Thoughts "who are you?"
Kyuubi "hello fleshbag!"
Yelling/jutsu who are you!
I don't own anything if I did Naruto would have been badass!
A man was walking toward the village hidden in the leaves (A.K.A Konoha) the guy was wearing a black suit with a blood red shirt underneath with gold cufs at the end of the shirt with black pants and a pair of black shoes. He had on a tie with the kanji for killer on the front of it. He had tan skin with white hair he had on shades but if he took them off you would see yellow slitted eyes like a cats. All in all he was an intimidating figure
This man was the CEO of deathwatch he was called Eric Night
After getting passed the security gate at the front of the village he was heading towards the hokage tower he was heading there to discuss future business with the hokage. Also to see if they could host the games there in 4 years.
He had just made it to the tower when he saw a child no older than if he had to guess 7 the child was running he had a mob chasing after him. Eric wanted to know what the hell that was about so he ran after the mob.
Naruto point of view
Naruto was not having a good day he had just failed the genin exam he was sad and angry that he couldn't perform the stupid clone jutsu.
He was heading home which was a shitty apartment in the red light district as he was walking up the stairs to his apartment there was the words "demon" and "monster" and "killer" written on the walls with graffiti.
It used to have a door but someone broke in once to try and kill him and since he didn't have much to any money at all he couldn't buy a new one so there was nothing stopping someone from getting in his apartment. He was so focused on what happened today that he bumped into a drunk villager and fell on his ass.
The villager was going to help the kid up an ask if he was okay and tell the kid it was fine until he noticed it was Naruto he then got an evil glint in his eye the drunk then started yelling that "the demon is attacking me!"
Shortly after the man started to yell a mob formed and started to chase him. He saw the mob coming at him and he ran for his life.
He kept on running trying to get to the hokage tower as it was where he would be safe from the villagers. But at the last minute he took a wrong turn and ended up in a dead end alley he turned around to see if he could still escape but the mob blocked off the entrance of the alley two chunin held him down while the rest of the mob started to stab him with shurikan, broken bottles, kunai and anything else they could grab.
During this naruto was crying and begging for them to stop he then yelled the question that had troubled him for years "why, why are you doing this to me? What have I done to you?"
When he said that one of the chunin who was holding Naruto down started to laugh after he stopped laughing he looked naruto right in the eye "well since were about to kill you I will tell you demon spawn why.
You see 9 years ago the village was attacked by the nine tailed demon fox it would have destroyed the village but the fourth hokage used the reaper death seal to seal the demon into a child so you see were going to kill you because you were that child you see you are the nine tailed demon fox!"
When he said that Naruto froze he couldn't believe he was the nine tailed fox but then thought about it and figured there was no way he was the fox. If he was he would have just killed everyone that hurt him.
The chunin then tried to plunge a kunai at Naruto's heart tried being the word the area was soon filled with killer intent so strong even the third hokage at the tower felt it.
The chunin in the alley were sweating and on their knees. A fresh genin was finally able to look at the end of the alley seeing a man at the end of the alley looking at them with such hatred and rage that he looked like he was the shinigami himself.
Eric two minutes ago
Eric had followed the mob and had just entered the alley when he saw them stabbing and beating the kid that pissed him off but when he saw a chunin about to kill the kid needless to say he was beyond pissed how dare these bastards try to kill a child he flared his killer intent and glared at them with enough hatred that if looks could kill all these people would be with the shinigami. "WHAT THE FUCK DO YOU THINK YOU ARE DOING TO THAT KID?"
The mob tried to answer him but the killer intent was so strong none of them could get up a civilian was finally able to get up he turned to Eric and yelled "WE ARE GOING TO KILL THE DEMON!"(dumbass).
When the retarded civilian yelled that Eric was instantly in front of the man and he right then and there shoved his hand through the man's chest ripped out the guy's heart the crushed it in his hand right in front of everyone needless to say this scared the shit out of everyone
The man then said in a voice that could freeze hell itself "are you all fucking stupid? if this kid was a demon he would have killed you all but he didn't did he?" He then continue this time yelling "for trying to kill this kid I'm going to kill you all!."
