Here's another!
i would really like some feed back on this one please!
thump
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there's the beat of his heart
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thump
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there's the song that his soul sings
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thump
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there's the strength of his will keeping him alive
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_-_-_ thump
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but what if
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_-_-_-thump-
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that will reaches its limit
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_-_-_-_ thump-
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what if that song dosn't have an encore to sing
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what if that heart is too weak to beat any more
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_-_-_-_-thump-_-_-_-_-_-_-
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what keeps him alive
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what helps him go on
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_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_ thump-_-_-_-_-_-
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the will of his family and friends
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the will of the town he protects
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_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_- thump- _-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-
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the will of the people that he puts his life and will to protect
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but will it be enough
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_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_- thump-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-
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or will it be all for
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_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_- thump_-_-_-_-
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just a flat red line
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_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_- BEEEEEEEEEEEPPPPPPPPPPP!
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You decide
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ok this is my first try at an angst poem
so don't hurt me!
please review!