Ok.. this is my first time writing transformers fanfics. I cant help my obsession with transformers and their characters. As I am new at this so I would appreciate any constructive reviews for my better writing and for reader's better reading.
And i would like to start my story with my good luck charm dialogue :"AUTOBOTS... TRASNFORM AND ROLL OUT..."
"sam"..."hey SAM" ... Carly dashed inside Sam's bedroom almost breaking the door.
Carly noticed a very little movement on the bed. This was annoying her. "GET UPP... there is man outside."
That made Sam to move quite a bit. He got up groggily "don't act like my mom. Ugh...what is all this shouting for, Carly?"
Carly rolled her eyes while answering " this shouting is all a man who is standing just outside this apartment with a brown box in his hands and he only wants give this to Mr Samuel Witwicky. "
Sam kept on starring even after the explanation. Carly sighed "i think my explanation was good enough for you to understand... now GOOO.."
She shoved Sam out of his bedroom and he came down to the apartment door still rubbing his sleep off from his eyes.
Sam with squinted eyes asked "who are you standing out of my apartment AT SUCH A TIME?"
The man looked indifferently " I am the delivery boy sir. There is a package for you ."
Sam's one brow shot up " this is NOT my birthday or this is NOT Christmas or today is NOT a special day, so who is sending me presents and pulling me out of my bed?"
The delivery boy had a smug expression on his face " my deepest apologies sir, but there is no sender of this package."
Was someone playing pranks with me? But something in his guts told him to accept the box.
"ok give me the box...and get lost now."
The man scuttled down the stairs. Sam shut the door with a loud thud and turned around to see Carly standing with her hands crossed around her chest.
Now I need to deal with my lil girlfriend "what?"
Carly's face showed clear annoyance "don't be rude just because that person broke your sweet sleep."
Sam ignored Carly's that comment because his sleep is very precious to him. He then looked at the heavy brown coloured package." This is my gift by no one"
Carly let out a giggle. "open up the box sweety."
Sam was already tearing off the brown paper. Carly tried to stifle her laughter. But all in vain. Sam looked at her with a quizzical look. But before he could say anything a gasp got out of Sam's mouth.
" what the heck IS this thing?" he pulled out a disc shaped metal object. And then Sam noticed.
Carly was looking at the sides of the disc. She exclaimed " these are cybertronian texts!"
Sam just slowly nodded his head..he said dreamily " another cybertronian relic?"
Carly mumbled to herself " why every cybertronian relic have to land on earth and especially to THIS guy"
Sam looked at her " you said something?"
Carly answered nonchalantly " nothing. Get ready for work. I am making bacon and eggs "
"what? What? Why? What work?" he started jumping from one place to another like a bouncing ball.
"you stop fussing over. Are you planning to keep this relic in our house... it is not a show piece ya know."
" so you are telling me to take this to our autobot friends?"
Carly answered retreating to the kitchen section "you are right boy, so lets go to the NEST base and see what is that metal thing. Okay?"
Sam went off to his garage. He saw the yellow camaro resting inside it.
" morning bee!"
Bee shook a bit, his head lights blinked two times " hello sam, are we going out today?"
Sam felt a guilt of cramping up this huge autobot in such a tiny place. Though bee himself decided to stay with Sam. " yes. We are going to the NEST base."
When bee answered , Sam could sense clear astonishment in his voice " why? Suddenly? "
Sam opened the gate and bee got out of the crampy garage and parked itself in front of the apartment. Sam said " all in good time bumble bee but be happy. You are going to meet your brothers and the captain of the fleet after two long weeks."
Bee blinked his lights for few more times and his growled. Sam chuckled "yeah I know you are celebrating but how much of that celebration remains after I show the reason of going...I doubt"
Bee's excitement shuted out.
hah... that was just the start. things will start rolling down from the next few chapters. and yes please leave a review my readers. every review counts for this new writer.
