(This chapter has been slightly added with more material since it was reworked a bit along with the other chapters.)

The truth is, not everyone is created equal. I learned this truth the hard way. The world itself can be a cruel place, and for some reason it seems that children including teenagers are the first ones to suffer, being viewed as outcasts to society and someone who has no place among everyone else.

But yet, we are thou able to make change.

From what I was told, the world is not as it should be, it is filled with distortion and that 'ruin' could no longer be avoided. And that would help out the trickster who rise up against the abyss of this distortion.

Chapter 1

The Hunter's Origin

Normally when you hear a siren blaring it would mean that trouble was happening. For most people they'd rather avoid it but for some, well we were somehow caught in the middle.

The scene now focuses on what appears to be a massive 5 star looking casino and everyone inside was gambling away mostly their money, most unware of the events taking place tonight.

With alarms alarm's going off everything was pure chaos with two individuals were quickly dashing there way through. No one knew who they were only that the duo were on a mission, to escape.

" Good. Now get running ! " a boyish voice said through their ear pieces followed by a few other voices.

" This our only chance! "

" Stay calm! You can get away now! " another male voice said followed by a girls voice.

" We'll retrieve the briefcase on our end " an intelligent female voice added as the duo continued to dash their way through the hallways before they hid behind a few corners.

" ...Suspects..not..confirmed...hold...your...positions... " a voice said through their ear pieces.

" Hunter and Lord! Do you read us! " the first female voice from earlier asked.

" Loud and clear " my partner said replying. " Were in a bit of trouble, but we'll find another way through. The both of us will meet you all as soon as we can. "

" Roger that. Be careful " the calm female voice replied to my partner.

" We have to move, quickly " My partner said making me nod and before long we continued to run like bat's straight out of hell and as we were doing so two masked men wearing suits came into site.

" Let's take them out! " I said and with little effort me and my partner ripped off their masks causing both figures to crouch backwards turning into black and redish liquids and in their place were two tall bull like monsters with a lower robotic body that growled upon spotting the both of us.

" Let's get this over with " my partner said before a large serpent like creature appeared devouring one of the creatures followed by a feral growl making itself known before it ripped the other one in half.

" Easy " my partner said blankly as we continued on to make our way through the hallways only to see that there were about a dozen more masked men up ahead.

" Were never gonna get out like this, dammit " I cursed. " What now? "

" We need to get higher "

" But we never done that before "

" Now's a better time then never " my partner said making a decent point before we found the emergency exit making our way through and began to race our way up the stair cases.

As we darted our way through a couple of suited men came through one of the doors we were approaching.

" Suspects sighted! " the man said only to be knocked out by me delivering a hard kick to the head kicking him out while my partner broke through some glass grabbing the emergency fire axe and shoved it in place.

" That won't hold forever " My partner said bluntly.

" Then let's keep moving " I said with the two of us continuing to make our way through.

" This is Hunter, come in do you copy?! " speaking through my ear piece.

" I hear ya! " the first female voice replied.

" There's to much security for us to make it through. Were gonna make another exit. I repeat were gonna make another exit! "

" Understood! Be safe! "

" Were almost there! " My partner said but without any question we didn't have the time to notice a single suited man wielding a combat shotgun.

" Look out! " I cried out before all of the sudden with swift motion I knocked my partner out of the gunfire's way taking the hit right in my left shoulder with the force more then enough to send my crashing right through a nearby window shattering upon impact.

" Hunter! " my partner cried out attempting to grab my hand but failed and could only watch helplessly as my body continued to fall to the bottom leading to my certain death. However just by some luck I got lucky and the area around me became more vivid. With quick thinking I used my weapon and slammed it into a nearby building stopping my fall for a few seconds and landing hard onto the ground.

" Hunter?! Hunter come in! Hunter! " the friendly female voice rang through my ears as I slowly lost consciousness. While this was happening it appeared in my vison was obscured most likely meaning I would see the events that would lead me to this situation.

Let the clock proceed back into the past.

Take Your Time...

Day: May 2th. Monday

Time: Early Morning

Location:?

Right about now an alarm clock sounds off followed by a loud groan and a hand reaching out and slammed onto it making it "die" witch was his definition of peace and quiet.

