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Disclaimer: I don't own Maximum Ride.*tear slides down cheek*
Max's POV
There's something exhilarating about soaring above the Earth at breakneck speeds. Sure I was a mutant bird freak and the only people I trusted in this world were Nudge and Angel. Still a part of me felt that I wouldn't be Max without being able to fly.
First, let me explain, I'm flying, not like flying in a plane, after all who needs a plane when you've got wings. Yeah you heard me, WINGS! Here's the deal, Nudge, Angel, and I were created by the most horrible "scientist" that you could ever imagine. They decided to make us only 98% human; the other 2% is Avian, like birds. The scientist, or whitecoats, experiment on all sorts of animals in this lab called the School in California. Most of the experiments either died immediately or spent their few short years being tortured by the whitecoats. Compared to the other experiments we are miracles. It's amazing that we can think or speak at all, but we can do that and way more.
We can fly, thanks to our wings and we also have an assortment of other powers. Angel can read minds, talk to fish, and breathe underwater. Nudge can control computers and attract metal objects. I have super speed. I also have a voice in my head that comes with these delightful little brain attacks. Oh joy, you can tell the whitecoats really liked me when it came to giving us powers. Sharing your brain space with an unwanted voice is no fun at all, let me tell you.
"Max!" the sound of Angels voice made me snap out of my trance.
"Yeah sweetie." I said tiredly.
"I hear something." The minute she said that I felt adrenaline pumping through me veins to get me ready for a fight.
"Erasers?" I whispered, trying not to give away our position. Yeah right, like that would happen. We were pretty dang visible in the sky.
Angel frowned. "I can't tell. I know they came from the School, but don't sound like Erasers." Well, let me just say, its always best to assume the worst.
"Let's not take the chance. You guys up for a fight?"
"Yeah, I guess," muttered Nudge. Wow, I thought, she must really be tired. That is the shortest sentence I have ever heard her say.
Angel looked at me and nodded looking exhausted. I really didn't want to put them through this, but it wasn't like we had much of a choice.
I saw three specks in the sky drawing closer. They were way too big to be birds. As they came closer I gasped, they looked, well, they looked just like us.
I swung around to face Nudge and Angel and yelled, "Okay guys, here they come. Get ready for a fight."
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Fang's POV
I was tired, Iggy was tired, and Gazzy looked like he was about to drop out of the sky from exhaustion.
"Okay guys, lets find somewhere to stop for tonight." I said. Iggy and Gazzy did a really bad job of disguising their relief.
We were three mutant bird kids that just managed to escape the Hounds of Hell, aka Erasers. They were trying to take us back to the School in New York. We were created in the school where they experimented/tortured us. There was no way we were going back, ever.
The hairs on the back of my neck began to stand up interrupting my thoughts. I looked up to see objects moving towards us, fast. As they got closer my eyes widened, there were three mutant bird kids, just like us. I heard the oldest girl yell "Okay guys, here they come. Get ready for a fight!" Something told me this wasn't going to be a friendly get together.
I studied the two youngest girls. The littlest one looked just like Gazzy, same blonde hair and blue eyes. She looked like a little angel, and couldn't be more than six. The other girl looked about 11. She was African American and a bit fashion obsessed, judging by her clothes.
Suddenly the oldest girl turned around and, well I admit it, she took my breath away. She had blonde hair with brown streaks and brown eyes. IO could see her sizing us up and preparing for a fight. She had that don't mess with me or you'll get your butt kicked quality about her. I think she was about 14, like Iggy and I.
I had so many questions running through my head. I couldn't believe there were others like us, but I was pretty sure that they were just coming to kill us or bring us back to the school. I tensed up, preparing for a fight.
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