Hey only my second story no flames please but if you want to ask me things or suggest things then just tell me well here goes.
A boy in a black tight fitting trench coat and loose black pants with a Flameberge on his left side, he also had a black mask over his face. His hair was blonde at the roots which fades into red and then black at the tips. This boys hair was somewhat long just past his shoulders and oddly strait. His bangs cover his eyes so nobody can see them. He had a black undershirt on also.
This boy was walking into a village were he could make a living and possably find out of his parents when he got stopped by the gaurds. He showed them the papers he got from his father figure before he left his old home. The gaurd looked at him quizically then opened the gates for him to enter. He was going directly to the hokage tower to talk to some old man so he could get into the ninja academy final test for genin. As he entered he showed the ANBU a note and they let him in while on their toes. The boy smirked sensing they were alert of him. As he walked in the office he took a seat across from a desk and waited quietly.
"Hello how may I help you young man?" Asked a very old looking man that sat in a chair across from the boy.
"I am here to enter the test to become a genin of this village I have a note you might want to see." The boy said coldly as he handed the man a piece of paper from his pocket.
"Hmmm yes ok well then you might want to get to the academy today because tommorow is the tests and we need to determine your skills." Said the old man.
The boy nodded and left the room to head for the academy to get tested. As he walked through the town he smirked as everyone looked at him and backing up a little bit out of fear. Soon he made it to the academy and walked into a room the hokage told him to. When he entered he could just tell all eyes were on him, he walked up to the teacher and gave him the note. He noticed some girls were drooling over him while others were backing up.
"Very well we were about to go training anyway, ok class were going outside to determine your skills again. I know we did this at the begining of the year but we need to do it again." He heard the class groan but continued. "First we need to introduce ourselves, so we'll go along the rows." He pointed to the first person to go.
(A/N not in any order)
"I am Aburame Shino I like to collect bugs. I dislike seeing people try to kill any kind of bug in front of me. And my hobbie to collect and research new bugs."
"Ok a freak..." The new boy mummbled.
"I am Akimichi Choji. munch munch munch And I like food and any I can get. I dislike people who harass my friends and family. My hobbies are eating. munch munch munch"
"...a fatty..."
"I am Haruno Sakura and I like." Glances at Sasuke. "Him. I hate Ino-pig. And my hobbies are..." Looks at Sasuke again.
"...a fangirl..."
"I a-am Hyuga Hinata and I l-like t-to t-train a-a-and be with m-my f-f-friends. I dislike f-fighting. A-a-and my h-h-hobbies are trying t-to impress m-my father."
"...um ok shes cute but shy..."
"DUDE im Inzuka Kiba I like to play with akamaru and train. I dislike people hurting dogs at all.And my hobbies are messing around with my friends and playing with akamaru."
"...maniac..."
"Im Nara Shikamaru and I like sleeping. I hate things that are troublesome. And my hobbies are watching clouds."
"...a lazy ass..."
"I am Yamanaka Ino and I like." Glances at Sasuke. "Him. I hate Fore-head-girl. And my hobbies are..." Looks at Sasuke again.
"...another fangirl..."
"I am Uchiha Sasuke and I like to train. I dislike no hate a certain person. My hobbie is to train so I can kill that person."
"...great a brooder..."
"Ok well my first impression is a bug loving freak (points to shino) a chubby boy that hates people calling him fat (points to choji) a stuck up fan girl (points to sakura) a shy cutey that thinks shes weak but shes not (points to hinata and she blushes) a maniac, dog loving freak (points to kiba) a lazy kid ( points to shikamaru) another fan girl thats not stuck up (points to ino) and lastly a brooding avenger that will die seeking power to kill his brother and fails. (points to sasuke)"
"Well I am Naruto I like training and some ramen. I dislike almost all people that get in my way. And my hobbies...are none of your concern."
After he said this all of the kids he insulted glared at him, Hinata was blushing and about to faint, and sakura was yelling her head off.
