Hey everyone this is my first fanfic and i hope it's good
I don't own the Twilight characters Stephenie Meyer does I just wish I did
EPOV
It was Christmas break and everyone was home except Carlisle who had gotten snowed in at the hospital so it was just me, Alice, Jasper, Emmett, Rosalie, and Esme. We were watching the snowboarding finals on ESPN when I read Emmett's mind immediately I said "Emmett no" and i thought this is gonna be a bad idea then i saw Alice's eyes turn glassy which meant she was having a vision, a few seconds later i read her mind again and she said "we have to take Emmett's side this time" "Why?" i wondered all Emmett ever caused was trouble so it didn't make sense that we take his side. It seems Emmett had noticed me and Alice were having a conversation because he didn't start his argument still. I asked Alice again "why do we have to agree to Emmett's idea?" She simply replied "Trust me" and i gave up trying to get an explanation from her. Finally Emmett said "Everybody why don't we go outside and get some exercise maybe go hunting a bit" Esme said "Emmett you know that's a bad idea humans would probably see us if were not careful." Emmett then said "but Esme everyone is snowed in nobody will see us" Alice then decided to help Emmett convince Esme "Esme Emmett's right its not like if were going to start running in the middle of forks." Esme seemed convinced of Emmett's idea with Alice's backing it up so she agreed. I started getting worried since i read Rosalie's mind, 'it does sound like a good idea and nobody would see us, I'm in.' Jasper was thinking, 'It's been some time since we have could have some fun without having to worry about breaking the house' I had to admit Jasper was right usually if we followed one of Emmett's ideas something bad happened to the house and now Emmett was suggesting we go somewhere else so it was a somewhat good idea, but i was still worried about why Alice hadn't told me what the vision was and she was blocking her mind by singing 'oh I'm a gummy bear yes I'm a gummy bear' Argh! she knew how much i hated that song! So i stopped reading her mind. Jasper sensed i was feeling mad so he sent a wave of calm my way. I instantly felt calm and i nodded thanks to Jasper. Then i heard Esme saying "Alright everyone let's go everyone" When she saw me hesitating she came and said "Aren't you coming Edward?" "Yea I'm coming" and we left running.
Outside Emmett asked Alice "Where do we go Alice?" Alice said "I know the perfect place and she took off running. She led us to a big clearing that had a small lake a waterfall. Everyone got there in a few seconds and Emmett was calling everyone to where he was, the top of the frozen waterfall. Everyone climbed the waterfall and Emmett said "alright everyone what should our fist contest be?" I read everyone mind Esme:whatever gets chosen, Alice:a race,Jasper:jumping from the waterfall or something,Rosalie:something fun Emmett:a super awesome race in which we jump from the waterfall climb that pine tree over there jump down from the tree and ooh we make the biggest splash ever in the lake. Then i said "i know lets do a race in which we jump from the waterfall make the biggest splash we can run all the way to that big pine tree over there climb it and jump down from it. First person to do that wins OK everyone?" "OK" everyone said
And so everyone started getting ready to jump and then Esme who was going to be the judge ran to the finish spot and said "ready, set, go!" everyone jumped at the same time but Alice landed first then me, jasper with Rosalie close behind with Emmett last. I quickly climbed out i was all wet but i didn't care i just started running toward the tree and jumped. I landed about 1/3 of the way up the tree and quickly got to the top with Alice and Rosalie close behind. I jumped off the top of the tree and landed next to Esme who said "Edward wins!" I had won everyone by at least thirty seconds so i sat down next to a tree to wait for everyone to finish the race. Then i saw something blue in the snow. I stood up and turned to see what it was. I moved some of the snow and saw it was a girl with long dark brown hair a red sweater and blue jeans. i wondered what she was doing here with no warm clothes and just covered with a thin blue blanket i had seen. i tried to wake her but i saw she was unconscious and she was freezing cold, i took my sweater off but then i realized it was wet and it would just make her colder so i put it back on. By then everyone was done and they were looking for me and yelling "Edward get over here were not playing hide and seek!! Edward come out" So i called them "hey everyone come over here hurry up!" they were there in two seconds, and i said look i found a girl here in the snow. Esme said "oh my we have to take her home or she could die out here. Come on everyone, Edward you wouldn't mind carrying her would you?" "no" i said and picked her up,and ran home.
So what did you think? Please review i need suggestions to improve my writing =]