This story was a thing I had to do for my English class hope you like it, and i welcome suggestions on how to make it better, and if you must criticise please do it nicely.
Just a Dream
By: Shadowfang
I couldn't stop thinking of him, with his long soft chestnut hair, and he glorious smell of his cologne. I wish I could make the guy disappear from my mind. It's kind of funny, I want something out of m mind, and my mind does the complete opposite, it decides that the thing is the most fascinating thing in the world; it makes you think who is in charge anyways? I run a hand through my smooth straight hair, which is a first.
There I go again, thinking of That guy, the guy with the soft touch, the guy that held me in his strong arms making me feel like everything in this messed up world will be alright, as long as we are together. I truly believed that this nameless guy was my one and only, my met to be, my true love, that would be nice wouldn't it? But of course Life isn't kind, as I'm looking up at him, staring at his black sports jacket, I feel a smile coming on, when I see the muscles in his arms.
The Jacket is open and I reach for the Black silk tie that was hanging loosely around his neck. I finger the smooth material; I notice how the tie is a strong contrast when lying on the guy's crisp white t-shirt. Smile widens when I notice that he's wearing black converse, my favorite type of shoes. I nod liking his slightly baggy dark blue jeans. I will miss his dazzling smile, his slightly crooked pearl white teeth. Along with his soft lips agenst mine, it felt like nothing I ever felt before, it felt like we know that we love each other and the soft tender kiss proved it.
But what I would miss the most about that stranger is how important he makes me feel. Feeling as if I am not alone in this world, like I don't have to try as hard when he's hear with me, I never felt that way before. I miss it. But knowing this cruel world I know that none of the above can ever happen again. Know matter how much I wish with all my heart that it was. The last thing I remember about the nameless lover , was his soft tan hands holding mine, and his beautiful yet clearly masculine voice telling me this even though I know it hurt him to say , and it hurt me so much to hear that cruel sentence that took my love from me"This is goodbye, for one last time".
I sigh lifting my head of the desk, my iPod singing to me, the song "Untitled" BY simple plan is mocking me. I groan yanking out my ear plugs, simple plan can be so cruel I thought. I stood up, my chair screeching agenst the ground. I head out back to the hallways, my head down, eyes fixed on my converse, a distant look is on my face, and I can scarcely hear the other students around me. I'm feeling sad, and I guess it's mainly my fault I'm feeling that way after all, only I can think of this, "Man it sucks that the one person that I know I'm meant to be with is not even real...I guess that's my life, things always seem to good to be true." I stop walking and smile slightly, I had a realization, What if My dream guy is part of me, he's inside of me, and I know that, and sense I know that, I am positive I can get through anything, as long as I know that I have that nameless guy by my side, even though my eyes are the only one that can see him.
(this story will change, maybe into a full story)