In an instant one civilian was cut in half the next Eric was in front of another civilian and cut the bastards head off the blood flew from his neck like a bloody fountain.
He turned around and he stabbed the new genin in the throat and the final civilian he cut his stomach open and ripped out his organs from his stomach.
When one of the chunin could finally move he threw a shurikan at Eric who to the shock of everyone left alive in that alley simply caught the shurikan with his bare hands and threw it and a knife he had in his shoe at the chunin.
The chunin was able to dodge the shurikan but he wasn't fast enough to dodge the knife which got lodged into his head killing him instantly.
The other chunin tried to run but right then did Sarutobi the third hokage of the Konoha appear with his most trusted anbu behind him.
The chunin then ran to the hokage and quickly bowed to him and said "lord hokage this man just killed all of these people."
Sarutobi looked at the carnage on the outside his face was made of stone he showed no emotions but on the inside he was shocked that one guy could to all of this and with such brutality he then noticed a bloody Naruto on the ground.
He then looked at the chunin narrowed his eyes and asked in a eerily calm voice "what were you and all of these people doing here with Naruto?"
The chunin missed the voice in his head to shut up he just sneered and said "we were going to avenge the yondaime(A.K.A the fourth hokage) and kill the demon, lord hokage help me kill the d-" before he could finish the hokage had pierced the chunin's face with a kunai killing him instantly.
He then looked towards Naruto and he saw the man walking towards Naruto fearing the worst he started to run towards Naruto.
Eric point of view
Eric saw the kid on the ground an was worried he noticed his orange jumpsuit (it burns) was shredded and he saw that his body was littered with scars and bruises. This shocked him "this kid has more scars then most people who participate in the games".
When he saw this he was even more pissed off at the villagers but he needed to calm down and see how the kid was
He knelt down to Naruto's eye level and asked "are you okay kid?"
Naruto was looking at him with both fear and awe.
But after getting over the shock of seeing him kill all those people he answered "y-yes thank you sir."
Eric looked at the kid as he dubbed him with surprise most people after seeing him killing people would beg him to not to kill them and to spare them but instead the kid was thanking him.
This got Eric curious there were not that many kids that had that much spine.
He then asked "kid what's your name?" Naruto looked at him and answered striking a mighty guy pose with his fist in the air and yelled "my name is Naruto Uzumaki and I will be the next hokage".
He yelled this with such conviction that anyone who heard him would instantly believe that he could do it. When Sarutobi and his most trusted anbu heard this they all thought "Naruto you won't ever give up on your dream will you? No matter what people do to you u just get right back up and strive forward".
Sarutobi was proud of Naruto no matter what happened him Naruto would never give up his dream.
When Eric heard Naruto's conviction and saw in the kid's eyes with such determination which to him meant that he would never give up. He was even more impressed not many people had that much determination in their dreams.
He then smiled and shook his hand and said "Nice to meet you Naruto my name is Eric Night" with that he picked up Naruto and put him on his shoulder and walked towards Sarutobi.
When Eric was in front of Sarutobi the old man shocked everyone by bowing slightly and then said "thank you for saving Naruto".
Eric smiled "it was my pleasure".
After that his smiled disappeared and his eyes got serious "now can you tell me why those bastards were trying to kill Naruto he doesn't look any older than 8". At that Naruto got angry and yelled: hey I am not 9 I am 11 years old.
When Eric heard this he was horrified a nine year old boy should have more muscle on them instead Naruto was skinny as a twig.
Eric turned to the hokage and said "sir we need to talk about Naruto now." At the end of that sentence everyone could feel the finality at the end of that sentence.
Sarutobi sighed and said "I will tell you about Naruto in my office".
With that Sarutobi grabbed Eric and Naruto and shunshined (if this is wrong tell me I couldn't find the frickin name for that technique) them all to his office.
When they got to Sarutobi's office Sarutobi did some hand seals and the room glowed for a second then stopped.
When he saw Eric stare He then said "that will make sure no one is able to hear what is about to be said in here".
Eric looked satisfying he was about to ask The hokage his questions when Naruto beat him to it and asked the million dollar question hey jiji am I the nine tailed fox?
