's head as ground so he could jump out of the way. Monica fell down at an amazing speed due to the force the Himara used to jump on. She would have fallen unconscious if Max hadn't caught her.
"How can these two Monsters cause us so much trouble" Max said. The Himara landed and looked at them.
"Maybe they could help" the Himara said looking at the spider lady.
"Are you crazy they are young and…" the spider lady then noticed something "you idiot you blew our cover"
Max and Monica were really confused now; they looked at each other "what do you need help with" Max said breaking the silence. He then helped Monica get up.
"You idiot!" the spider lady said talking to the Himara.
"Well would you prefer doing it your self!" the Himara said a bit offended.
"Umm" Max and Monica said at the same time, confused about what is happening right before they're eyes.
"At the end of the mine there is…" the spider lady covered the Himara's mouth with her hands
"Nothing, nothing is at the end of the mine!" the spider lady said still holding the Himara.
The Himara Bites the spider lady and says "a genie is at the end a he calls him self..." The Himara started to say quickly until the spider lady hit the Himara with its staff
"Shhh!"
"Sure we'll kill the genie"
"I don't care what happens to you but I do not think you and your girl-friend should be interfering" said the spider lady.
Max and Monica both blushed a little "she's not my girlfriend" said max and Monica at the same time only Monica said ' he's not my boyfriend'.
"right right right righ' righ' right" said the Himara and then tried to wink but couldn't since it only had 1 eye so instead it said "wink" max and Monica were still blushing.
"Fine!" said the spider lady "but be warned; the dark genie is a powerful creature he has many tricks in that evil mind of his. You can never be too careful around him.
"Wait did you say the dark genie is at the end of the Zelmite mines?" said Monica.
"Yeah why?" the spider lady asked.
"We need to go there anyway so we could destroy him when we get there" said Max looking at Monica.
"Well then off you go" said the Himara smiling or so it seemed you can't really tell the Himara always looked as if it was smiling.
"One question, do all monsters talk?" Monica questioned.
"No just the ones that were turned from humans to monsters like us although..." the spider lady used a spell to shut the Himara up; she performed the spell looking down as if she lost all her patience.
"You just can't keep your mouth shut! Well now you know we got turned from humans to monsters by the dark genie" she explained looking down remembering that horrible day.
FLASH BACK
"Quick use that goopy thing that you keep in your pocket and get him down here!" The woman cried.
"I'm trying! But he keeps having kids! Which I think it's completely weird I mean isn't he supposed to be a guy genie!" the man screamed. "And either way how the heck could he have kids so fast" he continued still screaming.
The woman looked at him disbelievingly "Will you focus!" she said still screaming.
The dark genie laughed in amusement and then turned to look at the person beneath him "you amuse me" he turned around and faced the woman who was clearly terrified "hmm you know what since you two are so funny ill let you live" said the dark genie with a sinister smile " but with a little twist, you could call it a curse" he then flied upwards and shoots a small green laser at the man and smoke covered him.
Then shoot a purple laser towards the woman and smoke covered her as well "I'll make you more... interesting" said the dark genie and then laughed evilly.
The Himara walked out of the smoke and noticed that he was a monster.
"Does this mean I'm going to have children without a mother?" he said with a traumatized voice "I'm not ready for that."
The dark genie laughed once more "you amuse me" starts thinking "wait what?" the dark genie said now paying attention to what he said
The spider lady walked out and screamed noticing what she had become
END OF FLASHBACK
"And then the genie spared us and let us leave" said the spider lady looking down remembering how beautiful she was "I used to be beautiful" said the spider lady with a tear falling down her face
The Himara took a science tube catching the tear falling from the lady spider's face "you know how much this is worth" the Himara said holding it up "here use this and sell it when possible" the Himara said looking at the bottle confidently
Max took the science tube and looked at it "…"
"Use the money to buy your girl a nice gift" the Himara whispered in Max's ear.
Max turned to the Himara "She's not my girl" he whispered back
Monica suspiciously looked at them wondering what they were talking about.
They continued there quest, as they walked by they kept hearing some steps behind them but every time they checked nothing was there
"Ow!" said a mysterious voice; though you could hardly hear the voice "would you stop stepping on my foot!"
"Well SORRY for trying to walk with three legs why don't you try!" said another voice extending the o on the word sorry.
"that's what's been following us around" said Max looking at Monica "lets go see what it is." Max said this while walking towards the voices.
"Just in case we should prepare to fight" said Monica while catching up to Max.
"I have eight legs and you don't see me complaining!" said the first voice
"Big whoop, you can balance with eight I have two on the sides and one sticking out of my…" after that you could hear a thump.
Max and Monica saw a big rock and a big figure was behind the rock.
"Ow!" said the second voice complaining; though it sounded like it was holding back a few tears. "You did that on purpose!"
"No I did this on purpose" there was a small stomp
"OW" said the second voice "oh yeah well-"
"Huh?" said Max and Monica as soon as they saw what was making all that noise.
There was a Himara and a spider lady choking each other (it was something funny too see as they swung side to side trying to win) then they realized what was standing next to them. "Hello" said the Himara in a comical yet casual tone "just having fun."
Max and Monica prepared to fight.
"WAIT!" said the spider lady letting go of its grip and putting it in front of its body shaking "What you don't remember us?" said the spider lady a little offended "we are your…" said the spider lady while it took the Himara and put one friendly arm around it while shaked her hands in an 'jazz hands' kind of way' "your monster friends!".
Max and Monica put down there weapons. "Oh" said max
"Wait a minute what are you doing following us?" questioned Monica
"Well it's just… we want to help" said the spider lady.
"Yeah" said the Himara looking at Max and Monica hopefully
Max and Monica looked at each other
"Sure" they both said.
"But we will need you to wear something so we could tell its you" said Monica
Max started to think "aha! I got it" he said searching his bag "Here, wear this" max said while handing them a brown ruff cloth.
"It's not really my style, do you have something pink?" said the spider lady
"Seriously?" said the Himara hitting the spider lady with the coat "just put it on"
"By the way what's your name?"
The spider lady instantly smiled "me; well I'm am the most powerful thing in the world me the one who holds great power me who-" the spider lady got cut off by the Himara
"It's Linda" said the Himara a little annoyed "do you have to give that speech every time they ask you your name?"
"Umm… YES!" said the spider lady as if it was obvious.
Monica giggled at there argument while Max watched as if it was his favorite show.
"My name is Hideaki" said the Himara.
"And that's why I need to give the speech; I have an un-cool name like LINDA and you have a cool Japanese name like Hideaki" said the spider lady a little whiny, and it said Linda with a mocking tone.
"Names are names so lets forget about it" said Monica.
"We better get going" said Max while gesturing to follow him and Monica (he was talking to Linda and Hideaki)
END OF CHAPTER
What do you think? There you go edited version. This time (According to my computer) no grammar errors.