Just Wanted to start off by saying this is the first story that I actually wanted to write and it may not be the best but I would appreciate some constructive criticism
Wind blew onto the hot sand blowing sand into Jason's face good thing he had brought that bandana he had heard that Samarra would be very sandy he continued to walk towards the small desert town here his whole life would change. Jason didn't know all the details about what was going on in his life but what he did know was that his mother and father were murdered when he was 6 that's when he was recruited to a secret branch of special forces to be experimented on. That was 8 years ago now he had training and a rating in every weapon that fired anything or held an edge. The reason he was here now is there was an experiment that would supposedly turn him, a skinny black haired sickly looking child, into a super soldier. He put a hand through his jet black hair in an attempt to get rid of some of the sand. Jason walked up to the building and knocked twice paused and then twice again, the door opened and he was pulled inside. Inside the old building there was a machine and about 10 scientists or maybe they were doctors Jason didn't know an older man with a scraggly beard came up to him Jason smiled this was the man that had recruited him and became his surrogate dad Dr. Elias Wayne he had built the machine and the super juice as Jason liked to call it that would make him better.
"Name?" Wayne said
"You don't know my name?" I mockingly replied he laughs
"Of course I do Jason it's for the paperwork."
"Ok Jason, Jason Todd." I reply. An assistant approaches Wayne
"Ok doctor we're ready for him" he turns back to me
"Ok are you ready Jason." I reply with confidence
"Yes" I step into the machine
"There is no turning back now" I say. Pain that's all I felt for what i thought was hours when in reality it was only 30 seconds. I screamed
"Turn it off!" I heard Wayne say
"No" I shouted through gritted teeth
"Leave it on I need this" I felt my body grow bigger muscles that I wasn't used to feeling i was definitely was taller than before it had worked. Wayne's machine hissed open with a loud swish I fell out and said one thing
"Where can I get a bagel?" then I blacked out.