After that was done he slowly smacked his lips a few times like a horse and began to slowly opened up his eyes scanning his room. It wasn't small, more like half medium sized. His bed faced the window frame with his door near the left corner that was also his closet. On top of that his room used to be the basement in order to turn his room into a guest room.

To the right of his bed was a little mini fridge underneath including a black laptop on the top near a 21 inch flat screen TV hooked up to an old Xbox, N64 and finally a PS4.

Sighing very heavily he stretched out his arms into the air and made an attempt to get out of bed only to accidentally roll out of it onto the hard floor.

" Ow... Not the way how I expected that to happen " Zach said to himself before jacking his right arm onto the bed and slowly picked himself up. And with a quick clear view it was now seen that his left arm was nothing more then a stump. Meaning that he had to lose it some time ago. For most people they would think it's to weird and gross, but that's because they had no idea of what it's like.

Then there were his facial features that was really distinct. His hair was dark brown and his eyes were different colors, the left being red as blood and the right blue as the sky. But not only he have that but he had a large scar across his forehead as if something cut right through most likely another injury he got the same time when he lost his arm.

After getting refreshed he headed up the stairs and made a left and proceeded over to a closed door and opened it up revealing two small children fast asleep on bunk beds, a girl on the bottom and a boy on the top.

He made his move on his first target the boy.

" Get up Roku " Zach said in commanding tone with the boys name now revealed making him get up for us to see that he looked just like Zach only he was a bit younger most likely 8. As he got up he flinched upon seeing his older brother making the teen raise an eyebrow. " What's wrong? "

" Nothing...you just scarred me, you reminded me a zombie for a moment, because of your arm. " Hearing that made Zach frown but then continued towards his little sister.

" Zera...Zera " the teen said shaking the small girl with his good arm. " It's time to get up.. "

" Aw come... " Zera answered lazily. " I want to sleep. "

" Well to bad " Zach said before grabbing the blanket with his good arm and threw off the small raven haired girl giving her no place to hide. She then groaned before sitting up and stretching her arms.

" Your mean brother " the 6 year old said sticking her tongue at him and revealing her bright blue eyes.

" That's my job. Now get yours buts up " Zach said in a commanding tone jabbing his right thumb out the door and reluctantly they did so. As his siblings left there rooms and headed to the bathroom Zach headed back into his room and towards his desk opening up a draw.

Inside of it was his replacement arm but more commonly know as a Prosthetic. It was bit a more robotic then the old ones he used to have but this was a prototype it would let him do everything his original left forearm so this was something he couldn't live without.

First he rolled up his suspension sleeve and slid onto his stump with the attachment rod at the end of it. Zach then reached for the arm and twisted it on before turning on a switch followed by the fingers beginning to move. With his prosthetic on putted on a white glove and headed over to his closet and putted on his school uniform and grabbed his bag before heading down stairs.

" Morning guys " Zach greeted his siblings who were dressed eating bowls of cereal with the older teen doing the same.

" Moring. " they both greeted.

" Hey Zach? Isn't our tutor picking us up? " Zera inquired as he poured a the milk into his bowl and nodded.

" No not today, he'll start picking you up tomorrow. But listen, it wont be like this for long, its just until mom finds you both a good school. By the way what was his name? "

" Otaro Haganta " Roku answered.

" That's the name " Zach said as he continued to eat his breakfast and checked his watch. " Sorry guys, I better going " Zach said before pouring all of the contents into a metal container cup and grabbed his bag.

" Now remember, he'll be arriving in five minutes. So you all be ready when he arrives, okay? " Zach asked with his siblings nodding before Zera ran up to her older brother giving him a hug.

" Buh bye brother.. "

" Bye Zera " Zach said returning the favor and kissed the top of her head before heading on out into the crowded neighborhood of Yongen-Jaya.

" Well, lets go " the teen said to himself and began to make his way through the backstreets straight towards the train station.

TAKE YOUR TIME...

.The scenery changes to a subway train with the character Zach sitting on one of the few open seats with a lot of people around him.

" Ladies and Gentlemen, thank you for riding with us today. We have now arrived at Shibuya, please make your exit to the left " the speaker for the subway announced.

" Finally... " teen said as he exited out of the train with some other passengers followed by other people entering the train. After he had exited out he took a sigh of relief mainly because he was never that much of a fan for people crowding around him. But since it was Japan, that was to expected. But luckily he was able to score a seat and finished reading Zorro The Outlaw so it wasn't a total drag.