Eric was confused when he said that but Sarutobi paled and asked "Naruto who told you that?"
Naruto answered "before one of the chunin in the mob was about to kill me he said I was the nine tailed fox".
Sarutobi then sighed and his shouldered sagged his body and voice showed his age he then said "no Naruto you are not the nine tailed fox you are just the container of the fox you are Naruto Uzumaki."
When Sarutobi said that Naruto smiled not one of those fake smile's he puts on to protect himself but a real smile.
After the smile Eric asked "Naruto what has your life been like here?"
After that was said Naruto's face darkened which surprised Eric.
For the next hour he told Eric how he went to an orphanage where they barely feed him and made sure most of the kids bullied him. He then said that he was kicked out at the age of went on to say that at the age of 6 he was tied to a tree and burned at the age of 7 he was used as a target dummy for kunai and shurikan practice then at the age of 8 he was skinned alive.
At the end of his tale Naruto was crying.
Sarutobi looked at Naruto with pity and sadness in his eyes he thought oh Minato has the village really fallen this far to send a child to live a life of hell on earth.
And Eric for the first time in his killing career actually shed tears and then after the sadness was gone he was GRADE. A. PISSED.
You see even too killers, murders, and serial killers children were pure they were about the only pure innocence in the world and they should never ever be hurt or tortured.
At this Eric slowly turned to the hokage and asked "hokage may I ask a favor?" He said this in a whisper Sarutobi and Naruto were barely able to hear him.
Sarutobi asked "what is the request?"
What Eric said next shocked both Sarutobi and Naruto
"I would like to adopt Naruto" Eric asked
At that Naruto got tears in his eyes and he asked "do you really want to adopt me?"
Eric knelt down to Naruto's eye level and said "of course" when he said that Naruto ran up to Eric and hugged him while he was saying "thank you, thank you, thank you" over and over again.
Sarutobi was happy that this man was going to adopt Naruto he wanted Naruto to have a good life.
Sarutobi then pulled out his pipe put some tobacco in it lit it and inhaled some of it and blew a cloud of smoke he then said "I will let you adopt Naruto, but it's his dream to become hokage so will you bring him back in 6 years to complete the genin exam".
Eric said "of course he will be back in six years you will see a changed Naruto".
Sarutobi then remembered that Eric was here on business.
Sarutobi then asked "oh buy the way what was the business you were here for?"
At that Eric then remembered the original reason he was here "oh yes I was here to discuss if you will let death watch have our game hear during the chunin exams in six and a half years".
Sarutobi then asked "what is the game you will be making?"
Eric said "it will be like your chunin exams, except there will only be one winner and the winner of each match decides if the loser lives or dies" he paused for a brief moment to let that information sink in He then continued on.
"We will have death signing (don't know what the hell its called) so that we won't have people blame us for their deaths. And at the end of it all there will be a grand spectacle of the challenger vs the champion of course the champion will be able to go around and fighting competitors".
Sarutobi considered this and couldn't find anything wrong with that he then said "very well you may hold the death watch games in 6 and a half years from now".
With that Eric said "thank you well I will take Naruto and we will see you in six years".
Naruto turned to Sarutobi he then smiled and said "see you in six years jiji".
With that Eric grabbed Naruto put him on his shoulder and left the hokages office.
Eric and Naruto were almost at the gate when Eric suddenly asked "hey Naruto do you have anything you need to get at your apartment".
Naruto looked downcast and said with a voice full of sadness "no everything I had was stolen yesterday".
When Eric heard that he was angry and was just hoping one of the villagers would just say something bad about Naruto or even attempt to hurt Naruto just so he could destroy the village but when Naruto looked at him with a worried expression his anger slimmed down and after a couple of minutes he finally calmed down.
Eric looked at Naruto and said "you ready to leave"
Naruto smiled at him and said "yes when I come back I will be strong enough to protect those precious to me and become the hokage" he said this with fire in his eyes
Once again Eric was impressed he saw the fire in his eyes and thought "so this is the will of fire this village is famous for".
With that Naruto and Eric left Konoha not to be seen for six years.
Chapter end
That's all tell me what you think what's wrong and what's right with it.
Jiji= old man