"Ummm ok well then class lets go outside to test everyones skills." He led them outside and everyone lined up. "Ok first a shuriken test Naruto since your new you go first."
"If I may can i use the more advanced shuriken test this one is... too easy." He asked before doing anything at all.
"Well um if you want to do that then you'll have to wait until everyone else is done here and then we can try that but first do this test ok.?" Naruto complied and nobody saw him even get his shuriken he just flicked his wrist and instantly all the targets were hit bullseye.
"I told you too easy." Naruto said walking over to a tree away from the targets and sitting down. Everyone did average and Sasuke did second best after Naruto.
"Ok now to the more advanced field shall we. And Naruto your going first." Naruto just got out some kunai. When they arrived nobody saw any targets.
Sakura was about to yell about no targets but Naruto butted in. " There are ten targets six on trees one on a rock one behind that rock one behind us and one ahead of us." Everyone looked at him like he was crazy and he smirked. "Watch Ill show you all." He said as he jumped into the air and threw eight kunai foreward and threw two more to break them up as they hit one kunai reflected perfectly back and wizzed by his head. Six kunai split of and hit the trees while one more kunai hit another which hit another and those two got the ones by the rock. The last kunai flew down and hit the last target all of them perfectly centered.
The group followed him as he got all his kunai and they all gawked at his abilities. Iruka was awed by his skills showing him that Naruto was number one rookie. After Naruto got all his kunai Sasuke tried to out do him and failed horrably he only hit one target. When they got back to the academy it was time for a sparring match and Sasuke was eager to fight Naruto.
"Fine if you want to humiliate yourself then Ill sparr with you Uchiha." Naruto replied as they got into a field and everyone was watching.
"Hey Naruto you cant beat Sasuke nobody can beat him hes the best!!!!" Sakura yelled as Sasuke smirked.
"What are you his girlfriend or something he doesnt look like he cares much about anything other than killing his brother so why bother. Whatever dont even say anything I wanna put this Uchiha in his place." Naruto stated as everyone looked at him quizically.
Naruto stood while Sasuke was charging. Naruto went for his flameberge only to throw it towards Hinata. "Watch this for me Hinata but dont touch it." She nodded as he crossed his arms waiting for Sasuke to hit him. Sasuke charged again and went for a right hook but only hit air he looked back and he was gone. Naruto jumped down from a tree and stood there waiting again. Sasuke charged and this time Naruto caught his punch and then his kick. Naruto laughed "If this is all you can do then dont even think about sparring with me." This enraged Sasuke and he jumped back and charged again this time Naruto was going to sparr and hit back. Naruto caught his kick again and flipped Sasuke kicking him in the chest. Sasuke flew about one hundred feet and threw 3 trees with that one kick. Everyone stared wide eyed at him. "Didnt even try hmph loser." He said as he walked over to Hinata and took his sword. "If its ok with you Iruka im going to go inside and sitting down." Iruka nodded dumbstruck at what happen. Naruto went inside and sat down knowing someone followed him inside. "I know your here just come out"
Hinata walked out of the hall and into the room. "I-I-Im s-sorry I-I-I j-just w-wanted t-to k-k-k-know how you g-got so s-s-strong" She stuttered out.
Naruto just looked on coldly and stated "I train A LOT and i dont stop training also I have other people help me train." Hinata took a seat by him and started twiddling her fingers. Soon everyone was comming back in and Sasuke was limping to his seat scolding. As the day past Narutos head wondered to the days event as he blocked out the teacher. 'First I met the hokage the leader of this whole village. Then I come here and see that every person here is rotten except for one and none of them can throw shuriken or kunai at all, their not skilled. And now I have to listen about the Kyuubi dieing by the Yondaime. Such a joke, I know all the jounin and chuunin also the hokage knew I was the container. Im tired of this lie Im leaving.' As Iruka was starting on how the side effects of what the Yondaime did killed him Naruto stood up.