As he exited out of the train he checked what time it was one his phone and much to his surprise something weird just appeared on his screen.

" Huh? Since when did I download this spy app? " Zach asked himself because the app was just really strange. It was mostly red with black outlines depicting an eye. Then all of the sudden just like a snap of your finger time literally froze.

" This is super creepy... " Zach said to himself before he noticed something was standing right in front of him. What ever the hell it was, he couldn't make out what it was, its whole body was made out of some kind of black mist with sharp glowing yellow eyes that gave off a feral growl before time started back up.

The teen looked around his surrounding area. ( Eh, I got to be seeing things ) Zach said to himself before continuing his way to school while deleting the strange app at the same time.

TAKE YOUR TIME...

Location: Shujin Academy

Right about now Zach had arrived at Shujin Academy and much to his surprise he was the first student present mainly because he was the only one around. Or so he thought.

" Hi Max " Zach called out making a groan be heard and soon another person identified as Max came out of the corner.

This person was a male about the age of 16 with long black hair reaching all the way down to his neck with his eyes were solid dark blue as the sky itself. His clothing appeared to the same school uniform as Zach, but one noticeable feature was that he wore a silver cross necklace.

" Man I never get the job on ya don't I? "

This is Max Taekami Zach's best friend.

" What's up Zach? " Max greeted with both teen exchanging a fist bump. " How are you doing? "

" Eh I'm fine, how bout you? " Zach asked.

" Same. Hey, school starts in hour, you thirsty? My treat? " the brown haired teen put a thumb on his chin. " Mmm...yeah I could go for one " he replied before they headed over to the vending machine and since it was Max's treat he got Zach something very sour.

" How in the heck can you really drink those things? " Max inquired.

" Pfaaaah! " the teen exclaimed making a face showing just how sour it was. " This stuff is like coffee to me.

" Also just heard that were gonna be having a morning assembly, it's mostly about what happened to that girl. "

Zach looked to his friend. " The one that tried to commit suicide by jumping off of the school rooftop? "

" (long sigh) Yeah. But do you wonder where the hell Kamoshida ran off to? "

" I don't know. What are your thoughts? "

" First thought that rolled in my mind that it has to with Takamaki. You know those rumors where he was having an affair with him? "

Zach scoffed. " That's a boat load of shit. For all I know it's a rumor that was started by someone who wants get even. But she don't really seem like the type to do that. "

" Right, right, your in her class along with that transfer student, the one that's got the record. What's he like? "

Zach put his right hand underneath his chin. " His name is Akira Kurusu, seems smart and nice guy, but I can't really say for sure. "

" Ain't he supposed to have a criminal record though? " Max asked as he took a swig from his drink.

" From what I've heard yeah. But, word is he's gonna get expelled by Kamoshida along with Yuuki Mishima and that one guy who used to be a star runner. What was his name? "

" Ryuji Sakamoto " Max said answering his friends question.

" Yeah that's it. "

" You really think there gonna get expelled though? " the long black haired male asked getting a shrug from Zach.

" I don't know. Hey.. " Zach paused. " How come your talking about the transfer student all of the sudden? "

" Well it turns out every once in a while he comes in my aunts clinic. "

" For what? " Zach asked completely confused.

" I don't know. According to aunt Tae he purchases medicine for his studies. "

" How long has this been going on for? " Max shrugged his shoulders.

" Hmm...I'd say about a month. Half at best. "

" That is just really strange " Zach said before he checked his watch. " Well it's almost time. The other students should be arriving. Let's just get this morning assembly over with already. It's a pain in the ass as it already is. "

" I'm with ya there " Max agreed as Zach grabbed his bag with both teens heading towards the school gate.

TAKE YOUR TIME..

Right now the school gymnasium comes into view with all of the students gathered with both Zach and Max standing side by side with their arms crossed.

" Hmm, wonder what hells there to talk about? " Max whispered to his friend in the ear who returned the gesture.

" I'm pretty sure it's a safe bet it has to with what were talking about earlier " Zach said before the principal himself took the stage. " And there's Pluto himself " Zach said making Max chuckle at what he said before they now hushed up to see what he had to say.

