A/N: No I don't own twilight, Stephanie Meyer does though. And yes this is filled with mistakes and no paragraphs, but this is a re-take of 'I'll takehim.' Hopefully a more interesting, exciting version.
I've been really busy and super lazy, so it's amazing I actually sat down and wrote this. Read, Review! xxx

The rain was pouring and I could barely see anything.

"KIM!" I heard the familiar voice of Shelby call out to me.
"S-S-Shelby" I stuttered.
"What happened?" she cried.
"My c-c-car broke down and-" I began.
"I'm taking you home. WERE TAKING KIM ASWELL JACKASS!" Shelby screamed to someone in a black car.
"WELL THEN HURRY UP AND GET IN, REDHEAD!" I heard a booming voice yell over the harsh rain.
"Why are you in a car with Paul Lahote?"
"You mean those two assholes?" I raised my eyebrows. Two. "Jared Cameron." She answered my unasked question. "And because his dad and my dad are good friends and now I have to take a lift with him whilst my car is all…" she trailed off.
"HURRY THE FUCK UP REDHEAD!" Paul yelled.
"REMOVE THE STICK FROM UP YOUR ASS, TWAT FACE." She roared back. Shelby loathed Paul Lahote and Jared Cameron.
She directed me towards the car and opened the door waiting for me to get in.
"Took your time!" Paul moaned.
"Yup." Shelby popped the 'p'. "So you never told me what happened?" Shelby happily blocked out whatever Jared was saying to Paul.
"Um, the car broke down and then my phone ran out of battery, and then It started raining and-"
I heard a deep throaty chuckle. "Today's not your day is it?" followed by another chuckle. "I'm dropping your friend-" Paul began.
"Kim." Shelby snapped.
"I'm dropping your friend-KIM-off at your house, right, redhead?" Paul said.
"Yeah," Shelby answered. Paul parked outside Shelby's house.
"The asshole's locked us in." Shelby grumbled after our third attempt at opening the door. "TWAT FACE YOU LOCKED US IN!" She shrieked.
Jared opened my door, "I'm sorry princess." Jared opened the door smiling at me.
"I-it's fine. Its stopped raining." I noted.
"It has... as soon as you get out of the car…you haven't got the greatest luck have you?"

"Not the greatest." I mumbled. Jared laughed, something caught his eye.
"Paul!" He ran around the car and placed a hand on Paul's shaking arm.
"YOU'RE A DUMBASS. A FUCKING DUMBASS." Shelby crossed her arms.
I went to stand my Shelby's side. "Shelby, just leave it. Let's go." I muttered . Paul's deadly glare moved from Shelby to me… and that's when it happened. His eyes widened, his eyebrows rose and his mouth dropped. His eyes fixed of mine.
"Kim." He breathed.
"Dude, did you just..?" Jared trailed off.
"What did he do?" I heard Shelby ask.
"Kim…" Paul pulled me closer to him, his right hand on my hip and his warm left hand on my cheek. "You're beautiful."
"What are you doing?" I pulled away, shocked, horrified, shocked. "I have a boyfriend!"
"WHAT?" Paul growled. "Who is it? I'll kill him!"
"Aiden Pepsway." Shelby piped up.
"Shelby?" I cried.
"Hey Shelby, can I have some water?" Jared interrupted
"NO." she said bluntly.
"Let's go!" Jared tugged on her arm, leading her into her own house.
"You're perfect Kim." This was all so weird. He brushed his thumb against my cheek. "Beautiful, perfect...sexy." I could see a wicked gleam in his eye.
"Paul! I have a boyfriend!" I reminded him.
"You're with Aiden Pepsway?" I regretted reminding him.
"Yeah…" I said meekly.
"Do you love him?" he demanded.
"Umm,…I, I-I-umm…"
"I didn't think so."
"What?"
"Do you love him?"
"Paul, bro, let's go." Jared jogged towards us.
"No. I'm talking to Kim." His eyes didn't leave my face.
"Talking or interrogating?" another deep voice came from behind me. I turned around to see… Sam Uley. My heart beat faster. Everyone said he was on drugs at school; he broke Leah Clearwater's heart for her cousin.
"Relax baby, it's just Sam." He pulled me from my belt hoops at the back of my skinny jeans, into the front of his body. I could feel his rock-heard abs…wait, what?
"Don't call me baby. I have a boyfriend."
"I know. You have to keep on reminding yourself."
"I do not remind myself. I remind you. Because you can't seem to stop touching me!"
"Guilty." He whispered in my ear.
"Paul. Jared. Take the car and go to my house. Now." I could hear the authority in Sam's voice. A giggle managed to escape my lips. Jared, Sam and Paul…in one house… gangbang.
"What's so funny?" Paul murmured sending shivers down my spine.
"Nothing."
"Mmh…I'll get it out of you eventually." He sniggered. "I'll see you later…babe." He sent me a sexy-as-hell-smirk before hopping into his car with Jared in the passenger seat.

What just happened?

I walked into Shelby's kitchen where there where hundreds of water bottles laid on her kitchen counter tops. And there stood Shelby looking angry and more red then her hair.

A/N: you read it…now review.