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Disclaimer: I own none of the characters in naruto, but i would be rich if i did. now on with the story

Speaking

Thinking

kurama speaking

kurama thinking

Naruto: 5

Kurama: old enough

Kakashi: 22

Crow: 11

Anko: 21

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"I think it went this way" shouted an angry villager " Lets kill the demon before it gets away" Screamed another.

In the back of one of the alleys, where the villager were passing, in the dark sat a small frightened reddish blonde boy. "why?" "Why does this always happen to me?" the young boy cried out loud as he uncurled himself from a ball. Getting up he began limping to the front of the alley to see if the coast was clear, reaching the edge he started to briefly remember why there was a searing pain coming from his right ankle.

Flashback no jutsu

hmp hmp " Which way should I go, where can I hide?" thought the reddish blond while running and panting. "This is for my daughter you demon brat !" shouted an angry drunk villager as he throw a half full bottle of sake at the boy. In his drunken state the villager missed and the bottle broke in front of the reddish blond. Not looking as he ran the blonde slipped on the alcohol, twisting his ankle when he fell and landed on the glass when he hit the ground. Most of the glass didn't touch him, but a few pieces managed to find themselves lodged into his leg. Trying to kill the demon while he's down an angry jonin through a chakra infused kuni at the young boy just barely scratching his cheek as he rolled out of the way. The kuni may not have done much damage but the chakra sank into his cheek cutting through it. Not being able to stop and pull the glass out, he got up as quickly as he could and began a limp/run to get away from the mob of angry villagers and some angry jonin. After getting a far enough distance from them he quickly made his way into an alley that he hope nobody would see him in. Stopping at the end of the alley in a dark corner, the reddish blond sat down and begin to remove the glass from his leg,after painfully ripping them out he began to slowly to cry and curl into a ball. after a quite 10 min he slowly began to speak "Why"

flashback no jutsu ki

Looking down the boy saw that even though it still hurt a lot his wounds were healed and he could move his ankle. "Weird it looks like i haven't even been touched, well if you didn't see my cloths that is" Thought the reddish blond as he looked at his shirt and saw the cut marks in it. After getting out of the alley unnoticed the blond began making his way towards his apartment that his surrogate grandfather had let and helped him rent after the blond was thrown out of an orphanage. "Happy birthday to you Naruto" Said Naruto sadly as he entered his room and into the bathroom to look over his wounds in better light. Only then did he realize he was I scratched besides a scar going horizontally across his cheek behind his distinct whiskers. Aside from that he was just really dirty but to tired to do anything about it. So he headed to his bed drifting off to sleep with a tear in his eye. " Ugh if i don't do something soon this kids going to die sooner rather than later." Thought a mysterious being

Standing on a rooftop watching sadly as all of this occurred was a man with white spiked hair wearing a mask that resembled that of a dog. The man shunshined away leaving nothing but a swirl of leaves. Appearing right outside of the hokage's office the masked man began to knock, knowing the old man would still be in there doing paper work even this late at night.

"Come in, please state your purpose " Asked the tired old man.

"Dog sir i'm here to report what i saw going on with Naruto tonight." Dog said as he kneeled in front of the hokage.

"Very well then one moment, Snake you stay the other ANBU out " At this three masked ninja came out of hiding and began to leave the room. one of the ANBU wore the mask of a crow he had jet black hair pulled back into a ponytail, he had two katanas strapped to his back making an X,one had a red hilt with a black blade and a black sheath the other one had a white and red mixed hilt with a black blade and a white sheath, he walked out from behind a plant and shunshined away in a flock of crows the last you saw of him was his red eyes disappearing in the flock, unnoticed by anyone in the room one of the crows stayed .The next was a woman from the looks of it now known as Snake that came from the top of one of the book shelves,she had purple spiked hair and wore that of a snakes mask, she sat on the hokage's desk awaiting her next order. last to appear looked as if he had phased through the wooden wall he wore the mask of a cat he left through the window jumping from roof top to roof top.

After the last one left the hokage put a silencing seal on the room so no one would over here the following conversation. Letting out a loud sigh "Alright report what you have seen" asked the old man knowing all too well that he would not like what he heard. After 10 min of explaining what happened Dog waited for the hokage to give the next order. With a look of sadness at what he heard he look over at snake "Anko since you're one of the heads of the torcher division i want you take the jonin Kakashi reported to have taken part in today's events and bring them in for questioning and since they have broken the law have them permanently removed."

"Yes hokage-sama" The woman now formally known as Anko said as took off her mask now awaiting any further instruction.

"Sir what would you like me to do with those villagers" Kakashi asked as he said that part with venom in his voice remembering what the did to that poor child. Thinking on it the hokage gave a small smile and said

"Keeping in mind that from what i heard all of them broke the law punishable by death and knowing that you can be just as ruthless as Anko over here, you may do whatever you feel is necessary for them."