"Yes Naruto what is it you do know that your supposed to raise your hand ." Iruka said as Naruto opened the door to the room and walked out then closed it as he did he whispered something that Iruka and the two closest people to the door heard.
"Iruka you know its bad to lie, even if its for the good of the village its still lieing."
"Umm class Ill be right back." Iruka said starting to walk out.
"Hey Iruka sensei what did Naruto mean by dont lie even if its for the good of the village." Kiba yelled so everyone heard him and Shikamaru got lost in thought about it.
"Huh oh um nothing Kiba Ill be right back." Iruka said walking out When he caught up with Naruto he was still wondering how this boy knew he was lieing. "Uh Naruto why did you leave and how did you know I was lieing?"
"Well thats easy Iruka Im the child that my father sealed the Kyuubi into. I found out a long time ago that I had the Kyuubi and the Kyuubi had explained what happen and why. It told me why I was chosen instead of someone else and it told me why I was kidnapped." Iruka was again awed that this boy Naruto knew all this about him already.
"Ok well do you want to tell the class all this then and maybe get hated or do you want them not to know, Naruto its up to you I cant tell them due to the law but you can."
"Why not maybe they'll hate me and I can be alone some more." Naruto stated as he bagan walking back to the classroom with Iruka right behind him.
"Class Naruto has something to say about the Kyuubi." Iruka stated.
"Why should we care what he has to say about the Kyuubi its not like he knows anything about it!" Yelled Sakura.
Suddenly Naruto was next to her nobody even saw him move. "Look pinky I know more about the Kyuubi then you ever could, so dont even try talking like you know anything at all." Naruto said with venom in his voice. "Even if I show I dont think youll understand noone understands." He said a little sad this time.
"W-what do you mean if you showed me." Sakura asks
"If you mist be curious Ill show you." He walks back to the front of the class.
"No you fool theyll all hate you dont do this again" Everyone heard it and the bloodlust of the words froze them in their tracks.
Naruto started to laugh at first soft then louder and louder. "Stupid fox you already disappeared only some thoughts can get threw the link." He said as he pulled off the trench coat. All the kids were taken aback and ANBU started to come in the room sensing something oddly familiar and the sondaime entered also. Naruto lifted his shirt and they say a scar of seal that looked very powerfull. "This is what you wont understand Sakura." He said. Everyone was awed by the scar it looked so complex.
"Hokage-sama what do you want to do?" One ANBU asked the hokage motioned for him to be still but on alert. One ANBU struggled out of his fellow ANBUs grip and charged until everyone felt a power bloodlust and killing intent sent at him, it was so much even the hokage couldnt move and within a mile radius was stopped in their tracks.
"Dont move ANBU Im not going to do anything and Im not the fox." Naruto stated. All the kids were staring with intrest and curiousity. "Now as I was saying you wont understand that the Kyuubi never died." Some kids looked quizically and Shikamaru went wide eyed. "Well Shikamaru figured it out. The Yondaime didnt kill the Kyuubi because he couldnt. All he did was seal it into a new born baby his own new born baby. He sealed it within me." Everyone was shocked,amazed,scared,and impressed. The student were all scared and shocked. The hokage and ANBU were amazed and impressed that he figured everything out so soon. "My lifes been a living hell even when I was here for those two years I was beaten and screamed at called the demon itself and I died at the least twice when I was two. When I was taken away into another village I was also beaten because word spread fast." He was now looking up and glazed over telling all of them what it was like before. All the KI and bloodlust werent focused on and everyone felt lighter and could breath easier. "After a while I was trained but all the beatings kept repeating themselves until I snapped and went insane. I killed a lot of villagers that day, the ones trying to take my life. After that I met someone that helped me suppress the demon until something happen." He put his shirt down and grabbed his trench coat and put it on. When he was walking back to his seat people swore they saw a tear leave his eye but they still hadnt seen his eyes so they couldnt tell.
The hokage and ANBU left after Naruto got his apartment and soon the class ended and Naruto walked out before people could talk to him more or try to beat him up.