DISCLAMER: I do not own Legolas or Lord of the rings all J.R.R Tolkien
there oh well. I can pretend can't I so yes I own Lord of the Rings and
Legolas
This is a Legolas romance fic no I really don't think this is a Mary-sue but it could be Plz review
Prolog
Rachel looked up from her book she was reading when she heard the door open. "Hey" she heard her friend Emily say. "Hey Em what's up?" she set the book down on the coffee table and looked at her friend. "Nothing really just thought I would stop by, what're you reading" she looked at the coffee table trying to make out the book title but she couldn't see it. "What I always read Em. Lord of the rings" Rachel said picking the book up and placing a book mark in it, then setting it back down. "ahh of course, you are always reading that book" Emily rolled her eyes 'she is so obsessed with that story and the movies it is like it is all real for her but at least she is not thinking about Jeff' 'She is thinking about me and Jeff I know it' thought Rachel 'why can't she just accept that he was abusive and I broke up with him.'
Just then there was a pounding on the door and Jeff's drunken slur could be heard "op'n the d'or Rashel I know y'ur in Th're."[1] Rachel's eyes opened in horror and she jumped off the couch "Go away Jeff you are not welcome here". "Rashel ba'y is jusss me I wonn hurr you" [2] Jeff said in his drunken slur "Go away Jeff I don't want you here" Rachel said in desperation giving a panicked look to Emily 'call the police' she mouthed. Em nodded and ran off to the phone. "Come on don' make me knock sha d'or down ba'y" [3] Jeff leaned against the door and pushed but it really didn't work. "Alright Jeff, Alright just don't do anything" Rachel said her voice quavering as Em waling back in the room and shook her head at Rachel. "I wonn I promesss"[4] Jeff giggled insanely as he thought of how happy Rachel and he would be when they were together again he thought about 'taking her' in the living room but then he thought that would be no home coming so he resolved on the bedroom.
Rachel opened the door and Jeff stumbled in and grabbed her but before she could scream he brought his face down upon hers and smothered her lips in a harsh kiss. Rachel pulled back and spit on the ground. Jeff's eyes flashed and he stepped towards her suddenly sobering up. "What am I no longer good for you?" Jeff spat at her his eyes flaring with a fire Rachel had only seen once. But she held his gaze steady and mustered up the most of the courage she could find. "No" she said staring him straight in the eye. "Why you ungrateful bitch, haven't I taught you enough?" he glared at her defiant face "obviously not" he stepped toward her again and in turn she again backed up and ran in to the coffee table. He raised his and she stepped backwards even though she knew she was already in front of the table.
She fell and went crashing down glass flew everywhere and she felt her book underneath her she felt glass go into her arm and screamed. She saw Emily jump on Jeff and get thrown into a wall. She tried to get up to help her friend but Jeff was at the table as soon as Em was off he climbed on top of her and started to slap her she screamed again, this time in anger. She grabbed a piece of glass that was lying beside her and stabbed Jeff in the arm with it as it came toward her face again. She saw the police come in and pick up Jeff then she blacked out.
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Help understanding drunken talk lol
[1]: open the door Rachel I know you're in there
[2]: Rachel baby it's just me I won't hurt you (yeah right)
[3]: come on don't make me knock the door down baby
[4]: I won't I promise
This is a Legolas romance fic no I really don't think this is a Mary-sue but it could be Plz review
Prolog
Rachel looked up from her book she was reading when she heard the door open. "Hey" she heard her friend Emily say. "Hey Em what's up?" she set the book down on the coffee table and looked at her friend. "Nothing really just thought I would stop by, what're you reading" she looked at the coffee table trying to make out the book title but she couldn't see it. "What I always read Em. Lord of the rings" Rachel said picking the book up and placing a book mark in it, then setting it back down. "ahh of course, you are always reading that book" Emily rolled her eyes 'she is so obsessed with that story and the movies it is like it is all real for her but at least she is not thinking about Jeff' 'She is thinking about me and Jeff I know it' thought Rachel 'why can't she just accept that he was abusive and I broke up with him.'
Just then there was a pounding on the door and Jeff's drunken slur could be heard "op'n the d'or Rashel I know y'ur in Th're."[1] Rachel's eyes opened in horror and she jumped off the couch "Go away Jeff you are not welcome here". "Rashel ba'y is jusss me I wonn hurr you" [2] Jeff said in his drunken slur "Go away Jeff I don't want you here" Rachel said in desperation giving a panicked look to Emily 'call the police' she mouthed. Em nodded and ran off to the phone. "Come on don' make me knock sha d'or down ba'y" [3] Jeff leaned against the door and pushed but it really didn't work. "Alright Jeff, Alright just don't do anything" Rachel said her voice quavering as Em waling back in the room and shook her head at Rachel. "I wonn I promesss"[4] Jeff giggled insanely as he thought of how happy Rachel and he would be when they were together again he thought about 'taking her' in the living room but then he thought that would be no home coming so he resolved on the bedroom.
Rachel opened the door and Jeff stumbled in and grabbed her but before she could scream he brought his face down upon hers and smothered her lips in a harsh kiss. Rachel pulled back and spit on the ground. Jeff's eyes flashed and he stepped towards her suddenly sobering up. "What am I no longer good for you?" Jeff spat at her his eyes flaring with a fire Rachel had only seen once. But she held his gaze steady and mustered up the most of the courage she could find. "No" she said staring him straight in the eye. "Why you ungrateful bitch, haven't I taught you enough?" he glared at her defiant face "obviously not" he stepped toward her again and in turn she again backed up and ran in to the coffee table. He raised his and she stepped backwards even though she knew she was already in front of the table.
She fell and went crashing down glass flew everywhere and she felt her book underneath her she felt glass go into her arm and screamed. She saw Emily jump on Jeff and get thrown into a wall. She tried to get up to help her friend but Jeff was at the table as soon as Em was off he climbed on top of her and started to slap her she screamed again, this time in anger. She grabbed a piece of glass that was lying beside her and stabbed Jeff in the arm with it as it came toward her face again. She saw the police come in and pick up Jeff then she blacked out.
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Help understanding drunken talk lol
[1]: open the door Rachel I know you're in there
[2]: Rachel baby it's just me I won't hurt you (yeah right)
[3]: come on don't make me knock the door down baby
[4]: I won't I promise