"yes hokage-sama" kakashi said with an evil eye over at Ank he saw that she bore an evil grin as well. "This is going to be fun" They both thought.

Sighing "You are dismissed" The old man told them as he looked down and remembered he still had a stack of paper work to do. At this Anko smiled and winked at kakashi turned and jumped out of the window running along the roofs. sighing kakashi just turned and walked out the front door like a normal person. The crow that was there left undetected,dispersed going back to his jutsu caster. When the jutsu was dispelled and he received its memories the young man whose Anbu name was crow had a look of sadness and sorrow for the blond and what he went through. "I think when i'm able to, i'll train with him and help better his chances of becoming a fine shinobi." Thought crow with a sad smile at the thought of training a kid when he himself had only just turned eleven 2 months ago

Naruto's mindscape

"Huh where am I" Said Naruto as he sat up right looking at his surroundings. Looking around he saw what looked to be a sewer but naruto took it as strange that the walls were much higher up than any other sewers. "Great i don't know how but i guess i'm now in a really high sewer, guess I should start looking for the exit" He thought. He didn't know why but for some reason naruto just felt like he knew were all the right turns to get to where he wanted to be were. After walking a good 15 min of walking along a path of nothing but red and blue pipes he found himself in front of a huge cage, getting closer to examine it the blond suddenly didn't feel like the only being in the room. Getting a chill down his spine Naruto slowly began to step back trying not to disturb whatever was in that cage. After only getting two feet back he looked up and saw a big red eye looking at him as if it was studying him.

"Aw so you've finally come to visit me after a long five years I see."

"Wh-what and who are you, and where are we" Naruto managed to get out as he looked up at the giant.

"Where we are is in your mindscape and I am the kyubi no yoko and as for who well we'll get to that in a later date." The kyubi just looked at Naruto grinning and showing off its sharp teeth, waiting for the child to react to the information he was just given, to the foxes surprise there wasn't a look of shock or terror but instead a smile.

"When you said were in my mindscape does that mean that you're inside of me? And if so then you owe me five years worth of rent pal"

"haha i might actually like being with this kitt after all" taken back by how calm the blond was about all of this the giant fox answered "yes I am inside of you, you are the jinchuriki of the nine tails the strongest and most feared of the tailed beast and females to ever live I was sealed inside of you the day you were born"

His smile began to fade "Oh so thats why most the village either hates or fears me" exclaimed Naruto with sadness in his voice. "Wait you're a girl!" Naruto asked losing all sadness in his voice.

"Yes I'm girl, why is it that everyone thinks I'm male"

"I don't know maybe it has somthing to do with the fact that you have the deepest voice in this world" naruto replied sarcastically. At this the kyubi shrugged her huge shoulders and spoke again

"how's this?" She asked in a much, much feminine yet still dominant voice. "Better" the young reddish blond said. remembering why she brought Naruto there in the first place she began again "Listen kitt i've seen what the villagers are like towards you because of me and for that i'm truly sorry" smiling she said "Plus I know it won't make up for all the pain i've put you through but I'll do two things for you one i'll tell you who your mother was and i'll pay your rent, i'll pay you by training you to become a ninja." Naruto was overly excited when he heard

"You mean it, you know who my mother was?"

"Yes I knew your mother, she was the last jinchuriki before you." "

Wow that must mean its like a family tradition to be your jinchuriki or something." "

more like a clan tradition, your mother was the Red Hot-Blooded Habanero, Kushina Uzumaki of the Uzumaki clan of Uzushiogakure that was once in the land of whirlpools."

Curious about something Naruto asked "Why is it a clan tradition?"

"It is because the Uzumaki's have an unusually high chakra, Members of this clan were very knowledgeable in the art of fūinjutsu, and were both respected, and feared worldwide because of their prodigious skill. Fuinjutsu is a sealing jutsu that can seal objects, living beings, chakra, along with a wide variety of other things within another object. Fūinjutsu can also be used to unseal objects either from within something or someone depending on how good you are at fuinjutsu, also the Uzumaki Clan lived in Uzushiogakure. The people of Uzushiogakure were noted to have notoriously long lives, so it gained the epithet "The Village of Longevity".

"Ok if you know who my mother was does that mean you know my father as well?" Sighing because she knew that question would come sooner it late the kuybi began to explain.

"Yes it is true I know who your father is, but for the same reason your hokage has not said anything yet I cannot tell you who he is."

"And what would that reason be?"

"Your father had very powerful enemies that would stop at nothing to kill you if they knew who he was, as did your mother and even knowing who she is might put you in more danger."

"Oh...then in that case lets get to training, the stronger I get the faster I can learn who my father is." Naruto shouted.

Ok well that ends this chapter, I really hope you guys enjoyed it. remember to R&R tell me what you think or want to happen and where i can better in my writing. i most likely will take 2 weeks to a month sorry. this is 98 saying see you next time.