Hiya!
This a new story, or not, depending on what time frame you're reading this.
Oh, well.
This is the first chapter, so enjoy!
The noise of the crackle-pop, was comforting to some – usually. But not this time.
It was different this time.
Today was the day a great hero must fall.
Will fall.
Has fallen.
All crowded at the sight, the magnificent sight.
Of flames.
Jay Walker was your average guy, acted tough, but was sweet inside. Joked things off, but was still scarred.
Never did he think he would become a ninja.
Never had he thought he would become ill.
Mentally ill.
The smell wafted through the air, the smell of smoke.
The pungent fog blocked the view before anyone.
All smelt fire, smoke. They felt the heat from the flames, all but two.
One felt the flames, burning off the limbs and peeling off the skin. He smelt death arriving all too late. For the mercy of having it over with was gone, his time had come.
The other felt the sweat dripping down their back, the tears rolling down his still existent cheek, the sorrow of a broken man. All he smelt was burning flesh and the tears he was trying to sniffle back up his nose.
All smelt fire, smoke. They felt the heat from the flames, all but one.
For the other, it was too late.
It was over.
The fire was extinguished, but Zane Julien was already gone.
So… is it good?
Did you hate it?
Did you like or dislike the way I wrote it, I was trying something new. So please tell me below!