" Let's begin this school-wide open assembly. " The principal said through the mic. " As you all know, a tragic event took place the other day. Thankfully we have been informed that she has pulled through, but it will take her some time until she recovers. Everyone here has a bright future ahead. I implore that you rethink the importance of life and- " All of the sudden the principal was cut off by a loud bang getting everyone's attention and much to their shock it was P.E teacher himself.

" Mr. Kamoshida, what's the- " the principal began only for the teacher to speak up with his eyes closed.

" I... have been reborn. That is why I will confess everything to you all... " the man said before he slowly began to stride his way over to the stage getting the attention of everyone present inside the gymnasium.

" I have repeatedly done things that were.. unbecoming of a teacher. Verbally abusing students... physically abusing my team and... sexually harassing female students. I am the reason why Shiou Suzui tried to kill herself! "

" Oh my god... " Max breathed in disbelief as they watched the man get on his knees and began to cry and continued his confession.

" I thought of this school as my own castle... There were even students that I sentenced to expulsion, simply because I didn't like them...I will, of course rescind those... " He paused before continuing. " I am truly sorry for putting innocent youths through such horrible acts...I am an arrogant, shallow...and shameful person. No I'm worse then that... "

He then lowered his head in shame against the wood of the stage. " I will take responsibility and kill myself for it...! " After those words were heard everyone spoke up on leading to some of the teachers trying to calm down the students including the principal who headed over to the man himself.

" Mr. Kamoshida! Please get off the stage now! "

" Everyone! Return to your classes! " a teacher called out.

" I- "

" Don't run you bastard! " a voice cried out getting their attention to see it was Ann Takamaki. " Shiho's still alive even after all the things that made her want to die! You have no right to run from this! "

Zach nodded in approval before looking to Kamoshida who raised his head. " You're right...You're absolutely right... I should be punished under the law and atone for my crimes...I did horrible things to Takamaki-san, as well. In return for giving Suzui-san a position on the team... I tried to force her into having relations. "

Max shook his head in disbelief in what he was hearing while Zach continued to listen. " As of today, I will resign from my position as an instructor and turn myself in. " He then sobbed. " Someone, please call the police! "

Zach put a hand on Max's shoulder. " I've heard and had enough of this shit, let's go. "

Max looked to his friend and nodded before they headed back to their class room.

Take your time

Time: After School.

Location: Yongen-Jaya

" Dude! Can you really believe this shit?! " Max yelled out loud as they were making there way home with the dirty blonde kicking a trashcan in frustration. " How long you think this shunt has been going on for?! "

" Who knows... " Zach replied. " I heard rumors of that bastard doing that stuff, never figured it was true. Then again anything is possible. "

" You think the teachers knew about this? " Max asked. " I mean seriousl how could people not notice. "

" Probably a handful including sir fat ass. My guess is the reason him, the teachers and the parents turned a blind is because of his success. "

" What do you mean by that Zach? " Max was clearly confused.

" You don't know? Apparently he's a former professional athlete and an Olympic volleyball champion. "

" That piece of shit been to the Olympics? For real? Or your just pulling my leg? "

" Does look like I am? " Zach replied looking at his friend with a raised eyebrow making Max scoff.

" This ain't right Zach, what the hell kind of adults let a monster do what he pleases with their students? "

" The greedy ones... " Zach quickly replied. " But at least he's gone now. "

" Okay moving on from that. How's your mom doing? " Max asked now trying to bring up another topic.

" She's alright, working as usual. How... " Zach paused knowing it'd be wise to avoid asking. " Never mind. (sigh) I hope Roku and Zera are having a better day. "

" Oh yeah just only recently they got a new tutor, okay I remember now. What's the tutor like? "

Zach shrugged his shoulders. " Don't know, haven't even met the guy. "

" What's his name? "

" Otaro Haganta " Zach replied with Max giving him a look.

" ... "

" What? " Zach asked.

" Nothing, forget about it " Max said confusing the scarred teen for a moment but shrugged it off as they now arrived at Zach's home. " Hey can we play something good? "

" We'll just have to see what is "good" by your standers " Zach replied retorted as he opened the door to his home. Once he did that's where he saw both of his siblings studying with another male in the living room.

This man was no doubt their tutor. He had to be most likely in his middle fourties 44 at best. He had light blonde hair cut really short, had a pair of old looking glasses covering his silver colored eyes. As for his attire it consisted that of an old looking black sweater with a gray shirt underneath, along with dark blue jeens and finally neat black polished boots.

