This is my first story.. so do help me by giving suggestion please.. ^^
I wrote this one a while back, actually m reposting it :)
I have tried my best to portray the characters as the are but sanji is a little OOC. He is still a gentleman but not a pervert-pervert. And my story doesn't include a Zoro-Sanji fight (? ゚リ゙)
Beginnings are always messy. So please help me improve...
DISCLAIMER : I don't own One Piece.. :'(( (A/N : I always wanted to write this bwahahahaha ) but i do own Ayoma..
CHAPTER 1 P-P-P-Pirates?
The wide blue sea... It's the only thing there is as far as I can see.. I wonder if it was right thing for me to do this.. Set sail on my own on this tiny row boat.. And just when I was praying for things to not to get worse... I felt small drops of rain on my skin... I have been sailings or more than weeks... I am out of food supply and damn this rain. Does it plan to stop anytime soon?
And to add up to my misfortunes, I saw the the tides come up and swallow my boat. It turned upside down. I tried hard to stay on the surface. But I was losing my strength.i started feeling dizzy.. I guess this is the end.. All I wanted was to see you see you again.
I could hear whispers around me. I slowly opened my eyes. But to my surprise, I see a boy with straw hat staring at me with a wide grin, just few inches away. "Oh, she woke up!". He smiled... He is way too close. I pushed him and shouted, "Back off, you Idiot!"
"If she can shout as soon as getting up, I guess she is okay, let's call Chopper." Said a guy with green hair, who was standing in the corner. He looked kinda mean..
"Excuse me.. " a voice said from my other side. I turned around, to see a skeleton... "The ske-skeleton.. spoke.." I managed to blurt out before passing out again..
After I woke up again, I saw the boy with the straw had and the green haired guy from before. And a raccoon perhaps. Then I remembered the accident in the sea and realised that I was now on a soft, warm comfy bed. "HOW DID I GET HERE?!"
Just then some other people entered the room. "Oh! She is awake now." I guess I was saved by these people.
"Don't let Brook in.." A blond said as he entered the room. "He will scare her again. We cannot afford to let such a pretty little missy get frightened."
"Aww come on you don't remember? You were swimming on tides, you are stupid.. shishishishi..."- the guy with the straw hat said.
"I was not swimming on tides. My boat CRASHED. And I am not stupid", I shouted. "Anyways thanks for saving me."(Now in a normal tone)
"Hi! I am Luffy." The straw hat boy said. "Nice to meet you. And they are my Nakama" And then he started introducing others- Zoro, Sanji, Chopper, Ussop, Franky, Nami, Robin. Some just smiled or nodded at me while some said "hi"
"I am Ayoma , thank you for saving me. Nice to meet you."
"Mmh Ayoma, why were you swimming on tide?" Luffy asked again.
Is he nuts? I told him I wasn't swimming yet he...
"I was not swimming. Don't you understand?" But then again he wasn't even listening to me. I wanted to punch him so bad, I clenched you hand but I had to controlled my anger.. Calm down Ayoma
Just to distract myself I asked them, "What are you guys doing on sea, Travelling?"
"Kind of." The orange haired lady answered. "To be more precise we are pirates."
"P-P-P-PIRATES?"
~End of the Chapter~
CORRECTION, REVIEWS AND SUGGESTIONS ARE HIGHLY APPRECIATED!
i hope you people will like it .. ^^