As the door closed both of his siblings looked towards the source and smiled instantly seeing that there older brother had arrived home. The tutor turned around and placed a smile on his face and stood up.

" Oh, you must be there older brother " the older male said now getting up and extended his left hand. " I'm Otaro Haganata. "

" Zach Aurico " the teen said shaking the tutor's left hand with his good arm. " Have my siblings been behaving? "

Otaro chuckled. " Oh yes, there actually really good students. And quite frankly I enjoy my time teaching them. But sorry to rudely end our meeting, but I best be going. Until our next teaching Roku and Zera " the tutor said waving the two children goodbye as he walked out of the door.

" Bye Mr. Haganta! " both Roku and Zera replied with the smaller sibling running up to her older brother and hugged his leg since he was taller then she was.

" Hey Zera " Zach greeted by ruffling her hair much to her amusement before going up to Max and raised her hand high up as she could.

" Hi Max! "

" Hiya Zera " Max replied back by giving her a high five and nodded to his friends little brother. " Sup Roku? "

" Eh nothing much " the kid said now getting up. " Man I'm glad that's over. "

" So? How was he? " Zach asked his sibling and they knew he was talking about their new tutor.

" He was okay " Zera spoke up. " Only down side was that he talks a lot, half of the stuff he says makes no sense. I feel like my brain is being fried "

" feelings mutual " Roku added raising his hand.

" Well...who's up for a bit of game time? " Zach inquired.

" I am! I am! " both his siblings and best friend cried out before they raced down stairs to Zach's room.

"TAKE YOUR TIME...

Time: Evening

After a good 3 hours of playing pokemon Stadium 2, Super Smash Bro's, Mario Party and Yoshi's Story on Zach's N64 Max eventually headed home.

As for Zach he had ordered take out for himself and his siblings and once that was done they watched an animated movie called Batman Mask of The Phantom. Zatch was never into the dark knight to much but since his siblings liked it then that was fine with him.

The teen sighed in relief after getting them both to bed and once that was done he headed to his room and as he did the door opened.

As for the one who entered it was an older woman in her middle thirties 36 at best. She had fair skin, red eyes and long black hair reaching down to her back. She adored a black suit with a white tie, black high heels and held a black hand bag showing she was one of those very important workers.

" Hey mom " Zach greeted only for the woman to drop her bag and run up to Zatch tightly embracing him as if something terrible was gonna happen. But to the teens guess she heard of what happened at school today. So without any other words he returned the embrace as well.

Date. May 3rd, Tuesday

Time: Early Morning.

Right about now Zach had just awoken. The reason he wasn't at school today was because ever since the events that took place yesterday everyone had a three day break to try and recuperate of what happened especially for those who were tormented by Kamoshida.

For Zach he felt irritated because of how the teachers turned a blind eye to his activity's, but he guessed that there were at least a few out of the bunch who had no knowledge that it was going on.

Take your time...

Time: Morning

Right about now Zach's mother Ruraka was washing a couple dishes with her eldest son walking up from his basement room.

" So, Roku and Zera are at their Tutor's house? " the teen yawned getting a brief glance from his mother who continued her task.

" Yes they did, just left about an hour ago. I see you were sleeping in. "

" Well, after the crap that took place yesterday and since they gave us 3 days off I figured I could use it " Zach said now heading over to the counter and opened up the cupboard to grab a box of cereal including a bowl.

As he was doing this he grabbed a milk jug out of the fridge and sat down.

While Zatch was making some breafast for himself he turned on the TV and coincidentally the channel was on the News.

" And now to discuss our next topic... " the newscaster said. " Fall from Grace: The story of a dishonored Olympic medalist. Just recently, a high school coach admitted to his school that he had been perpetually abusing students. Given his prior Olympic achievements, this has caused quite a stir. What caused this habitual offender to suddenly confess these heinous crimes to his entire school? The police are hoping that the upcoming interrogations will bring light to this question. "

" Hey Zach? Isn't this your school? " Ruraka inquired stopping what she was doing and began to listen what the news had to say. As for Zach he was eating his breakfast while focused on the screen before multiple students started to appear starting with a male.

" My friends would come back from practice with bruises all the time...It was scary, but I'm relieved that the abuse is finally going to end now. " It then switches to a female student.

" He would touch me and stuff all the time... I'm glad that I don't have to deal with that sexual harassment anymore... " The screen shows another female student.

" There were always rumors, sure. Not many people believed in them though. Like...I'm totally shocked they were actually true. At least now I can go to school without worrying. "

Ruraka then sighed before turning off the TV. " What a mess " the mature woman said shaking her head. " I'm just baffled that this has been going on. "

" You and me both " Zach said taking a bite out of his cereal. " I'm telling you mom, a few of them teachers knew about this including the principal. "

" I feel the same way. That's absolutely shameful. Anyways...I need to talk to you Zach " this perked up the teen interest.

" What is it? " he asked as she sat down.

" I'm gonna leaving... " She began. " I've been tasked with handling a trip in about 17 days from now. "

" Where are you going? "

" Hawaii. Have to settle with a little business agreement. In Canada. "

" Really? Canada? Not that it's none of my business but, how long will you gone? " Zach asked curious to know the answer.

" Two weeks. "

" Two weeks? That's a freakin long time, the trips you usually take last for about one week. This is crazy! " The teen exclaimed in disbelief.

" I know, I know. That's why I'm giving you a heads up. "

" When are you gonna tell Ruka and Zera? I already know that there not gonna be to fond of the idea. And I'm not being blunt, it's the truth. "

" I'm going to tell once they get home. But Zach, I have to do this job. Were in debt, if I don't do this were gonna lose the house. I have no choice, that's why I'm telling you this now because I'll need your help explaining it to them. " She then placed her left hand onto Zach's right. " Can I count on you? "

Zach groaned. " I'll try. "

TAKE YOUR TIME...

Time: Evening

Zach let himself fall onto his bed. Not just to long ago his mother dropped a bombshell on his little siblings about having to leave for a trip in few days. At first they weren't to happy about it because she was gonna be gone in two weeks, but with a little bit more explaining they reluctantly agreed while the teen played as another "voice of reason" to calm them both down.

As Zach enjoyed the peace and quiet he took of his prosthetic arm for the night before his phone rang. He put the fake arm down and grabbed his phone with his good arm and saw that he got a text message from Max.

Max: Hey did you see the news today?

" Yes I did " Zach texted him back and did another message. " School ain't gonna be able to play innocent after that. "

Max: Oh yeah, for sure.

Max: I'm just feel great to know that were gonna alright for a little while.

Max: But hey? You really think that they did it?

" Who the Phantom Thieves? " Zach texted back.

Max: Yeah.

Max: Do you really think they stole his heart? I mean just like that Kamoshida changed and was willing to kill himself.

" I don't know. I'm just as confused as everyone else is. " Zach replied back.

Max: Well, whatever the reason, I'm glad it happened.

Max: Hey?

Max: You wanna hang out tomorrow and head to that airsoft shop?

" The one down town? Near the movie theater and bookstore? Yeah sure. "

Max: Great! Well good night Zach.

" Night Max " Zach texted back. But then all of the sudden the weird app that resembled an eye reappeared.

" The hell? I thought I deleted this thing? " Zach asked himself before he deleted the strange app and headed to bed.

To be continued

Okay, before I go blabbering off here's a little quick profile on Zatch such as his personality, likes/ hobbies.

Zach Auriko Age 15.

Nationality Japanese, American.

Arcana. Death

He usually seems like a pretty strange person when he is in fact actually a pretty decent person with only a strange way of thinking as well as point of views. He just simply wishes for everyone to see him as just another person nothing else.

His hobbies include reading, playing classic video games, and enjoys watching anime.

As for his likes, loves the band Blue Oyster Cult especially their top song (Don't) Fear The Reaper.

Okaaaay. Now I'll start going on :p.

So? How'd you all like this? Personally I've wanted to do a Persona 5 story for a while now, only problem was that I only watched the walkthrough videos. But since I got it for my older brother we've been playing the crap out of it. And thanks to the calendar system and getting a bit through the game itself I decided to write this story.

So please no extreme flames. I'm rather interested to see how far I can go with this story. On top of that I'm wanting to do My Hero Academia, but the only problem is that I'm having a ruff time trying to make a decent beginning. So if any of you are willing to give me suggestions, then please Pm me, I'm all ears.

Plus if any of you have suggestions for this story, then please speak your minds.

I've already got a good idea on what I can do next, but if any of you want to throw ideas then go on right ahead.

Until next time...

G King!

Out!